Naruto, Hold On, Boy!

It's okay, so-so. It just feels a bit like writing a running account. Who does the heroine like? Please make it clear first. You can add a little more, such as parting, scenes where the heroine is sad, and the heroine's love partner is sad.

It's okay, but it's over without an ending.

It looks good, but it's a pity there is no follow-up.

I was shocked after watching it

Beautiful, highly recommended

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