Pirate: Join the Navy at the Beginning, I Am Justice

I just read it. I just finished it and I think the character of the protagonist is very good. I hope the author will continue to maintain it.

The writing is very good. Pirates, in a nice way, are a group of sailors with a goal. In layman's terms, they kill people and commit crimes for the sake of money, power, reputation, and status.

This book is very good. It perfectly explains the justice in the world of One Piece in my heart. Justice is to clear away the darkness. Many people may think that some pirates should not be killed, but they are thieves, thieves who endanger peace. Luffy just wanted to pursue adventure, but in order to save Ace, he released the pirates in Impel Down. Do you know what this means? Countless ordinary people will not be able to receive safety protection. The people just want to live, but the pirates don't let them live. These powerful pirates never thought about the lives of the people at the bottom, they only cared about themselves, and Luffy was strictly an adventurer.

This is the true navy, which will carry out justice to the end. Highly recommended

This book written by the author is considered to be very good in the category of pirates. The logic and outline are very clear, and there is no conflict. Unlike other pirate authors who write in the front, and then conflict with the previous content, the writing is great. Come on, send flowers, and update more! Don't stop updating, or I'll send you some souvenirs [laughing evilly]

This One Piece can be said to be the most authentic fanfic, with high IQ throughout and very clear logic. Unlike other fanfics that only mindlessly lick Rayleigh and the others, they only have admiration for Rayleigh but no disaster caused by Rayleigh. I'd like to call this book Pirate's Ceiling

It's pretty good. It can be said that there are very few poisonous points, and the protagonist is not weird and doesn't lick dogs. It's great.

I'm fine now, I have a good outlook on life, and I don't want to be a pirate. I also hope that the pig's feet will not be used as eunuchs, but that there will be a female protagonist, a harem [laughs evilly], and no girls will be given away. (Chapter 41) I hope the division of combat power will be changed in the future: S——Dover; SS——Card 2, general candidate; SSS - General and the Four Emperors (after all, the generals and emperors are at the same level, they can be red, green and yellow SSS, Garp Whitebeard SSS+) When I saw some people saying that this is a dark novel, and that it should not have a female protagonist in a murderous and decisive novel, I felt stupid [covering my face] [crying with laughter]. Shouldn't dark literature be the kind that does all kinds of evil and tortures and kills righteous people? What they brought in was probably not from the perspective of pirates, thinking that pirates are the ones who are just, right? ! [What][Awkward laugh] Also, those who are decisive in killing are all enemies, okay, they must treat their own people with normal feelings, why are they not worthy of a heroine?[Awkward laugh][What][face covering], how many emperors and generals in ancient times who were decisive in killing did not have women and wives [What][face covering], being decisive in killing does not mean that you have no parents, wives, children and other relatives, it does not mean that you have no friends, and you are not a lonely person with only enemies in the world [face covering] Forget it, just have one or two, at least you have a home (-^^-)

The rhythm of this article is very good! Very comfortable to read! Two small suggestions: 1. It is domineering and has Devil Fruit abilities that can be played in a variety of ways. Coupled with the various skills from other works provided by the system, the abilities are a bit too much and too fancy. I wonder if the author has considered how to balance it in the later stage? I personally have seen so many works, but I still think it would be better for the protagonist to have less abilities and be more refined, distinctive and memorable. 2. I agree with the concept that the protagonist wants to kill pirates, but when I was debating with Yixiao, the theory of "sacrificing the small to protect the big" seemed a little immature. I would like to recommend an idea to the author! "If you encounter bad pirates, you must kill them, because they will do evil to the world. If you encounter good pirates, you must kill them even more, because they will lure more people to the path of pirates."

I finished reading it in two consecutive days, and it's still very interesting. One Piece is a [top post] Moreover, there is almost no heroine, no brainless harem, and the protagonist is not stupid. He is a lovable protagonist type who kills decisively and has a clear positioning. The only flaw that cannot be called a flaw is that (the author's) criticism of the state and theory of justice are too simple and superficial, and it seems that he has not studied it. I hope the author can draw the protagonist's beliefs more fully. I recommend you a book "Authority and Personality" by Russell. I have been reading it recently. I believe it will give you some inspiration.

