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This is the most flesh-and-blood protagonist I have ever seen. The author portrays the protagonist as a free and uninhibited prodigal who values ​​love and justice. To be honest, I was hit by a knife and it really hurt me. I really like the description of environmental psychology in the article. At least it was very smooth when I read it, without any discomfort. General Thunder and Lightning is the eternal executor. The majesty and stability of General Thunder and Lightning described by the author are very consistent with the image of a warrior. As the Son of God said, reversing the will of the gods is a gamble in itself. Travelers are different from ordinary mortals. As a mortal with the eyes of God, the protagonist can plant the seeds of thinking about eternity without the intervention of the Son of God. This is the most interesting part of this chapter, and the fact that Kujo becomes aware of his desires, not just his loyalty to the general, makes this character come alive. To be honest, I'm looking forward to the author's future chapters, so keep up the good work! This is one of the few books I enjoy reading! ! By the way, author, I have a question while reading the book. The first is why the protagonist knows the truth. It would be better if you explain the process of the protagonist knowing the truth. In the legendary mission of the second chapter of Thor, the idea of ​​Kage has reached an opportunity to touch the appearance of Zhen, and it is not impossible for Zhen to interact with the protagonist in the article. Maybe I really don't understand Raiden clearly. He should really be a very thoughtful and steady civil servant with a rice wife and dreams. Secondly, during the two or three years that the protagonist got along with Manyo, we could actually write more about his interactions with Manyo, as well as the protagonist's innermost plans. Although we all know that Tianling Fengxu has dealings with the Fools, it's better to explain it. The pace is a bit fast, but if you say that you have many stories to narrate, it would be understandable if the story of Manyo Friends is not the focus. If you don't have a manuscript ready and just write whatever comes to mind, the opening of Manyo Friends can be used as a story with writable content, and the length can be longer. Of course, this is just my opinion after reading so many books. Personally, I really appreciate the warm interactions between the protagonist and various characters. What I like is how the author tells the story well. After all, a lot of awesome settings are really not as realistic as a good-looking and pleasant story.

Isn't this straight five stars? ! It's so beautiful. This book is the most touching and comfortable book I've ever read in Genshin Impact. There are many Genshin Impact novels where the protagonists are cheating on the female characters in them, destroying the original character image, just for their own pleasure, and forcibly abusing them to cultivate a relationship with the heroine. But this book is a natural abuse, not for the sake of abuse. Just simple words can speak to my heart, making me cry several times, and it fits the character's image, and the emotions are real. Especially the character and behavior of the male protagonist are really good. He is kind and optimistic, cute and tenacious. Like the sun, it illuminates and warms others, bringing hope and making people yearn for it! I hope the author will work hard and update! Love you! [Love][Love] (I'm still in sixth grade, and I really can't think of better and more appropriate words to describe this book, but I think this book is the best Genshin Impact novel in my heart!! [Sending my heart][Sending my heart])

So pretty, but too little! ! ! ! ! So the author should know what it means [laughs crookedly]

It's very beautiful, but it's a little bit sharp. It's number one on the recommendation list. I hope the author will continue to write. Author, are you the planner of MiHoYo? You are so kind, just let me look at you [laughing][laughing]

This book is very well written, and the tear ducts will not stop flowing. Many people like it. Please don't give up on this book. I believe that this book will get better as time goes by. Don't give up. There are still many people waiting for you. I watched it last week and only watched it when I came back this week. I was so sad to see such a big "surprise" when I came back (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) Please don't give up.

This is the most perfect Genshin Impact fanfic I have seen on Tomato so far. The ending is also very good, but it feels very unworthy of the protagonist. Among everyone's perfect endings, I am the only one who does not have my name. [Cry]

It looks good, but I feel like my sword skills are not very good yet. Come on, author!

The author here, Sang, you are already a mature Genshin Impact fan, you have to learn to make your own swords. The book is very nice, the protagonist is also very good, and the plot is the kind I like. I hope the next volume will be less censorious and we can still be friends.

Good-looking, so good-looking, really good-looking, extremely good-looking, no words

This book is really the best Genshin Impact novel in my opinion. It has great potential, and there is no bloody plot of torture for the sake of torture. It is pure and sincere feelings. Wow. In this book, I feel that the author made up for the regrets I had for everyone in Genshin Impact. While making up for the regrets, he also wrote the most sincere thoughts about reality: "Since you play a person to make up for someone's regrets, once you forget yourself, are you still you?" To be honest, as soon as I saw the author saying that he would update as the situation dictates, I immediately couldn't hold back. It's obviously a very potential and very interesting novel, but why? Every time I see a reminder, there are people there, including us/the readers! Author, don't be sad hehe The last five stars are given! The future is promising! I fell into the trap when the Poem in a Cup was updated to the third episode. How can I put it... It's not a loss to invest in it, brothers. Damn, I have been a bookworm for 67 years. This book is really good. I recommend it to my family members.

