About the Fact That I Can Travel to the Future World of Death

It's good to watch, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist (mainly because this kind of thing is not easy to deal with emotional drama, and if you can't handle the emotional drama well, it will ruin this good book [laughter])

It looks good, with novel themes and a relatively complex system. There is no clichéd plot, but there are some typos. Overall, it is very good. Keep up the good work ^0＾~[Explore]

It's rare to see a book with such a grand worldview. I hope the author can write in detail. It can be seen that the author has many good ideas and concepts, and has read a lot of books. However, he can work harder on some descriptions (actions, environment, etc.) In the future. However, if it is on the platform of Tomato, creativity often wins, and language is not particularly important, but I still think that good language is extremely important. Another suggestion is how many promotion paths there are in the whole book. Is it similar to the Lord of Mysteries or does the author have his own creativity? I can't see clearly yet. It may be that the plot has not advanced to that point. I hope the author can make it clearer later. This is a good work, rarely seen on Tomato [Top post][Top post][Top post]

This novel is considered top-notch on Tomato. The writing is solid, the logic is clear and reasonable, the combat system is novel, and the depth of the water is 8.4. It is too fake. Even if this novel is just right for me in the urban superpower category, I think a score of more than 9 is not too high. It is not a brainless novel, and it truly embodies the genre of "superpower" rather than what category of superpower (actually it is a traditional training system such as urban immortality or magic). This novel is basically It satisfies my fantasy of superpowers, and there are conceptual systems, physical systems, and rules systems, and the threshold setting also cleverly resolves the upper and lower limits of the conceptual and rule systems. This novel definitely cannot be buried because of a score of 8.4. As for the main plot and other things, don't you always finish the branch plot in the main plot before playing the game (at least I do?) And the plot of this novel is destined to be cyclical and progressive, and it is only in the early stages. What's the rush? And the branch plots are also very exciting.

At a glance, this world view is really big. . It's the first time I've seen someone who can write down even the smallest branches of the worldview in great detail.

Great support for the author [Like], I personally think the content and story are very good. It seems that the author is laying the groundwork and there are still many maps that have not been unlocked. You can take your time and don't rush. The high-level combat power, bubbles or goats are best described from the side because these things are easy to collapse. I still want to say it here and put some information Bury your breath deeper. For details, you can refer to "People in the Kingdom of God, Newly Human Containers". The author of this book is very good, a little bit like Mr. Luo, but the ending feels a bit rushed, and the character relationships and power settings are thoroughly sorted out. Moreover, the author of this book is writing Cthulhu for the first time, so you can refer to it. Here I still want to ask the author, what is the protagonist's attitude towards the people around him and towards events, and in the author's world view, in my eyes, the protagonist has not completely given up on feelings. This is a good thing, but such a description is also difficult, so I want to know what position the protagonist gives to the author. Is he a bug struggling in the torrent of the times, and finally becomes an indomitable giant, a prominent conspirator, or a "pig's foot" that becomes a myth with the help of his own "ability" and "opportunity"?

It's very beautiful. I hope I don't need any more eunuchs.

I like the writing style of this book very much. It has a sense of recording. This book makes me feel very down-to-earth. I like it very much. After watching it, I fell in love with it. This is worth five stars! ! !

On top of everything, the writing, foreshadowing, and suspense are very good, and the protagonist's character is relatively stable. There is no idleness or awkwardness. There is no trace of the heroine for the time being, and there is no ambiguous relationship: But it is not considered fairy grass. Sometimes the plot advances too fast, and the male protagonist's strength increases too fast. I hope the author can bear with it in the future. There are also large sections of settings and the introduction of settings from other works. These settings look very tiring. Most of them will not affect the reading if you don't read them, but sometimes they are very important to the plot. The author's way of explaining the settings is sometimes confusing. When you think about it seriously, you can't figure it out, which is very uncomfortable. Overall, it's a good book, but it's too short. Good luck, author💪

Yes, it's quite good. The main thing is to update it. Tomato's new book is quite strange and needs more updates.

I have read more than 70 chapters, and overall it is very interesting. It has elements of SCP and Crusoe, and the protagonist's IQ is online. It is not a bad-ass counterattack. The protagonist is very capable. Goldfinger is not so big that it is just a cheat without a plot. It is my favorite type. Come on!