Although I have never read the original work of One Piece, this fan-fic is very touching, with the opposition between freedom and order. I hope that the subsequent plot will not collapse. In the world view of One Piece, it is not easy to achieve correct justice. It depends on how the author plays it.

Today I saw Killing Luffy and I received a positive review. This book is the only pirate fanfic I've read that has a protagonist who unswervingly sticks to his beliefs. What I like is firm belief. Unlike other books, For the People, Just Don't Luffy's Changes. It's acceptable to be good, evil, or selfish. It doesn't matter if the world that's not yours is destroyed. What you hate is being a two-pronged person or a dog-licker. If you become a pirate, why don't you call yourself a citizen?

For me, this is a very interesting novel. The male protagonist is a person who is truly determined to pursue his goals. The female protagonist is more like a good friend of the male protagonist. She doesn't hold back when we meet occasionally. It can be read as a novel without a female protagonist. A recommendation from a non-CP party [code live]

Gaga is good-looking and highly recommended. The main character, Sanguan Thief, is not sloppy in his actions. His combat power is in line with the original work and does not collapse like other novels. The writing is also very good and the moves and other descriptions are relatively good. In short, Gaga is good-looking [Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book is very well written. It's just the feeling. The writing of the four emperors is so strong. Even in the end, Red Hair and Hawkeye died too quickly. Basically there was no resistance. Although the strength is much higher, it is still too fast. Hawkeye didn't even resist, he just cut him with one knife. But I have to say that I had a great time watching War on the Top and was very excited. Especially the one with thousands of hands on top of the Buddha. And the part about squeezing Kerby to death was so cool. It's a pity. If the Empress was allowed to see Enelu's attitude towards the male protagonist before she died, the Empress would probably die with her eyes closed. This would be even more heart-wrenching. What's more, what makes me speechless the most is Nami. He actually went to be a pirate and didn't take the hero's words to heart at all. This is what makes me speechless the most. But overall, this book is really good. There is absolutely nothing else like some pirate novels that have a somewhat unhealthy outlook. The navy is evil and the pirates are righteous. No. He has always stood for justice. So 5 points is still necessary.

Except for some flaws, I think the writing is very good, especially the understanding of what the protagonist is talking about is very thorough. I hope the author can keep writing like this and don't randomly change any weird settings. Five stars!

Very good, the timeline is well sorted out, the various characters' personalities are restored well, the characters themselves have their own emotions, everyone has a different personality, at least they don't all idolize the protagonist. The character of the protagonist is also very good. The world of Pirates is just a group of thieves. It is not like the description in the animation, which uses the concept of Pirates to show the goodness of Pirates. They are all thieves, so how can there be any passionate justice? The starting point of the navy is the beginning of justice, changing the twisted world in a righteous way.

Let's not talk about whether the writing is good or not. The author has a good attitude towards readers and is already ahead of many authors. But I would like to make my own suggestions. I think the protagonist's abilities should not be too complicated. Since the author gave the protagonist the Sensen Fruit, he can completely expand his abilities based on this fruit. For example, plant life can heal. , And for example, it can improve the toughness of plants and cover one's body as armor to improve one's own defense. The author can fully use his imagination. In the original work, Devil Fruit can be full of infinite possibilities. I gave five stars because I hope it can inspire the author. I hope the author can write a book with a 9.5 Rating. Come on!

It is a very well-written and innovative book. I have gradually improved my skills through training. Although it is systematic, it is not the kind of article that relies solely on system improvement to make a cup of fun. It is very interesting, but it is a little lacking. I read it in one afternoon. Please keep up the author's efforts. This book will definitely be popular.

