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Start a new book! If you really can't go to the factory to drill screws, you'll be beaten, right? It's too weak, right? The protagonist like Shanks invites immortality, saying that as long as he is not fatally injured, he will not die ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ, which makes him speechless. In the setting of Demon Slayer, only the sun and the Nichirin sword can cause harm to ghosts, and the Nichirin sword must also cut the neck. There is also the front foot of the heroine who is flirting with women right after her death. I am really speechless. Isn't this too casual?ヽ('ー`)ノ, It doesn't make sense to forcefully substitute the deformed three views, there are too many flaws.

I have long wanted to read a book about joining the red-haired group, and it is also well written. It must be five stars.

The writing of Wu Kai is too weak and too severe. He cannot save a dying person and has no vampire skills.

Ah, the combat power is written in such a mess. Why can't an imperial deputy even know what he's doing? Isn't this a standard feature of the New World in anime? And the red-haired one isn't that weak. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, Muzan, the Onimaki clan, wouldn't have been able to be killed so easily. Why didn't you even write a vampire spell? If it is the Oniwu clan in the early stage, it will be miserable. He probably also wants to eat people. Why didn't he want to eat people during the battle that just happened in the past?

Why do you feel a little embarrassed?

Awkward. The skills are gone. The ability to turn people into ghosts.

It's embarrassing as hell. The subject matter is quite novel. I read it out of curiosity. The greater my expectations, the greater my disappointment. Has the author never read One Piece and Demon Slayer? Except for the character names, there is no place that matches the original work. The author doesn't know why he should not write it randomly [Stare] [Stare]

Chapter 12-14, knife, enter with caution

I thought it was good but... Goodbye, go and watch it yourself. Only after watching it will you know what I want to express. Some people may like it, but it was quite uncomfortable for me. "Chapter 12"

It's okay, but I don't like Luffy. I feel that in One Piece, Luffy relies on cheats to grow up without working hard. He relies on the halo of the protagonist given to him by God. He is a fool himself, but he likes red hair.

Forced blackening [smile]

Let's be honest, write less emotional scenes... It's so embarrassing to watch... I'm moved by myself... Straight man... You'd better focus on logic and fighting... Just let the awkward emotional scenes in the first part go... I hope it won't be a bit poisonous later on.

The author will update soon. It's the first time I've seen someone with red hair 😁😁😁

There is no main plot, the content is too boring, and the most embarrassing thing is the emotional scene

I'm speechless. The author should start a new book. This one is hopeless.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's too brainless, is that all? It was a good Ghost King, but it collapsed before the tenth chapter. Bad review.

I have been on One Piece's ship since I was a child. It's unreasonable to write that I'm so weak after I go to sea.

A story about reducing intelligence that could not be written even after ten years of cerebral infarction

What is this written about?

The writing of Wu Kai is too weak, he can't use the blood ghost technique and can't turn those people into ghosts, and the writing of Red Hair is also weak. In short, it's full of noisy points.

Must be five stars Come on, the author has too few chapters to read.

Haha, I finally found a book about joining another pirate group.

Personally, I think it's okay [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]

Very nice, it's rare to see this type of book

I hope Wuhan will always be in a female state

I want to know if there will be fruits or something

Dear author, when will you update? (ू˃̣̣̣̣̣̣˂̣̣̣̣̣̣ ू)