Senior Sister, Hold on Tight and Don't Go Black.

It's good to watch, I would like to call it "The Daily Life of the Funny Junior Brother and the Blackened Senior Sister". It makes me laugh to death [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [face covering] Well, even though he has a cowardly character, at least he will not betray his trust, at least not yet, and he will find various ways to escape when encountering danger. Although he has relied on the system, it is much more interesting than a simple running account like a system upgrade article, and he also wants to become stronger and motivated. I think having such a character is really eye-catching regardless of your strength. Being weak is not a problem It can grow slowly, but if you don't have this determination to dominate yourself, I feel that no matter how strong you are, it is just a decoration. Although the image of the protagonist is not perfect enough, maybe because it is too short now, it is better than many chronicle novels. Anyway, I like this kind of protagonist very much. After reading more about Long Aotian, I really feel that the author's protagonist is very novel, so I support the author very much, five stars

Good book, I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. The original male protagonist who the villain is targeting has a deep hatred for the villain and is not a city slap-in-the-face character. The female protagonist is not the kind of green tea, so don't abuse the villain! Let the protagonist improve his strength quickly [crying]

I'm a little confused as to why I have to complete that task.

So far, this book is good. I found that many people commented that the character of the protagonist is not good, but I think the biggest highlight of this book is the character of the protagonist. He is timid, cowardly, and unmotivated, but he is also affectionate and meaningful. Isn't this the performance of the most ordinary people traveling to another world? Then there is the system. The difference between this book and other villains is that the protagonist's system does not provide much help in terms of strength. I think 007 should play a role in promoting the main plot, and the dialogue with the protagonist is also quite interesting. But one thing that I feel is more uncomfortable is that the protagonist and heroine of Destiny did not spend too much pen and ink on writing, so that I felt marginalized. However, the status of these two people in the article should be very high, but in comparison, the mission goal of the protagonist is more important, and the personality of the heroine is exactly the opposite of the protagonist. Overall, this book is good to read, but there are too few updates. I hope the author will continue to work hard! It's not working anymore, the update speed is too slow, there is no new part in the plot, the interaction with the senior sister is gone, and the combat power is a bit broken.

I watched it all afternoon and it's not very good at all. The writing is better than most Tomato films, and the plot settings are also very nice. It's just that the author rarely communicates with everyone. This is a story of redemption. Compared to other sadistic plots, this book is really just right and doesn't make people feel so uncomfortable. The author's efficiency of updating once a day is too slow. Even updating twice a day is fine. There are only more than 70 pieces. Just work harder and write one or two more pieces every day. I hope the author will not give up. Come on!

In the early stage, the male protagonist can be regarded as the heroine of the novel. At present, it is a novel with many flaws, but it can be seen that the author has something in mind, and there is hope for the future. I look forward to the day when the male protagonist and the female protagonist can stand side by side, and I hope they have a good ending.

In fact, I think when writing this kind of aloof heroine, it is best to describe less inner activities. It is best to describe the changes in the relationship between the senior sister and the protagonist from the perspective of the protagonist. You can change some life details, occasionally care, and protect shortcomings. This kind of heroine is really very nice [blowing kiss]

Unlike other novels where the heroine is quick to tip the scales and settle the matter in a few sentences, the foreshadowing and character description of this novel will not make people feel obtrusive, and the story is also very good.

Please author, please make the male protagonist smarter. It doesn't matter whether he is strong or not. The male protagonist's reflex arc is too long [I'm about to cry]

The introduction of this book should add a label of female protagonist who travels through time. The male protagonist should cry if he cries. The more he looks at it, the more he looks like Feng Xiaoyi (the one who eats peach). There is some kind of little puppy on the dating post, who loves to cry and burps. [Face covering] Everything else is pretty good.

It looks good after all. It may also be the first time I read this type of book. Although the protagonist's fight is mediocre, the supporting characters in it are all very well portrayed and have distinct images. The reading also feels immersive, and I feel like I can fit in. Not poisonous, not brainless. I feel that this article is too bland, love is bland, and salvation is bland after all. There is love, the sweetness of love, and a bit of passion, but not much. But the plot is pretty good, too. I feel like it would have been better if the book was a little more emotionally intense. But even so, it's okay to give this book 5 stars on Tomato.

