One Piece: I Became a Yin-Yang Man

There are so many levels of self-excitement that you can't read normally. Why are you eating Devil Fruit so late? I wrote about the shipwreck in the beginning, and then jumped to Roger's execution in the blink of an eye. Wasn't there any foreshadowing? The conversation with Kizaru is the same as that of a little kid. Is this a time traveler? And it is completely different from the image of eating the fruit later. Is there anyone who designs this protagonist? Not to mention that after the execution plot, a time traveler named Brother Ming was forced into the scene. There was also no foreshadowing and it was inexplicable. After jumping back to the shipwreck, he inexplicably found a place like a secret realm to find an inexplicable method to obtain the Devil Fruit. After eating the devil fruit, I was so high that I couldn't control myself. After absorbing and playing with the black bear, I roared and vented inexplicably, and even said a piece of Riddler's words. There was no foreshadowing, and it really didn't make people feel. What happens after venting? The inexplicable gray gas is here to steal the show again. What's the point of building so much suspense? Moreover, the conversation between the protagonist and Hui Qi is also inexplicable. Even if he doesn't care, it seems from the protagonist's words that he knows a lot of things, but why does he just fall in love with two little girls instantly and threaten them casually? Rhythm, oh no, there is no such thing as rhythm at all, there is no logic at all. In short, in the whole novel, the author himself is very happy, the protagonist embraces the beauty, and the clown is only the reader himself. [Eat melon]

There's nothing interesting about being caught up in the irresistible fate of fate.

This book is very well written, the ideas are clear, and it also has a great sense of humor. I want to read it again. It's not like those novels nowadays, but I feel that the plot is exactly the same as before. It doesn't seem to be interesting.

It feels inexplicable, the combat power is broken, the setting is broken, and the plot is interspersed with so many time-travelers, making it a mess. I don't understand what the main thing is to write. Don't be greedy. If you don't know how to write, don't write randomly. Isn't it good to just take it step by step?

It's very confusing. There is only one reason to read it. See if there is any explanation behind why it is written like this.

Two time travels? Three time travels? The sword of destiny appeared inexplicably again? You let others follow the plot! What about yourself? Why are you superior to others when they are all traveling through time?

What on earth is written? It's inexplicable. It's really annoying. I've read dozens of chapters and I don't know what it's about.

What the hell? Schizophrenia?

I don't know what I'm writing about. If you want to write about pirates, just write it well. Why add some random stuff? I don't know about others, but I personally don't like messy things added to them.

I don't understand, what the hell?