It's Almost Time to Cross the Sun and Reach the West. the Host Has Become Enlightened.

It's pretty good, and the writing is okay. The heroine seemed aloof in the early stage, but she turned out to be a funny and cute girl. Personally, I think it's a bit salty, and the plot line feels a bit too slow. I'm not saying that the emotional line of this novel is the slowest I've ever read. I haven't kissed you seriously after a hundred chapters. There are also many typos, but I can accept this, after all, no author has ever written typos. However, I personally have an opinion, which is to strengthen the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, and delete the redundant and unnecessary plots. It always feels a bit strange. In addition, the female protagonist should not leave suddenly because of certain things at the end, and in the end Afterwards, the male protagonist is extremely sad, but the female protagonist doesn't seem too sad. And don't delay. I personally prefer to be more straightforward. It's best for the female protagonist to quickly understand her feelings for the male protagonist. Of course, she can't suddenly figure it out for no reason. The above are my thoughts, but the plot is pretty good anyway, and it's written by a female character. [Note][Working on draft]

I hope there will be more double male protagonists in the future world [laughing]

It's really good-looking! Good cheers for the author. I hope the little sister won't get too excited. This is really cuteớ ₃ờ. It's better to have no meat. The painting style is unique and very attractive. [Sending my heart] [Got it]

I really like this setting (//∇//) Women wear men forever. ! ! ! If possible, would it be okay for the author to write this setting when he is reading the next book? (Little eyes of anticipation) I really like this book, it's a treasure trove of books! So much love! ! ! ! ! Why isn't it updated? Can you give me a reason? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] @

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos

Broader, wider, hahaha, it made me laugh to death In the first plane, it's too hard for my little disciple, it's too hard

Very nice Very beautiful super nice

The characters are great and the plot is great! !

Not bad, quite interesting

The author, please don't read it in vain!

What can I say, I like it very much. Go and watch it, it's really fun to watch. The description of the characters' emotions is still very delicate.