What will happen if you have Little Dora's fourth-dimensional treasure bag?
"Welcome to another world!"
It has been three years since Duan Chang traveled to another world. While others were invincible at the beginning, he didn't even have a bowl at the beginning.
Three years later, "What? Treasure Bag gives you a cheat every once in a while?"
The young man who was lying flat finally stood up, and the first plug-in: Thunder Fruit!
Looking forward to getting the "karma" weapon "If Phone Booth"!
A dreamy life has begun.
"Have you seen God?"
"I am!"
Reader comments
After reading more than 22 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore.
The author probably didn't write an outline. It seems a bit confusing, and the character design is a bit negative...
Especially in one chapter, the girl who plays with fire and plays with guns had a quarrel when she brought the protagonist back. Suddenly, the girl got red-eyed and howled at the male protagonist. The scene here conflicts with the character you described earlier. You wrote before that the girl who played with fire had a bad temper and the subordinates were a little afraid of her. The description here makes me think that she is a hot girl. Even if she has something sad, she will only vent it in secret. But she showed true feelings for someone she had only met once or twice. Don't you feel awkward? Is it messy?
I personally think that the author did not write an outline, but wrote whatever came to mind, or the outline was not completed.
The author of a book that has a bit of a Madonna feel to it may have just been published and wants to have a process of mental change. After all, killing people without blinking an eye would not fit the character of an ordinary person (referring to traveling from the original world to here). I don't know if the little villain named is a foreshadowing left by the author. I'm quite looking forward to it. Come on, author! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
How to say it? The front was fine, but I saw 32 pictures. The more I watched, the more blocked I became. Did you know that the blockage in my heart suddenly broke out? At worst, I could kill him and run away, but I wouldn't kill him even if I touch him. To be honest, this protagonist is really useless. Fortunately, from the perspective of this piece, my personal rating cannot be higher than 7.9.
New book, new author, come on. I hope you can come to life, and I hope your writing skills will improve. The description of the protagonist should be vivid, but it should be closer to reality.
After reading more than 22 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The author probably didn't write an outline. It seems a bit confusing, and the character design is a bit negative... Especially in one chapter, the girl who plays with fire and plays with guns had a quarrel when she brought the protagonist back. Suddenly, the girl got red-eyed and howled at the male protagonist. The scene here conflicts with the character you described earlier. You wrote before that the girl who played with fire had a bad temper and the subordinates were a little afraid of her. The description here makes me think that she is a hot girl. Even if she has something sad, she will only vent it in secret. But she showed true feelings for someone she had only met once or twice. Don't you feel awkward? Is it messy? I personally think that the author did not write an outline, but wrote whatever came to mind, or the outline was not completed.
The author of a book that has a bit of a Madonna feel to it may have just been published and wants to have a process of mental change. After all, killing people without blinking an eye would not fit the character of an ordinary person (referring to traveling from the original world to here). I don't know if the little villain named is a foreshadowing left by the author. I'm quite looking forward to it. Come on, author! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
How to say it? The front was fine, but I saw 32 pictures. The more I watched, the more blocked I became. Did you know that the blockage in my heart suddenly broke out? At worst, I could kill him and run away, but I wouldn't kill him even if I touch him. To be honest, this protagonist is really useless. Fortunately, from the perspective of this piece, my personal rating cannot be higher than 7.9. New book, new author, come on. I hope you can come to life, and I hope your writing skills will improve. The description of the protagonist should be vivid, but it should be closer to reality.
The settings are a bit confusing