Tear up the Cannon Fodder Script in an Otome Game

It's super good-looking. Those who like to read short articles should check it out.

Super pretty! 8.2 Is a bit low, I feel it should be at least 9.1. The heroine is sensible and gentle, and she knows exactly what she wants. What moved me the most was Dumei's ending: the so-called four male protagonists are all game characters, and she and they are not from the same world after all. Play the game, get a little emotional, and experience different stories, but you have to return to your own reality in the end. In the end, the heroine picked up the kitten and named it Guoguo. This ending is really interesting.

I really like this book. I don't say how exciting the plot is, but it's really attractive. It's the first time I read a novel constructed like this. I thought it was a quick travel or a body guide at first. But I wasn't really surprised at all (maybe I'm ignorant). It's really good.

Very nice, but too short. [Send heart][Send heart] The characters in it are all very vivid, and they are not black and white. Everyone has two sides, which fully reflects that sometimes you are not wrong about certain things, but the other person is not wrong either. People in this world are not always fair, bright and rational. It can only be said that people are unpredictable and fate plays tricks on people. We can only take care of ourselves, do our duty, and then show affection. Except for a few female characters with dark hearts, the other girls are pretty good. They don't engage in female rivalry, and they don't criticize the original heroine. The original heroine is just an ordinary girl who is a bit innocent, silly and sweet. She will also have the little emotions that an ordinary girl occasionally has, but she can adjust them and does not harm others. The hostess is sober and intelligent, and she will do her own heart-warming acts of kindness within her ability. At the same time, instead of being trapped by the feelings of the male protagonists and staying together, it is better to forget each other in the world and be beautiful alone. From the beginning to the end, we have a firm belief in returning to the real world to see our relatives and friends. I like this kind of heroine very much, and I also like this novel very much! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's just great. The three views are correct, the setting is not contradictory, and it satisfies the various tastes of our readers. The male protagonists are also excellent ~ I love it. Once there are more chapters and more people rate it, it will definitely become popular! The author please work hard on the fonts, it's so beautiful that I can't read it enough!

It's not bad. This kind of short article is very suitable for someone like me who is impatient and slow to read. You can tell from my reading time [face covering] but there are still shortcomings. The increase in favorability is a bit bizarre, like Ji's sudden rise to 80, which is quite weird [Thinking] There is a fourth world that has not been completed. I can't really accept a kidney transplant, but I still hope that the heroine will be beautiful [send heart] Overall, Dada did a great job, cheers and update [air kiss]

It's really well written, especially the first one. Big cheers for the author There are few fast-travel stories that I can read from beginning to end. The heroine is very sober, and I really like how beautiful the heroine is in the final ending. After all, it is time travel, and it is more appropriate to return to reality in the end.

I stayed up late to read it. It was really good. When I said that the heroine didn't want to stay here, I actually didn't understand it because the other fast time travels I read were all illusory and fake. But I forgot that everything the heroine experienced in this book really happened. Imagine if I were the heroine, I would come back. I wouldn't just be there. After all, there are no relatives there and no one I really care about. I feel sorry for the feelings of the system. But if it were me, I would choose this way and it was really good. Recommended to everyone Let me say one more thing: the heroine is very realistic and does not lose herself in the small world. I like this very much.

I really like the ending of Homecoming! The book I found not long ago was still being updated at the time, but when I was reading it, it suddenly came to an end, and I finished reading it in two days. It's quite interesting. The heroine is always sober and treats the four male protagonists as paper characters. She doesn't get addicted or fall into trouble. The male protagonists each have their own characteristics, I really love them! It was Ji who discovered the identity of the heroine. I was looking forward to it in the following strategies, but he didn't show up much later, and I felt a little disappointed [grievance] When I finally return home, the heroine is also a pitiful person. Not with anyone, open ending, pretty good. Short stories, I like this kind of author who doesn't procrastinate! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

In fact, the speed of each world is very fast, but when reading, it still feels like normal speed. Everything about the encounters of each male protagonist and the follow-up are clearly written, which makes it very comfortable to read. You won't feel stuck in your heart after finishing reading. Many things have not been explained clearly. I really like A Yin's character, and I'm very looking forward to the follow-up of Shura Field. I personally like Ji and Duan now. I like Ji's sensitivity quite a lot. As for Duan, I can't say clearly. Maybe it's because he is the richest, and he had an okay childhood. He has a good outlook on things, and there is nothing wrong with him. As for this kidney, he was such a scumbag that he didn't realize it. He was just a little excited about the subsequent sadistic plot. Hh, this is the truth. I feel that it is quite suitable for quick travel and strategy articles. The plot advances quickly and is comfortable to watch.

