Entertainment: Angrily Criticized Gege in the Beijing Circle and Was Banned by the Beijing Circle

After reading Chapter 29, I can see that the author wanted to write the characters more fully, but the author undoubtedly failed. In the characterization of the characters, the author's focus seemed to be deviated. The characterization of the protagonist was incomplete and scattered. After comparing the characterizations of the supporting characters Xiao Shuangshuang and Da Lu, I was even more confused. This made me not understand the main plot clearly. The extra chapter was a bit long, which made me a little tired. There is no special memory point for the protagonist in the article, making it difficult for people to grasp what the story is about. In general, I hope the author can write the main line more clearly and not confuse the key points. These are some of my thoughts on the first 29 chapters of this book.

The author said that the novel can be free of urine points, but not water. The pace is too fast and chaotic, and the extra chapters are useless. The protagonist's system is a taunting system, and it is a bit of a trap before he starts to taunt others. Moreover, this system has no sense of existence and is worthless. The protagonist has a private jet at home, and he still cares about system rewards. There is a big problem with the logic! The protagonist has no skills, a huge identity set-up, no details, gets frustrated when something happens, the tactics are all roundabout, and there is basically no positive response (I dare not respond). I started directing without doing anything, and there is no process at all for directing. If I get 10 billion, I can finish it directly! Two points for coding is very hard! I hope the author will work hard. (Write it from scratch)!

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