Became *******

Warm reminder: As long as the author lives for one day, except for asking for leave once a month and other unavoidable things, updates will never be interrupted for no reason. Daily updates will only be late and will not be absent. Please rest assured [it is in progress]. In addition, this book will be completed step by step and will never be perfunctory. Also, I have seen all the comments from the babies. Here, first of all, I would like to express my sincere thanks to the babies for taking the time to write down their comments. Secondly, I think what the babies said was sincere, and the questions they asked all made sense, and it was obvious that the babies commented very thoughtfully. In addition, to clarify, the reason why some negative reviews are not liked is purely because I feel it is a bit weird to like my own negative reviews. It is not the problem of the babies. Finally, everyone is welcome to speak freely!

I really like it, but the progress is very slow. The period of identity transformation in the middle, from immortal cultivator to demonic cultivator, was too sudden, and it felt like there was no connection.

It's so good. Don't chase your husband in the crematorium. I want to watch chase your wife.

I like some of the plots, and there are many novel points. As for other shortcomings, I can accept them. Overall, it's pretty good. The author writes very well, I hope he writes more about the plot [shy]

Except for the front, the writing in the back is really good. I started reading it when the male and female protagonists were about to come out of the fantasy world. The more I watched, the more interesting it became. After reading it, I went to the front. The front was so boring. The female protagonist practiced really quickly after traveling through time. After seeing the demon realm, I really like the male protagonist. He is so delicate and soft. I love it to death! Keep up the great work! Take good care of you! 👍👍👍

Very exciting and fast paced

I just want to ask, the first time the heroine was obviously controlled by the Demon Lord, and even beat the Master, and she had no memory. Then the second time she was taken away by the Demon Lord, and then she lost her memory again. She remembered that she had a space, but did not remember that she had traveled through time. Although the plot was very interesting, it gave me the feeling that the heroine who came from time-travel suddenly disappeared... I felt so sad when I saw it. I want to know, can the heroine come back?

Very beautiful, really beautiful

Excessiveness may be unnatural, but I skipped through the middle part of it, and the more I watched it, the better it became. The author, I hope you can read more to death while you are in good health. Can we do a section of Chasing Wife's Crematorium? [Adoration] [Shy] If it doesn't work, the female lead should hit the male lead more [Adoration] [Shy] But why is the rating so low now? [What] I think except for the middle section which is too unnatural, everything else is okay [Blowing kiss] But the author is great. The male lead is so well-educated that he is easily subdued (the brothel section), which seems a bit unjustifiable [Thinking]

This book is beautiful. If you don't like it, just read something else. Don't give the author one star! Author, don't panic, keep going, the Spurs are really good-looking, believe in yourself. Come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Come on, author, the author is awesome,

Not bad, worthy of five stars

It's very beautiful, thank you to the author.

It's pretty good-looking, except for some details that I didn't understand, but overall it's pretty good.

Big cheers for the author!

Author: When I saw 133., I felt like I had to watch it in a fast-forward version. If I really like it, I like the ones written before the 1970s, because I felt that the later scenes were a bit boring as I had read more novels.

It's okay ^ω^. I'll torture the male protagonist a lot in the later stage. I really can't replace him or start a harem. Please give me your best, author💪

( •̀֊•́ ) ̖́-Too good for my taste

The writing style needs to be improved, and I look forward to more plots [exploration]

Yes, I jumped to watch it, and the rating seems a bit low...

I really like this book. Please give the author a boost! ! ! Recommended to take a look

Ah~~The author stopped writing~But it's not a big problem for me~

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥Good, good, good.

It looks good, but what does it mean to be broken? [Shock]

I like this book very much, and it is also very exciting. From the beginning, I was the apprentice of the Immortal Lord to the young master of the magic song.

Read it, read it, I like this kind of book so much, the author will come back soon.

Good-looking, but a little cruel

Ah, I love you first and respect you first

Became the wife of Qing Leng Immortal Lord

Why is it gone?