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It's super cool. Apart from the one I read before, There's a Monster in Here. This is the second super cool novel I've read. But There's a Monster in Here has been removed from the shelves. I hope you, the author, don't want to be a eunuch, and go through the process to update! ! ! ! !

This can be called body refining, this is what is called Heng Lian Kung Fu. The best, this can be called body refining, but I suggest that it is best to get an armor or something, like a general's armor, and it is not the hard armor, but the soft one that looks handsome, otherwise the clothes will be damaged, wouldn't that be bad? The kind of soft feet that are not tight

It's great. Maybe I personally like those novels that use no special effects to hit the flesh and defeat all enemies with one force, but it's really burning inside! The author nailed the drama and plot very well, and the emotional part was also very well done, making people feel just right. But the updates are so slow! Update soon!

I only read it because it had a single female protagonist, and I liked the introduction very much, so I read it without hesitation, but I didn't read that much. Maybe because of my gender, I couldn't accept many of the descriptions in the book. For example, the part where the director used his back to ask the male protagonist to sign, or the part in the shower room when the school opened. How can I put it this way? The protagonist using the female teacher's back as a table to sign autographs is a serious problem. In the bathroom scene at the back, although boys love to joke, normal people can't do such perverted things, and they won't cut soap and fencing at every turn. Which boy has this in his mind every day! I can understand thinking about beautiful women. There are two chapters, and the connection is like skipping chapters.

It's not bad. It's very passionate when I see it for the first time.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update, because I I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't abandon the update, No water, nothing is a problem, I am with you loyal readers Wait, I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and profound, without being polite. I said angrily, if you were included in the article, you would be an experienced interpreter Reader, I am the audience who enjoys the video. Your performance has reached its peak. A state of enchantment. Just like Jian Han watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard" The situation is the same. If you watch one more episode, there will be one less episode. I want to watch it but don't want to watch it. No, the contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I'm just a bored idler, aimlessly clicking on this short article. Said, I didn't have the mood to finish reading him, but you succeeded and made me "Half" is finished. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only, commenting Only by leaving a message in the discussion can I stabilize my mood at this moment, and take luck Psychology, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to your every A "next chapter." Your dear readers 8.28/8:47

The writing is good. I originally thought it was going to be a dancing heroine, but after reading the first volume, there is still a heroine. Well, in my heart, I still hope that it will end without a heroine, but if it is well written, it doesn't matter. Don't delay the plot or anything. Well, if it happens by chance, It would be cool to have a female protagonist, although people may criticize me for writing it this way. Also, I think we can give the protagonist a heavy weapon like a sword, or a heavy spear, or a pheasant. This way, we can use our strength, and it is more handsome than using fists. I hope that the main character's IQ can be taken to a higher level. After all, he is also born with awakened spiritual consciousness. The second ticket is written more about Guan Yun.

Suggestions: 1. The protagonist is indecisive and lacks courage. Suggestion: Be decisive in doing things 2. Guan Yun's character is too smart, and even outshines the protagonist. This is a bit "higher than the master". Suggestion: Guan Yun's IQ is equal to or slightly lower than that of the protagonist. The protagonist should not be enlightened by Guan Yun's guidance every time. 3. The love line was developed a bit hastily, but there is no way to make up for it now, which is a pity. 4. Although the author's idea of ​​writing about family and country feelings, brotherhood and other emotional routines is good, the characters and details still need to be improved. But as a first book, this is still very good. Although the writing is a bit novice, at least the logic is reasonable, and you can really try it. I support the author here and hope the author can write better.

Cheers to the author, the book is great [like]

This book seems to have brought me back to the era when gods were competing to become gods. It is indeed a good book. Generally speaking, it has flaws. Some people may not like the dog, but overall it does not affect the ups and downs of the plot. The rhythm is well controlled. As long as it does not fall apart in the later stages, it can become a masterpiece.

I really like this kind of novel, I hope the author can keep writing, come on ^0＾~

I like it very much, come on (there is no woman in my heart, I am a natural god)

It's beautiful. I've long wanted to read a novel about physical strength.

Okay, okay, this is a book with no flaws. A better cover would make it a god. [Working on draft]

Believe me, I can guarantee that this book is really good and the author updates it every day. If you want to read it, you can read a few chapters first. Of course, if some people don't like this type of book, forget it. All in all, this book is very good.

Very good, the score is not exaggerated, but some details are not good enough. For example, in the latest chapters, you can completely reveal your nanny ability to Dinglou, and the support you get cannot be compared with the simple way of Qi and blood. A super nanny with a body hammer emperor level is basically invincible.

2023.3.3-23:23 The subject matter is pretty good and the writing is pretty good, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.