Come on, author, don't give up. This is one of the few Genshin Impact novels that allowed me to keep reading. Sometimes the data is unreliable. For example, the 2.8% Reading rate. Please look at your score. It is above 9 points. Therefore, the 2.8% Reading rate does not mean that your novel is not well written, but it means that many people are interested in your book. Keep up the good work, author.

I finished reading it in one go, and to be honest, it was a bit unreadable. The first volume was as strong as liquor from the mouth to the throat. At the beginning, I wanted to quickly see the protagonist facing the God of Thunder. But during the process from mouth to throat, I tasted the strong aroma of strong liquor. It was well written and very sharp. To be honest, I cried [crying], hey. And this second volume is like the rice wine from my hometown, with a mellow aroma and strong staying power. Although it is indeed a bit like the author said that the writing is insufficient, I think it is very good. After all, I can't write it. I hope the author will continue writing this book, never give up, and leave everyone with a happy ending. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

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It is indeed beautiful, not just for the sake of the knife, but the depiction is very delicate. The beauty is... Too little, well, it can be ignored. A good book should be rewarded [like]. When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan!

Don't listen to them. This book is so sweet that it doesn't even have a knife. The protagonist has strength comparable to the peak of the film. Manyo will not lose his best friend. There's no tragedy at all, it's very good-looking and very sweet. You'll regret it if you don't watch it.

To be honest, you are the best I can accept in fanfiction. (I don't mean to belittle. As for the nine reincarnations, there is nothing wrong with normal people, right? But take a closer look. Isn't Hutao's family affection for his grandfather? Where does love come from? Many unreasonable things are added forcefully. The appearance of family affection is written as love, and the love is written as another appearance. I wonder if I have never seen the world and am so playful.) This book is handled very well. Whether it's family or love, every place is just right and there's nothing superfluous about it.

The volume of Manyo is so beautiful that it makes the pear blossoms cry and rain [crying]. I feel that the author really brought these two characters to life. It was so romantic when watching the fireworks. The second fireworks set off was the motivation to keep Manyo going. I was so touched here. When he challenged Kujo Tokiwa and wanted to take Muxiang's sword, his words were so irritating. Manyo's stolen treasure group captured the reflection of Matsushima Chisu that Momoru sent out to save Manyo and after that, Manyo shouted to the sea, "I know it's not you, because he didn't want to hug me when he left." It was so sad [crying] Finally, Manyo turned around and saw Matsushima Chisu. That was great, and she also cried [crying]. And the protagonists Shiroho and Manyo... Just one word! So pretty! Obviously I still want to see the knife! [Cry]

This is one of the few stories that makes up for regrets since I read this book. Teyvat still has so many regrets. The story of the boy and the wind elf has not yet reached the end. Please believe in yourself. Every chapter is particularly beautiful.

This book is already very powerful. After reading the Ten Thousand Leaves Chapter, I have endless aftertaste. For me, it is already a rare good book, and it is also the one that impressed me the most. Perhaps as you said before, it is difficult to accept if the sense of substitution is too deep. I think I am the kind of person who has a deep sense of substitution. When I was watching the end, I was thinking about what the ending would be like. Obviously, it was not as well written as the author (it is not a cliché, it is from the heart, I cried several times while watching it). From being dismissive at the beginning, to gradually becoming involved, and finally being moved to tears, every time you go deep into it, it is a different experience. (Note: Personal opinion. I have a poor literary foundation and may not be able to express myself clearly. I hope you will understand.)