It's a wonderful book. I like it very much. This is the second book that makes me feel so immersed in it. The first one is Dragon Clan. I really like this kind of weak and weak male protagonist. After all, his personality is almost the same as my own and maybe a little stronger than mine [laughing and crying]. I have a feeling in my heart after reading it. Come on, author! ! !

The writing is okay and quite real, but I really feel that there must be something hateful about pitiful people. . The female villain deserved to die later. Before she officially defected, she had murderous intentions for the male protagonist, who was considered an innocent person. If it weren't for the system, the male protagonist would have died long ago. . It would be great if the male protagonist really fell in love with her later on. . Stockholm?

Except for the male protagonist being a little bit weak, everything is pretty good.

I really think this book is very well written. I hope the author can continue to finish it and don't care about what those people think. I started reading it very early and have been waiting for the update of this book. I have saved more than 20 chapters and it is very enjoyable. I hope the author will not be affected by those bad reviews. Come on! ! !

Come on, come on, update more, author. Not enough, not enough at all. [Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief][Grief]

The author's writing is very good and novel. I hope the male protagonist can grow up slowly and have a slow relationship development with his senior sister [laughter] Up until now, the protagonist's growth has been a little slow in the early stages. Now I feel that the arrest of the Pei family should be a turning point, which will allow the male protagonist to see himself more clearly and grow more. Although the sudden introduction of the Pei family's bloodline is too abrupt, as if the male protagonist has no other room for growth and directly sends physical magic to him, but it is normal considering that the author said before that he was ready to complete the outline. No matter what, I look forward to the growth of the protagonist and the continuation of the plot. This book is quite exciting. Also, when will the update be released? The author...

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot rhythm is okay, but it's not perfect. The author hesitates on some key points and doesn't dare to start writing easily, so some people may think that the plot is too slow, but it may also be that the author needs to make good preparations and choices. All in all, 5 stars are deserved.

I don't know why such an interesting book has such a low score.

Author, when will Ji Li become possessive and affectionate towards Pei's wrongdoer?

The descriptions of the plot and characters are very good, and the description of the system is also relaxed and relaxed, which will not make people feel disconnected. As for the emotional line, every word and action is logical, and it can better reflect the warming of emotions in thousands of turns, making people feel delicate but not sticky when reading. As far as the plot is concerned, it is reasonable but not abrupt, and the development of things is proceeding step by step, which is intriguing.

It's so good. I don't understand why so few people watch it.

It may be a bit boring in the early stage, but it's really exciting in the end

After seeing the latest chapter, Pei, who was previously cowardly, tried his best to save his senior sister, hoping that they could be together well and stop fighting.

The book is pretty good, but the author is a bit slow in updating it. It makes me crazy [crazy] [crazy]

Although I gave it five stars, I think that since it is a growth-oriented protagonist, either in terms of mentality or hard power, it should be a step-by-step growth. But halfway through reading, I found that the protagonist's character and strength have been standing still, which is a bit poisonous. However, the story itself is quite interesting and makes people want to read on, so I gave it five stars to look forward to it.

It's novel, except that the male protagonist is a bit silly. It's like he has no ears at all. Others are okay.

It's okay. The male protagonist is well portrayed. He's not pretentious and then kills people like other novels. It's okay. The plot is quite novel. The male protagonist didn't kill anyone after traveling through time. He's very witty and just an ordinary person. He has the emotions and hesitations of ordinary people. It's very real and interesting. The plot can be written a little slower. Anyway, the male protagonist's strength doesn't need to improve very quickly. Just take your time.

Most of them are more in line with ordinary people's daily life of traveling through time and cultivating immortals, but they also lose part of the protagonist's aura.

At present, it is a slow-burn single-female romance novel with good quality. However, these novels also have a common problem. They forget some settings as they write, so the author needs to have a clear idea. Moreover, this book may not be suitable for the current mainstream reading public. On the other hand, it is easy to wear away the current patience and lead to persuasion. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist can be appropriately accelerated to create a small climax of the plot.