Following the previous book, this is a really awesome book written by the author ٩(*´◒`*)۶

It's not bad. The writing in the One Piece novel is pretty good. The writing style, plot content, and character creation are all very good. The key is to have the right three views [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] It's just that killing my beauties in the harem makes me feel bad [laughing evilly]

It's a very interesting book, very passionate, and the pace is not sluggish. The ideal pirate book is if the author can turn the Straw Hats into pirates as much as possible or not kill them. After all, they haven't done anything since they went to sea. The navy has basically never killed them, right? Try to let them live, and do whatever you want with the rest (the empress also tries to let them go, simply because I am an LSP [laughing evilly])

A very good book, the good point is not the plot, but the concept. The plot is a bit cool. The concept is really great. When reading this fanfic, I can always think of the original work. I have to admire Oda's portrayal of the character. He is obviously a thief and makes it so gripping. But it is also the strong concepts of the author and the protagonist that make me re-understand the work "One Piece". I finally found out what the strange, indescribable feeling I felt when I was watching One Piece was. Oda is good at controlling the hearts of the audience, he also understands men very well, and the characters and plots he designed are really handsome, but as mentioned in this article, a thief is a thief, and this negative role positioning is a bit anti-human. The indescribable discomfort is actually the disgust for this negative role deep in his heart, and Oda's portrayal is not obvious, and the character is so handsome, naturally it is difficult to realize the problem. The same is true for "Giant". Some people say that the ending words are bad. Analyze Allen's various settings and analyze why he did this? I analyzed this and that, but starting from the words of Di Ming, I started to feel disgusted in my heart. No matter what the analysis was, people who watched his anti-humanity plot were just unhappy, so much so that I gave up the game immediately after Han Ji (personally like this character) was sacrificed. The same problem also exists in "Naruto", the most obvious one is Uchiha Itachi. How to analyze this person? I don't have that much thought, so I think this guy is a lunatic. Fortunately, there's only one in the story, and the others are all clear villains. What I like the most is that the theme of "Demon Slayer" is clear and positive, and its righteousness is positive. Although it is very boring, it is indeed the most comfortable to watch.

It's pretty good. It's much better than those stories about swordsmen and pirates. Those fan stories about being invincible at the age of ten and asking you if you can't live without it. Some of the plots made me extremely embarrassed. Moreover, in the world of pirates, they use Chinese names. Although I am also Chinese, they always seem to be quite middle-class. I am embarrassed for them.

The book is good, although there are some flaws, but it is generally to my liking. The protagonist is decisive in killing, has IQ, and has a single female protagonist!

[Thinking] I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and overall it is pretty good. However, there are some problems with the character of the protagonist. I feel that he is more like an aborigine than someone who traveled through time. His emotions are easily aroused, and he cares about the navy very much.

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The writing is good, and the IQ is above average. I don't want to say too much about anything else. If you can watch it, you can definitely continue to watch it. If you can't stand it, I can only say goodbye and hope you find a better novel.

It can be considered a One Piece fan novel that Tomato can read, but I think there are still some shortcomings. For example, I was unexpected that Nami became a pirate again. The author said it was the world's corrective power. Since there is this setting, the world's corrective power should come out to help when the Straw Hat Pirates are destroyed. In this way, the author can continue to write several pictures. I saw the protagonist kill Aaron. There was a light in Nami's eyes, and I thought she was going to join the navy to find a protagonist. (Actually, I think it was how the author wanted to write it at the time, but he forgot about the foreshadowing later in the writing, and then just went with it [laughing crookedly]) The second thing is the heroine. I watched four-fifths of it and didn't realize it was the one. Obviously I read the QAQ that the author said in the review, and I only watched it slowly. To sum up: it's a novel worth reading, but the ending may be a bit rushed. PS: Are there any single-heroine novels with Nami as the heroine that you would recommend? [Roll eyes] [Roll eyes] [Roll eyes]

Yes, although the portrayal of the protagonist is not very successful, the story is not bad. As I continued reading, I basically read it without skipping a chapter. It is a slightly slow-heating type, it is not invincible from the start, and there is no forced conspiracy.