凡人修仙之随身空间

The writing is not bad, even though the cultivation level has been improved, the orb space has not been upgraded. At least the number of spiritual springs should be increased.

It's very beautiful. The pig's feet are affectionate and meaningful. After becoming a fairy, he went home to stay with his parents for two years. The language is concise and not verbose. I think the score should be more than 9.2 Points to be reasonable.

Very nice and very much to my taste! Cultivation novels should not write about love and love. Use space to raise two spiritual pets and explore the world of cultivation together. You can learn from the cultivation part of the second half of Seven Stars in the Palm of the End Times! This article so far is very interesting. Must recommend.

I have been a bookworm for ten years, and I can say that this book is really well written. It is rich in content, unique, and a very alternative novel about cultivating immortals. The author is really attentive. The first few chapters seem bland, but the following chapters are like ladders that rise step by step. It is particularly attractive, and the conception and details are really in place. This book is very detailed, with images, skills, and many aspects very good. Not only the protagonist is written, but the supporting characters are also well written. I believe that no one who is a bookworm can say that it is not good-looking.

It's a very traditional fairy tale novel, but I still jumped into it without hesitation. The story in the early stage is relatively light, but he gradually emerges after joining the apprenticeship. It's still the same recipe, and it still has the same taste. Give a wave of support, come on the author! Keep updated daily.

This book is very well written. It's not overly exaggerated, it's suitable for normal people to read and praise

It's okay to write in a novel about cultivating immortals. Now I'm reading Chapter 23. The protagonist practices in space faster than in the outside world, but whether his lifespan will pass or remain the same. The author didn't say that he hopes to add more to avoid unnecessary trouble. Also, places that sell spiritual herbs don't actually need to sell so much at once. A few thousand will be enough. Anyway, there won't be a shortage in the future. There are only two places in front of me that are a bit flawed, so please give it a try.

There are 61 chapters so far, and it is worth reading. Five-star praise🌹With the love of family, friends, teachers, etc. The male protagonist has an above-average IQ and cannot walk without seeing a woman.

Hurry up and update, just 5 chapters a day, otherwise other platforms will think we are even more unworthy, hurry up, hurry up

I have read about 550 chapters, and the plot is relatively smooth, but there is a bit less from the sea area, and there are less forces. There is only a large group of casual cultivators. I feel that the hunting later is a bit unsmooth. In addition, there is a foreshadowing in the front that the opposite of the teleportation array is a magic gate, but it is not mentioned much in many subsequent chapters, and the plot progresses slowly. Finally, I hope the author won't write a messy and unfinished story.

The article is fluent and the plot is wonderful, keep up the hard work

It's a rare and harmonious fairy tale, especially one that doesn't include blind ridicule and self-talk to attract hatred. I like it better. It is recommended to appropriately add tasks, encounters, or battles to slay demons and defend the way. This will not only help the male pig improve his strength, show his chivalry, but also enliven the atmosphere of the chapter. However, it is important to avoid sloppy analysis of combat skills and descriptions of the characters' psychological activities. Don't write three episodes of one battle, haha~. More, more, more importantly, please keep updating~

It's pretty good to watch, but the pace is too slow, and the parts describing the protagonist's image are too frequent.

Hahaha, I finished reading it unexpectedly. The author opened the gate and released the words. It's very interesting. I like it.

This is the novel about cultivating immortals that I have read most carefully.

It's a very nice novel, and the article is very well written. It's pure cultivation writing, and the more I read it, the more I enjoy it. Waiting for the update [laughs], recommend friends to read, the author, please give it a try!

It's not bad. The protagonist hasn't encountered so many bad things. Unlike some novels, the protagonist either enters the sect and is hated by others or is hunted down. I like this kind of ordinary daily life of farming and cultivating immortals very much [shy]

It's a good start, I hope I can stick with it and don't make the five-star people miserable.

This book is well written, but the update is too slow, the Orb Space has not been upgraded, and the spring water is still a bit weak. I give this book five ⭐ praises and hope to continue to write exciting content. Please click 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Not bad, everything should be there, five stars for encouragement

It's really good-looking, but it's a pity that the protagonist's sister didn't embark on the path to immortality.

All I can say at this point is that this book is wonderful! Push

Five stars, wonderful, I like the practice process of Qi training, foundation building, and elixir formation.

I hope the author can write faster. It's not good enough, it's too pretty.

It's good and beautiful. I enjoyed watching it for a while. I hope the author will continue to do so.

Big cheers for the author! Nice novel

This is a subject I like very much. I hope the author will stick to it and update it more often.

It's a bit late to recommend comments now, and I can hardly remember the content, but it's not bad if I can stick to reading half of it. It should be better than before, where I skipped through the front and almost knew the mundane content behind.,

This book is so beautiful. Why is the last one still under review? I have been waiting for several hours and it is still under review. [Almost crying][crying]

The first three hundred chapters are very interesting! But I don't know if it will look good in the back, I hope it does! It's fine if it's mainly not sleazy. I like to watch movies with less fighting and more plots, especially treasure plots. . . . Everyone, don't read this novel! Why do you have the nerve to write 2 chapters a day? I wrote 12 chapters about an auction, 3 chapters about shooting a puppet, and more than a hundred chapters about entering a secret realm! The first 300 chapters are OK, but the later chapters get worse! If you don't know how to write, just forget about the ending.