Invincible, Starting by Tricking My Little Sister into Cultivating Immortality

When I read the second chapter of the book, the author wrote about a scene that was startling and haunted? I really want to beat up the author, find a technique and take off my pants to fart? You are a preacher, but you still teach the exercises on your own initiative?

Everyone feels that there are still some shortcomings that can be mentioned. This is the first time the author has written a novel. There must be many flaws. The author knows it and will try his best to correct it 😢 I must be the first one with such a bad rating! 😢

It's so miserable, haha ​​😄

I came in based on the title of the book and was disappointed.

Good. . . .

It's full of loopholes, the writing is too fake, I'm inexperienced, like I'm a novice at writing novels

It's okay, not too ugly, but I can't stand it anymore

. . . In Chapter 15, the logic will be eaten away. The Zhang family is not stupid, right? There is also the protagonist who forcibly highlights the rules and status, and the personality portrayal of the female supporting characters is not good even when others want to kill her.

The first part was okay, but after chapter 20, it felt like it was written with the character "Wai Zui Long Wang Shui"

Foundation Building Dzogchen, the Immortal Grade Kung Fu cannot beat ordinary Foundation Building. . . .