To be honest, if you want me to comment, the character creation is very good, especially the first volume at the end. I really can't comment on it, I can only say that it gave a good ending. But for Bai Fan, he really put his own emotions into it. He had memories and even deleted and deleted the memory fragments of his friends, which really touched me. He also thought about others. He really made me cry to death. In short, this is a very successful role-playing plot and I hope the author will continue to persevere. [Love] (If you don't like knives, please listen to my advice. TMD 3/2 and above are knives. I guarantee you will cry from beginning to end [smile]

I really like this book [crying] [sending my heart]. Manyo, Wendy [crying], and Bai Fan, their stories are still long. Please don't stop. This great narrator, every word of yours is full of your understanding and love for them. , Don't stop moving forward, believe in yourself, the story you describe will definitely, definitely, be loved by the original fans. The knife is just respect for the original plot of Genshin Impact. All the endings are true. Please, definitely, firmly, write it down. After all, their story is still long [crying][crying]

It's a very good book about redemption and is a fan creation. From the perspective of secondary creation, it's really done well enough. Even though I don't know much about Genshin Impact in detail, I will be emotionally affected by the stories in it. The emotional line is easy to resonate and can make people feel involved. The protagonist has his own thoughts and does not regard this purely as a game. Many of his words and opinions can make people think. There are foreshadowings, I hope to see: not only the characters in "Original God", but also the protagonist's own regrets can also have the opportunity to make up for it. It's a wonderful novel, and I'm honored to have watched it grow to this point. Just like a parent watching their child grow up, they hope that it will continue to grow, radiate its own brilliance, and be seen by more people.

It's very interesting. The first story is about playing Manyo's best friend. It vividly describes the relationship between the protagonist and Manyo, the deep reluctance for Manyo before the duel with the protagonist at the imperial court, and the relationship with Manyo after losing his best friend. It also carefully describes the characters of the protagonist and Manyo, the happy time with them, and the difficulty of Manyo escaping with his best friend's God's Eye, and the little white cat's affection for his strong master. The second story is about playing Wendy's best friend. It describes very carefully the rebirth of Wendy who doesn't want her best friend to die in front of her eyes again. She traps her best friend with the wind and prevents him from moving forward even half an inch. No matter how much her best friend screams at her from behind, she won't let him advance any further. Even if her best friend hates him, she doesn't want her best friend to die in front of her. Finally, she watches her best friend jump into the devil's dream and collapse and roar. It also very carefully describes the protagonist and Wendy's journey from acquaintance to best friend. It also describes the protagonist's collapse when being trapped by the wind, the despair that his best friend may never come back, and the constant difficulty of trying to break away from the wind. He rushes to rescue his best friend even if he is injured. [Cry]

The writing of this book is good, and there are no big holes in the whole plot. It can make people truly feel that the author is embodying emotions and writing with heart. It can also make people feel that the people here are flesh and blood, giving it a sense of reality. But there is just a bit of a knife. Everything else is perfect, so the author promises us not to be eunuchs. I hope the author will give up this book. I hope that the author will think of this book and the readers who like to read it in the future (Traveler, when you embark on the journey again, you must remember the meaning of the journey itself; the birds, poems and city-states of Teyvat, the queen, fools and monsters are all part of your journey. The end does not mean everything. Before reaching the end, use your eyes to observe more of the world.)

Eggplant, don't give up. This book you wrote is really good. Even though Poems in a Cup is not as good as the previous one, I think it's better than other books. It's really good! I'm not trying to comfort you, it's really good writing. I'm just a student, otherwise I would just reward you like crazy [crying] [crying]

I'm here to make a supplementary review The content of this book is compact and not boring, and it is impossible to split or skip chapters. To be honest, this is the only book I can reread without skipping chapters. Also, Don't fail to update! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The quality is very high and the writing is also very good. It is the best Genshin Impact fanfic I have ever read. Great support to the author. If you don't give up on the book, I will keep chasing [send heart] [send heart] [love] [love] (The quality of the knife is solid, but it is a bit frequent [crying] [crying])

The quality is really very high, not all the original plot is copied, it has its own ideas and reasonable adaptation and polish, making people sympathize with the plot in the text, the writing is fluent and the language is beautiful, the poetry is poetic and the sonorous is powerful. It is a rare original Tomato fan work.

It's really great. I don't even get upset when I read a sadistic novel. I cried many times because of this book. It's very delicately written. Manyo's writing pierced my heart. Fengyou was really upset. The author's description is the most consistent with my inner fantasies that I've seen. It's really great and wonderful. As a chef of Manyo, I get full marks! ! ! ! Wendy's description is also very good. Please don't give up, the author. After reading the fantasy you wrote later, I'm really looking forward to it. It's such a treasure book, don't give up!

It's a great book. It has a strong sense of immersion and is very interesting. The author is too late to take the postgraduate entrance examination, but the first chapter is still very good. It's at the top level. I guarantee it with my 3,000 hours of bookworm experience. It's a good book. I also wish the author success in the postgraduate entrance examination and a smooth journey. Come on!