So far, there are no poisonous points, the logic is clear, very interesting, very passionate, and very united. The protagonist is very three-dimensional, and other characters such as Guan Yun and Pang Zhen are also very detailed, and the plot description is also very exciting. It should be serious when it needs to be serious, and it should be humorous. The book is very good, but the volume is a little small. I hope the author will read more while taking care of his health. Come on!

It's very beautiful, I feel like I can become a god, but the score is a little low, so it's not easy to be found, and some of the comments in the front are very discouraging, and I almost slipped away [face covering] [face covering] But the back part is really beautiful [send my heart] [send my heart] Finally, author, you are too short, hurry up and update the code, it is not enough to read [note] [note]

This is a good book in Tomato, which is full of episodic writings. IQ is online. Unlike many books, it is almost the end of the world and it is still fighting to the death with its own people all day long. He didn't deliberately write about the darkness of human nature!

The writing is very good and will definitely be popular. Moreover, the previous emotional plots between the male and female protagonists were neither too much nor too greasy, but just right. The only drawback is that there is less plot about the male protagonist's nanny skills. This book will become popular sooner or later🔥, I hope the author will persevere, keep working hard

A super hot-blooded and exciting article, without the love of mother-in-law and mother. It is direct and passionate. The article has a sense of pictures. You can always feel like a general leading an army to kill. It is very enjoyable, but the plot is quite reasonable and not a mindless article. I hope the author will not stop updating when there is nothing wrong and be more diligent, otherwise I will send you a razor blade!

I finished reading 200 chapters and 420,000 words in more than ten hours. Originally, I wanted to watch the king fight for a while, but I didn't even fight the king, and I had finished smoking a pack of cigarettes. I reminded myself to go to bed quickly, but it was already 6 o'clock in the morning. I really don't know what those people who say it doesn't look good think. Anyway, I have been reading books for several years. To summarize. This book is witty and humorous. The protagonist's IQ is online. The villain's IQ is online. The protagonist's brother has a distinct personality and a full character. It cannot be seen from these 200 pictures that the entire large frame is still very clear. The author's writing style is quite good. If I have to say that compared with Tomato's masterpieces, it's still a little bit behind, but it's much better than other novels. Okay, I won't say that much. If you want to know more, you can read it yourself. Damn it, I'm going to bed, I can't stand it anymore. Stayed up all night. [Crying] You want to compensate me for mental damages, the author [grieved]

I have been reading this book for a long time. Generally speaking, the plot is very compact, the world view is well laid out, and some minor characters are also well portrayed, such as Zhou who shielded Pang from the damage in the battle of Zhennan. The only drawback is that there are many descriptions of the war in southern Xinjiang, but almost no battles in other places. The author can To write about some battles in other war zones, the protagonist does not necessarily have to participate in the battle in person. It can be what the protagonist sees on the news, just like Bai Yuezi watching the protagonist fight. After all, in the beginning, Bai was also one of the leading figures among his peers, so the scenes are a bit missing. Finally, the author will hurry up and update [please update]

To be honest, this is the most exciting book I have ever read. This book has been on the bookshelf for a while. I suddenly clicked on it and couldn't stop. The story is very exciting. The content is not only solemn and serious, but also adds some humor inadvertently (only my personal opinion).

Not bad, will look at it later. I hope there won't be any phenomenon similar to stepping on the air to exert force later. It would be best if the author could add a physical magical power that is as big or small as you want. It's easier to accept and more enjoyable. A real man must fight head-on like a giant beast [laughs]

The author's book is really great, but the updates are too slow. I think we should leave 5 hours a day for updates This leaves 19 hours of free time What do you think [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I love Bedrock Backstage But I prefer the hegemony type. This kind of defeating the overall situation is not interesting and feels like it will collapse. And the power system seems to be average, at least it doesn't have the bells and whistles of those super powers. But I still like it very much

I saw more than 60 chapters in the second volume and commented on it. It is a very good book. The various characters are written with flesh and blood. From high-level officials to ordinary people, they all have their own selfish motives and big plans. Their IQs are all online. It is indeed difficult to find a book on Tomato. During this time on Tomato, I have been following "Ula!" "Special Forces" and this one, I recommend it, please feel free to read it! Finally, I hope that the author will not be too biased by the comments and affect the style and main line of the book. "I Became a Saint by Burning Corpses" is an example of collapse. Come on! The author is great

In an environment where auras have revived and alien beasts are rampant, the battle experience of a group of hot-blooded reckless men, the protagonist Li Yang leads the brothers to forge ahead on a road full of thorns, passion is the main theme, and at the same time there is a soothing plot of farming, raising cattle and feeding iron beasts. It can be said that the storyline is perfectly connected, author, please come on [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript]