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The first world is finished, so I finished reading the first world first. I have to say that the character of the heroine in the first world is really very sincere and kind. The most touching part is the part where the heroine sent a painting, and she even spent points to draw a painting to help Mr. Yu relieve his insomnia, because she knew that she was leaving. Before leaving, she had good intentions even towards Lin Qingqing, who hated and was jealous of her. I don't think it's surprising that the male supporting actors were devastated for her in the ending, because she had such beautiful qualities and naturally became the irreplaceable Bai Yueguang. It's just that I have to catch some bugs. Although the flaws are not concealed, a logically rigorous reader like me still hopes that there will be more details. The first is that there is a recording director who was bullied by the heroine. He had previously thought about helping the heroine. This was a foreshadowing, but later the foreshadowing failed and the heroine made the video recording of all the truth public and the director did nothing. At that time, the heroine was exposed on the Internet. According to normal logic, why did the director who admired the heroine not post on Weibo to expose the recording. Secondly, the paintings that the heroine gave Mr. Yu had the effect of helping to cure insomnia, but in the last part when Mr. Yu had insomnia and could only rely on the heroine's songs to comfort himself, the role of the paintings was not mentioned again, which made me feel like it was a small foreshadowing. Although the story is really, really good, the quality is really good, the plot is really unique, but I still want to say that the foreshadowing in the early stage must be concluded well, otherwise the readers will really be separated by the fantasy if it does not make sense.

It's so beautiful! The plot and characterization hit my heart! Especially during the Republic of China, it made me cry. "We are not in a peaceful era, but in a powerful country." The strength of the country and the happiness of the people are all obtained by the blood and sweat of the ancestors. The revolution during the Republic of China was so passionate that I can't help but have red eyes every time I read it... The author writes very well, the writing is great, the pictures are beautiful and impressive.

I think the author's writing is very good. Although the author's book has no CP, the author's description of emotions is very good, and unlike other books, it is easy to collapse the plot and characters when writing CP. Although this book has no CP, can the author add a story about the love between the protagonist and the male protagonist from different worlds when writing the extra story [shy] In addition, I have to say that the author is really sad when he writes sad articles, and it hurts my heart every time [crying]

I think it's very good, really. There is a recent book shortage, and there are very few books that can catch my eye. So don't doubt yourself. You write well, the emotions you convey are spot on, and your words are elegant. Anyway, he writes better than me. And I always feel that I have read this book a long time ago, but it seems that the author just updated it not long ago. When I saw the script of the Republic of China, I was surprised. It was really the same as the scene in my dream. I want to ask you, will there be more similar quick travel stories after this book is finished? I want to continue chasing [admiration] [shy]

I like the ending of every story, it is always so beautiful and always so desirable. The war-filled era of the Republic of China has gone far, and what awaits us is an era of infinite beautiful imagination, full of science and technology, friendliness and equality. If light is a definition, it must be great. For example, the nightingale who bloomed in Lu City used her body to gain a favorable situation and laid a certain foundation for the Republic of China in the article. People will never forget her - the woman in green who dedicated her life to the country - Li Xiyue. Another example is that... (Insert a sentence, please update the author quickly! I like this article so much)

Very nice! I am also a long-time reader of Tomato. The writing is really good. Compared with some old books, this book has great potential. Great support for the author.

The following only represents my personal opinion. The author's writing style is a bit immature, so it may seem a little awkward in some places, but overall it is still very good. The rating is a little low, but I hope everyone will not be led away by the rating, that is, don't listen to other people's opinions. Ciba, there are more positive reviews than negative reviews. After reading many people's negative reviews, I feel that some of them are very unreasonable, but there are also some that make sense. After all, there are 1,000 Hamlets in the eyes of 1,000 people. Some people like it, and some people will naturally dislike it. But you can try to read it. Although this article may not be to the taste of some people, you may like it. If you leave this article just because of some bad reviews, then you will miss an article that is to your liking~ Think about it, what a pity it is! You still have to really listen, read and feel. Only after reading it will you know whether this article is good or not, whether you like it or not [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's really to my liking. It's been a long time since I've seen a heartthrob novel that's not boring and makes people keep reading. Especially the second plane. But I like the material about educated youth, but it's really good.

I feel like this book is very interesting to me. Anyway, it is very, very beautiful [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

There is currently no cp, and the rating is definitely low. The heroine is a good person. She has a very upright outlook on life. She knows that she cannot give others happiness, so she will not take the initiative to provoke others and give others hope. The hostess is very gentle, but the ending of every world is a bit uncomfortable, especially the first world, when Director Liang jumped off the building, which almost made me feel uncomfortable and gave up. But if you like non-CP and heartthrobs, don't miss it. Even if the ending of each world is not good, don't miss it. It's very beautiful, especially the heroine's character. I want to call her wife. I feel that as long as the book doesn't collapse at the end, the ending score will definitely be above 9 points. Don't miss it.

After reading the whole novel, I have some ideas The author is writing this fast-travel novel, but the character creation and the logic of the entire story are very good. There is no torture for the sake of torture, and it gave me a true expression of my feelings. Many tears were shed for the characters in the story, and each character could see their own independent personality. They are not like a group of people written on paper, but give me a feeling of their real existence. The average chapter of each small world is more than 40 chapters, but the story of the entire novel is written. The plot is very complete and logical, and as a fast-traveling heroine, she feels every world with her heart. Even if she wants to complete the task as soon as possible, she has thoughts, feelings, and patterns. She is not like a passer-by in every world, but like a permanent resident in every world. The little moon can warm others in every world. She is the only light shining in the long night!

Woohoo, this is so beautiful. Why didn't I discover this book earlier? It's just too little, not even enough to read [crying] What a peerless beauty the heroine is, gentle, clean, playful and cute, please give me more authors [please update]

1V5 fixed fast-travel story setting, in which the heroine, as the protagonist, will travel to different worlds and interact with five specific characters in each world. These characters may be different identities or personality expressions of the same group of characters. The five people in each world are the same five people. No matter which world the heroine travels to, she will encounter the same five characters. The heroine's identity is Taiyin Xingjun. 5 People, five benevolence. The moon and five kernels, why not call this cp name five kernel mooncakes🥮 [laughing evilly] [Thinking] I feel pretty good.

Jue Juezi! ! ! Love it so much! In fact, this book is not the kind of bug that attracts people, but more of a book that adds points to the initial favorable impression. That is to say, there may be enemies, but most normal people will still subconsciously have a favorable impression of the heroine. Then I felt that the story was quite smooth, and then there was a story that mentioned patriotism, which I thought was quite touching. Each one is very detailed and exciting, and it has no CP, and the extras may have that kind of multiplayer. Every article is be, very in line with my hobbies! I don't like one-to-one love (love can easily make people controlled by others), so it's good to have no CPBE aesthetics or be beautiful alone. It's really great, come on, author! ! !

It's so good, I just read one plane and I knew this book was in my heart. It really made me cry😭😭

It's great, especially the fourth one in the world. I dare not forget about my country despite my humble status. I pay tribute to the heroes. Come on, author, the writing is really good.

I don't quite understand why it only has an 8.6 Rating. It's obviously well written. Except for the third world, which is a bit bland in the first four worlds, I cried when I read the other worlds. Woohoo, please update the fifth world quickly. Can you update it all at once? I want to read it so much [crying]

This book is really a masterpiece! It's really good. I recommend everyone to read it. To be honest, this book is the type of book I like to read. It takes quite a long time to read it. I usually finish a book in 20 minutes. I just read this book for more than ten days.

It's so good. This is the second best book I've read so far. I am afraid that the only thing that amazes me is the Republic of China period, because you can try to imagine the heroes who sacrificed for the country during the war, especially the moment when the heroine was burned by the fire, which made the blood boil. "After her death, Miss Nightingale's heroic deeds were widely circulated, and "Nightingale" became synonymous with beautiful things." It's shocking.

I really like this warm little story and thank the author for bringing Xiyue. Although Xiyue looks weak many times, she is a strong and determined person inside. I like Xiyue very much. I think Xiyue is my ideal state. I also want to be a person like Xiyue, who warms the people around me without being a virgin. Big cheers to the author! In fact, I think the whole article is quite exciting. Some people say that the e-sports article is too novice, but I think otherwise, it is quite interesting. The Republic of China is indeed an article that greatly broadened the pattern, and it will definitely look better. The linkage between ancient times and the world of cultivation is also great! It's just that the three beasts at the end didn't specifically mention their relationship with Xiyue [crying], which made me feel a pity, and I really wanted to see it. Support the author and go to the next book~

The author's writing is quite delicate, the story has a beginning and an end, and the handling of emotions, behavior, language, and actions is also quite good. When reading the book, it will not make people feel disgusted, but will make people want to continue reading. Some of the foreshadowings in it will also interest people and make them want to read the book with questions. Then we will gradually become obsessed with it. But the only drawback is that there are so few people watching it and there are so few ratings. And this book is also serialized.

It's been a long time since I've read such a heart-warming plot in a fast-travel novel, especially the post-apocalyptic Song Yang, which almost brought me to tears. To be honest, I really hate my immersion and empathy abilities, but I still like this book very much. It's so good-looking, sisters!

Okay, it's worth reading. I've been following it, and it's updated every day. It's beautiful (♥∀♥) [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] There is a plane that I suggest skipping, which seems a bit annoying, but I didn't skip it and thought it was pretty good. Big cheers for the author ✊[Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author really likes this novel you wrote. The story is very exciting, the plot is also very good, and the storyline is smooth. Anyway, it is invincible and beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] I hope the author can continue to work hard ＾0＾~, and the author should also pay attention to rest [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

It's nice to watch, but Bai Yueguang's world is a bit cruel [I'm about to cry]

This book is really well written. Each chapter is very in line with the humanities of that era. The writing is really good. I have reread it several times, especially the one about the Flowers of Fortune in the Republic of China. I can particularly understand the people of that era. I beg the author to update it quickly! I'm really looking forward to it! I'm going to go crazy if I don't update this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I hope the author doesn't pay too much attention to some people's comments. I think your writing is very good. The writing style is good and the content is good. Some people will have some disputes about the heroine after reading too many enjoyable articles. In fact, what you wrote is very close to reality. The heroine has amnesia and she only has the system. She has not done anything bad. Follow the plot and avoid the tragic stories that will happen to the original protagonist.

It's really amazing! ! I've been reading novels for so long, and I've also read a lot of fast-traveling movies. It's been a long time since I've seen something so satisfying! ! I cry to death every time at the end, but I really love this! ! The writing style is also very good and the logic is clear. At least I haven't found any faults in it so far! ! Yyds

Although I haven't read much, I recommend that those who are demanding about writing not read it. There are some places that make people pick their feet awkwardly, but I personally like the type of this book and can accept it. Summary: 1. 8.4-8.9 Is the score this book deserves. 2. Mindless reading is a good solution (additional comments if there is a mistake in the later evaluation)

Wow wow wow, it's very well written. The first world made me cry. It was really touching. Internet violence is a murderous knife that can kill people invisible, so you have to think twice before you hurt others. I really cried. Such a beautiful and pure girl ended up slitting her wrists [crying] [crying]