Urban Pirates: Invincible Starts with the Strongest Superman

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I've already thought about the third fruit for you. It's an animal type fantasy beast with fish fruit ability. Come on, don't fail.

It's super good-looking, although there are some minor flaws, but I can see that the male protagonist is not aggrieved, does not pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger, and keeps his mouth shut when he can do it. It's awesome. I look forward to the moment when the male protagonist combines thousands of devil fruits into one body and surpasses the gods.

Yes, keep writing in the current state. Since you have a king, you should crush it all the way. Is this the king? Since the emergence of the so-called another system, your book has been on the road to death step by step. What you read in the novel is the word "cool", what are you going to do with two systems?

To be honest, my eyes lit up when I read the author's novel. I also want to write about the urbanization of the pirate system. It's a pity that the writing is so poor, and my mind is empty as soon as I'm ready to write. I've just read the previous point. Personally, I'd like to talk about my thoughts after reading the author's novel. The probability of getting the fruit seems to be quite simple. With 40% of the world's people, it's simply not enough points. Moreover, the practice of domineering feels too easy. In anime, the body can only practice domineering after a long period of exercise. You just popularized it. Personally, it feels weird. I have saved anime for a year or two and watched the latest ones, so I forgot most of them. I just saw the latest One Piece on Douyin, and then I saw the comments saying that the fruit has side effects. I guess, I think it is the finishing touch. Every fruit has some side effects. This can explain why some strong people in the anime do not take the fruits! Of course, I don't know if the author later added this side effect. After all, I've only read about 10 chapters. Okay, keep watching [laughing awkwardly]

It's very enjoyable and suits my taste. Each chapter is not that short. I hope there won't be a heroine or a harem in the future.

The best configuration is the superhuman type, the natural type, and the fantasy beast type. The third fruit must be the animal type to increase the physical fitness.

Come on, author, give the protagonist more cheats The first fruit is the Superman type. The second fruit is the entire natural type, integrating offense and defense.

Very good. You can refer to Naruto or Bilibili when developing the Thunder Fruit. I feel that the moves in the original Enero are not cool. You have to show off and crush the darkness with thunder [laughter]

Can the author add a Renren Fruit, Phantom Beast Species, and Black Tiger Afu form?

Although I have only read Chapter 38, I am very happy. The character of the protagonist is really good. Finally there is a book that is not about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It is really annoying and frustrating to death. I like what the protagonist said in Chapter 38. If you pretend to be a pig for a long time, the tiger will also become a pig. There is a big force behind you to support you. If you don't accept all the challenges, you will be slow to become a strong person.

The first plot is somewhat annoying, but it starts to get better later on. I personally like this style of book. Good luck, author! [Chigua] The writing style and plot progression of the Qin Kingdom chapter feel weird recently. The point is not to say whether the writing is good or bad, but it feels like a different person is writing the novel. There is a big difference in style before and after. Has the author been affected by reading other novels recently? [Stare]

This novel is very good, I don't understand why the rating is so low [laughing and crying]

Come on, author, arrange all the powerful fruits. Haimi's handling and understanding of the Zhenzhen Fruit is very complete. I am looking forward to the next fruit. Good luck to the author.

Hurry up and update it. It's too difficult. The author is great.

The third devil fruit is an animal type phantom fruit.

Come on, it's pretty good among Pirates fandoms. I just want to be able to create hundreds of millions more fresh fruit abilities and have my own characteristics. I really don't want to see a Nikka fruit coming in the future, and I'll be a little helpless.

Great author, let me read the introduction. Why is the third devil fruit the Piaopiao fruit and not the gravity fruit? Gravity is obviously much stronger than Piaopiao. Gravity can do everything Piaopiao can do, and gravity can also be used to exercise and strengthen the body.

I just want to ask, are there any side effects of Zhenzhen Fruit?

When I saw this book, I thought of the more interesting fruits in the three series that I currently think of. They are basically made-up. The superhuman element fruit can control various elements (chemical, because chemistry can derive various effects, and is much more creative than fantasy elements). The natural water fruit is particularly contradictory, but if used well, it should be very strong. The animal type human fruit is in its own form. I imagine that it can completely control its own body, with a huge gap between the upper and lower limits. If you have any interesting ideas, please add them [laughing]

There are two systems, one for the protagonist and one for the villain. It depends on whether the author handles it well. If it is not handled well, just leave it alone. It is probably not possible. I will wait and see. If the follow-up processing is not good, I will comment. This book is really too poisonous. The first part is fine, but the second part is really getting more and more disgusting. Don't read it. I don't know how to get through the pirate world in the second part. The more I write, the worse it gets. I'm really speechless😖😖😖

May I ask where Bai Gu Gu and Lao Hei went? The book 666 is reborn from Blue Star to the main world and reborn again 666 Strength is cultivated again

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If the needle does not poke, the author can consider that the Momo fruit is the third fruit. Absolute destructive power, all attributes + fruit abilities are amplified 100 times. You can think about the situation when all three fruits are awakened, shock + thunder + Momo + Overlord color Haki, which created a field of absolute destruction before.

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Overall, it's okay. The scenes written by the author are magnificent. I didn't write the details well. I didn't remember what I wrote before, and I couldn't follow up what I wrote before. The flaws are obvious. The transition to opening a new map is abrupt, and it suddenly leads to the next plot. The article is written in a high-spirited manner, just past the point of breaking, and it looks quite passionate. Come on, author, when you combine hardness and softness, you will definitely get nine points.

Although there are a lot of pitfalls, the overall content is still very fascinating. What is more valuable is persistence. This is a rare trait of the author, and I think his concept is also very good. No harem, pure ascension. Objectively speaking, it is still very good.

To be honest, I have now seen the part about coming to the main world. It has been a long time since I have posted a book review. This book seems to be quite satisfactory in the early stage, but fortunately, the theme is novel, fantasy, urban warriors, pirates, devil fruit systems, but it is integrated very well. There are not many flaws. The protagonist's character is always online, and the villain's IQ is also online. The tasks during the period are also described by other personnel, and it is not lengthy and does not make people feel uncomfortable. It makes me feel like I read the first book.

How much longer can I write🤔? I've been working on it for a long time and I haven't finished it yet.

A super exciting novel, overall very good, and the content is also very exciting. How can I put it this way? . The protagonist has developed a very powerful fruit. I hope he will awaken the fruit soon and reach the level of Whitebeard. I hope the author will update more. I look forward to the follow-up. In addition, I am looking forward to the awakening of the next fruit, which is the thunder fruit. I hope it will awaken soon. I also hope the protagonist has the third fruit. I hope the author will update more. Come on.