This book is very good. To be honest, although it has a certain reading threshold, the setting is very good and the readability is not bad. I just don't know why it is not popular. It is a pity. Come on, author💪

It looks good, but I couldn't bear to read a lot of the information, so I had to skip it. I could write more about the protagonist (it felt like there was a bit too much information), and then I was a little confused about the protagonist's abilities. Summary: I think there is simply too much information, and it can be simplified a bit. The plot is okay, but there are some parts that I really want to skip. Come on, come on, there is no heroine to catch up to the end, it is still good to watch Don't have a female protagonist. Don't have a female protagonist. A female protagonist is a failure. I hope there won't be one in the future.

It's very well written, I hope the author can finish it. I also hope that friends who read this book review will read it carefully and I guarantee that you will be satisfied and don't come to me if you feel bad. (Confidently) Finally, I hope the author will take good care of his health and bring us more good books [love] [love] [love] Come on! ! ! ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)ற

It's quite good-looking, but requires a certain amount of understanding. Tomato is a bit too young, so quite a few people can't understand it. There are too many Tomato novels, but this one is not at all. It is very interesting. I personally think it is as interesting as Lord of Mysteries. It's a pity that the author's previous data was very poor, so he didn't continue writing and ended it before finishing.

The writing is very good, with depth and breadth. I admire the author's erudition and let me know that people who read traditional literature will also watch anime [laughs evilly], but some settings are more complicated and require patience to read. The ending is a mess, and there is nothing we can do about it. I hope there will be a sequel.

It's very interesting, but there's a lot of foreshadowing in the early stages. It doesn't matter if you don't understand it. After that, I'll become more and more proficient in it and my writing will get better and better. It feels like it's all done in one go and going with the flow, so... I'm urging you to update.

The story is very strong, which is much better than many books of the same period, at least in my opinion. The imagination is also big. The writing style makes people feel relaxed, not the boring garbage writing on the book list. It is just that the rhythm is not accurate. I feel that the improvement of the protagonist is a bit fast. I personally think it is very good!

Ah, this book is so beautiful. The author can integrate all kinds of personal information into one, and there is no feeling of being hard-coded. Of course, some people may not have read some of the things in his book, but there are some more detailed understandings in the book, which is more suitable for newcomers. I always feel a novel feeling when I see those old ideas. The character description thinking, and some foreshadowing are really awesome.

It's very good. This book has a great world view and its subject matter has its own uniqueness. It is relatively new and the system is relatively complex. I don't know if the author can grasp it. The current situation is still very good. I was too lazy to comment at first. Then I found out why the rating was so low. I came back to support it. I hope the author can stick to it and not stop updating.

It's really exciting! But the amount of information is huge, a new and infinite flow that I have never seen before, and there are many elements that interest me. Looking forward to the author's next story, please come on!

Some parts need to be read several times to understand the author's meaning, which made me a little impatient, but the subject matter is still very novel. It can be seen that the author has a relatively rich knowledge base, and it is still a very good novel.

Very nice! I just don't like the painting style on the cover. The illustrations by Yao Zhu are so cute! There was something I wanted to comment on when I was reading it, but I can't remember it now. Forget it, I'll leave it for subsequent revisions.

Bad News: Stitches Good news: The author's stitching without a rod is smooth and natural, which is fun to see. The good news: the male protagonist is a beautiful woman, although there is not much description of her appearance.

The author's imagination, or brainstorming, and worldview setting are very powerful, and he often quotes other literary works. Although it seems to be watery, it makes people speechless, and the amount of reading is also admirable. Come on, author

The book is very good. It is one of the rare Tomato books that has a rigorous structure and is well organized. There is nothing wrong with the character setting, but it is a little watery. But most of it is popular science about poetry and the like, which is pretty good.

The book is very good, but the writing style is a bit novice, but it is already very good in Tomato. The setting is very novel, and the author's pacing is also very good. Now that I have read the second volume, I feel that the world view has suddenly become very big, and there is no foreshadowing. I feel a little uncomfortable, so I gave it up for the time being. In short, it is still good.

Thank you for the author＼(☆o☆)／This is a very good book but you need to read it carefully. I hope the author will write more articles (٭°̧̧̧ω°̧̧̧٭). People can't get enough of it!

This is a book that can be called the ultimate stitching book, but its stitching does not feel artificial or inconsistent, which can be very good. But the author only updates two chapters every day, which is really unacceptable to me. At any rate, I'll start with three cards [Sending Hearts]

Pretty good. The elements of Cthulhu, SCP, Sequence, Infinite Stream, literature and history are well combined, and there are no poisonous points in the plot. Highly recommendedヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