After Rebirth, I Made the Ascetic Immortal Lord Cry

This book is a sweet story about strong women where the male and female protagonists love each other. Welcome to the pit! There is no misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists throughout the whole process, and the male protagonist is an expert at spotting whores and is clean and self-sufficient. Although this book has a predecessor, it does not affect the reading at all if you don't read the predecessor. You can enter the trap with peace of mind! [Sending Hearts] If you have any suggestions, you can also make them. The author is very talkative. There are no perfect people in the world, and there are no perfect works. If you feel that this book is not to your taste, don't leave a negative review at will. Just look at other books that suit your taste~ It is not easy to write free novels, and I am honored to be seen by you. I hope to accompany you on a wonderful journey. [Love][love][love]

Qin Ruochen VS Gongyi Xiu [Requesting for more explosive updates] "All the disciples I raised want to be on top" → "After rebirth, I made the Ascetic Immortal Cry to tears" [Requesting for explosive updates] [Mountains and seas come to a dream] 🎶The cold and foggy night sky covers your eyes My mind searches for your vague figure It's hard to reach the palm of my hand that I want to hold tightly Can't catch the dream about you This familiar feeling rises with the wind The raindrops kept falling across the tears Can I meet you after a long sleep? Come and meet you in my dreams Memories span mountains and seas, you can dream about them If we embrace Penglai, this love will bloom If you never wake up, the ending will change I would rather fall into the sea of dreams This familiar feeling rises with the wind The raindrops kept falling across the tears Can I meet you after a long sleep? Come and meet you in my dreams Memories span mountains and seas, you can dream about them If we embrace Penglai, this love will bloom If you never wake up, the ending will change I would rather fall into the sea of dreams Memories span mountains and seas, you can dream about them If we embrace Penglai, this love will bloom If you never wake up, the ending will change I would rather fall into the sea of dreams🎶

I watched the previous one and it was very good, but it was too sadistic and I felt sorry for the heroine. But I thought the next part would continue, for example, the heroine is some kind of emperor of the underworld, but she was reborn, and I don't know if the second male lead from the previous part will appear again. Will the fiancé still be the male protagonist? Or will there be a new male protagonist? I hope I won't abuse him anymore. I'm looking forward to it. Big cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes] It would be better to watch the first part first and then this one. Although Lin Qingqian is the reincarnation of Gongyixiu, it still hurts to see him gone.

Ok, I've finished it. I started from the top and finished it completely. I really like Ash. When I watched the first part, I felt particularly sorry for him. I also liked Ash the most. After the first part was finished, I took a few days to see if there was an update for the next part. No, I finished the second part today.

When I first started reading it, I thought it was a retitled book from the one I had read before, but I felt that except for the names of the characters and the plot, it didn't match up, and I was a bit confused... As I continued reading, I found out that it was an extension of the book I had read before, but the previous book did have a lot of regrets, and the ending was also very disappointing. This book is based on the ending of the previous book, where the heroine is reborn until everything has not happened, and the heroine saves everything with her memories before rebirth, and prevents her father's conspiracy. The ending is not bad [Like] [Like] [Like]

4.0 Stars ⭐, I fell in love with the author's first part, but I didn't expect that the second part was written like this. I felt that the ending was too hasty [thinking] and I didn't watch enough [I was about to cry]. When I watched 92% of it, I really didn't expect the ending to be so direct (I feel like it can be written better later). How should I put it, it was full of twists and turns but very direct, and there were twists and turns but it didn't seem like there were any. It's a bit regretful that Lin Qingqian (although he is from the previous life, I feel it would be better if he merged with Asiu), this way it will be more complete. Nanzhu is also my personal favorite character, and this ending is OK. The structure and plot are fine, but every time it feels like a bad ending (the ending is not very well written), the characters created are very nice! Looking forward to much better works [sending my heart]

I'll just make up the numbers [shy] I really like Ruochen. Among the many books I have read, the author is the only one who can write about rebirth in the second book. Generally, he will directly write the story after rebirth, and will not write two books about the past and present lives [face covering] [It is not very good to write such a long review for the first time, because I like this book, so I want to try to express it clearly]

It's good to watch, but the ending is too fast. The trap between the tree spirit and Ye Nanzhu is not filled in. The identity of the male protagonist and his life story are not added. It cannot be introduced that he is the young master of the spirit tribe. He also brings out the elders of the spirit tribe but there is no follow-up. The author's storyline is good, but there is still no connection with the full text. Sex, so come on, I hope your writing will get better and better and more people will like it. The introduction is a simple introduction to a big article. I hope that the introduction and title will not go astray when you write next time. If you write around your theme content, this situation will not happen [smile][smirk][like]

What's the big deal about this book having such a low rating? ? ? The author's writing is good and fluent. The male and female protagonists are 1v1, and the male protagonist is arrogant and cute~ No misunderstanding. I think it should be above 9 points, which is better than many 9 points. I know why the rating is so low. The ending is too fast. Lin Qingqian appears at the end out of nowhere? I feel like the heroine is a scumbag. I don't know whether she likes Lin Qingqian or Gongyixiu.

Finished reading on 2023.3.22 14:55. The story is short and concise, leaving you with endless enjoyment. There should be more interactions between Qin Ruochen and Gong Yixiu. There is too little interaction between them for readers. Will Gongyixiu's emotional expression change after he is lost? Will he no longer be forbearing, no longer shy, but passionate?

It's pretty good-looking, but how can I put it, I feel sorry for Lin Qingqian [face covering]

The female protagonist is reborn and does not want to lose the male protagonist again, so she protects the male protagonist. The male protagonist does not dislike the female protagonist because she is ugly. He likes her when she does not take off her veil. The male protagonist and the female protagonist have gone through many hardships. The two of them are very happy together, look good, and fall in love with her! ! !

Highly recommended for everyone to watch! Super pretty! ! ! The first part of this book is also very good! Everyone is welcome to watch it together! [Blowing kiss]

It was still good to watch, but the ending was too quick. It would have been better to have a sequel!

The upper part is finished! Strong Amway, it's a good book~ Sisters, go for it! ! !

It's really super beautiful, support [adoration][adoration][love][love]

Very nice, highly recommended

Really a genius

It's so exciting, I cried so much

_(:з∠)_Beautiful. Want extra

It's pretty cool. Let's take a look.

It looks good, but there are still some holes that have not been filled in. Ended on 2023.4.11

I just finished reading this book and am still thinking about it. It's just that the ending was too early and I haven't come back to my senses yet. I would like to ask the author, what is Lin Qingqian's ending?

Super super super recommended

Very exciting, worth having

Well, well, well, well, take a good look

I didn't explain it clearly in the end. Mo Yu didn't even come out of the illusion.

? There are two holes left unfilled in this ending.

Where is Mo Yu's pit? What about the pit of chains? Where is the male protagonist's trap from the Spirit Tribe?

It's not bad, there are a few holes that haven't been filled in yet.