I actually wanted to give it four and a half stars, but the book reviews didn't seem to support half a star. (=_=) Overall, the plot of this book is very good, but the writing may be insufficient, and some things that should be included are not highlighted. The gradual changes in emotions between the characters are not very obvious. Many details can well reflect the characters' personalities, but the parts that shape the characters' images are not handled very well. After watching it, I found that maybe it was because of the tight pace and that many parts were still vague and unclear, but luckily the character setting was very good and the plot design was also good. In fact, compared to some strategies with childish writing, stupid plot ideas, and illogical appearance strategies, this type of strategy that attracts characters and resonates with them through experience is very good and can be watched. I think this book will leave a big impression on me, compared to some other books. In short, this book is a book that can be used to kill time in your spare time, but it is not recommended to read it carefully. After reading it briefly, the beauty of this book will be stronger. Finally, please come on, the author, it will be better if you make some detailed adjustments (ง •̀_•́)ง

Overall, this novel is quite to my liking. Each small world is written very briefly, so it doesn't seem too procrastinating. Book lovers who like short stories can enjoy it. The heroine and the original heroine have also grown, which makes me feel quite gratified. Of course, the goal of the heroine in the novel is always clear, which is to go home. She did not choose to stay in the small world, but returned to her own world after completing the task and torturing the hero. But I feel that each small world is not very complete, and has some shortcomings, which can be regarded as a kind of blank space. Especially after the heroine returns to her own world, it ends immediately, so it seems... Well... A little bit abrupt. I'm quite looking forward to Shura Field or the subsequent descriptions of these characters. Of course, the heroine's unique beauty is also good, but I feel that the heroine can be described more in her own world. The ending is too sudden. Overall it's pretty good, I hope the author can continue to work hard.

Very nice! Really A bit regretful but not much The male protagonists of each story have their own strengths and weaknesses. But the reason why Yinyin met them is an answer. Yinyin has her own life in the real world. I expected her to want to return to the real world, but her consistency is unexpected. Maybe Yinyin's parents in the article are a reason. She is really determined. She is different from many other heroines in the article (no Lata, no Lata). In short, I like the character of Yinyin very much. In other words, the male protagonist in the first story is actually my favorite (maybe because I am still in school now, hahahaha). I like this type of boy very much. Hahaha, Jiang Qiao is very good. Of course, the other male protagonists are also good, haha. I have a lot of messed up words... I have no talent for commenting. All in all, this book is very, very, very... Beautiful! ! ! It's not long, so let me read them all! ! !

It is a very interesting novel. The plot lines of the four worlds are very clear. The pace is fast but the content is also very rich. The plot is fascinating. Each story is quite novel and touching. The heroine has a good character, but the connection is not very natural in some places. Overall, it is very good and worth reading ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ!

How to become a master? The writing is good and the plot is interesting. The first world is detailed and very good, but some worlds, especially the third one, feel very careless. Is it a stream of consciousness? ! There was suddenly very little explanation at the end, and it went by in a hurry, which made people a little confused. They couldn't clearly understand the process of falling in love, although it was foreshadowed that there was an emotional foundation. But I really like the heroine character! ! ! The writing style is also great, and the flaws are not hidden, or are they not considered flaws in the eyes of others? All in all, I still like it very much and look forward to its future development! [Love] Ending with flowers~ The overall feeling is a bit rushed. After reading the author's comments, it may be excusable. But the feeling after reading the whole book really can't fill the expectation that I had when I started the first world. Alas...

I love this book, I can't remember when or how I came across it. I like the beautiful ending, and I have incorporated every different sound. I don't know if there will be any extras, but I'm really looking forward to it! ! I wish you and all your book friends a bright future and a wonderful new year!

I really like Yinyin's self-determination: she doesn't covet false warmth and beauty, she doesn't miss people and the world that don't belong to her, and even though she's not a pure good person, she still has a bottom line that she can stick to... There are so many things about her that are worthy of praise, so she deserves a happy ending. The only regret is that the plot is not complete enough. The favorability of Ji Zhixian and Duan Sinian rises too fast but there is no specific plot to support it, which makes the pain of separation seem unreal (especially Ji Zhixian, although the author himself admits that this is his preferred male protagonist, he and Yinyin are not suitable, so I am very happy that the ending of Yinyin did not miss anyone) I especially like the author's narration style. The part where Jiang Qiao suffers and regrets really made me feel hurt (although I have no sympathy for Jiang Qiao, a character who cannot control the boundaries of relationships, but seeing this kind of plot always makes me happy and sad). Anyway, I'm looking forward to the teacher's new works! ! !

Hi, thank you to the author for your hard work. I think the author wrote it very well. For example, the chapter in Duan felt that it ended a bit too quickly. And I really wanted to read the extra chapter, but I also saw it from the side. It was very well written, so I felt that it was still unfinished. If among these four chapters, I would choose the one that is the most unsettling. I think it should be the first one. Well, because the author is such a bitch, she is so good at the details [thinking] [thinking] (I really want to read the extra chapter of the heroine's mother, what I want to see is the series of results) Of course the author doesn't have to worry about it [love] [love], thank you for the author's work, which makes me feel like my eyes are brand new (hehehe, I'm just kidding, don't be angry) I wish the author all the best 2023. 7.29

In the ending, the heroine is alone and beautiful. Although they are in the same world, the four stories can be read independently. The female protagonist is beautiful and strong, but the ending is abusive to the male protagonist. The heroine chose to return to reality, so there was no four-person Shura field. The writing is fluent and the book is boring but can be read [Learned]

It ended a little quickly, but I still have a lot of regrets. Except for the first story, which is relatively complete, the rest of the stories feel quite fast-paced. For me, the first story is still my favorite, but the most pity is that there is no extra chapter 2 of Gu Lan. I feel it is a pity that I did not see Lai Yin's reaction after her death... Lai Yin did not wait for what she needed and wanted most throughout her life and even after her death [crying] [crying] [crying]

The writing style of this book is really delicate, and Gu Laiyin is really gentle. Especially when he was in the fourth world, he gave the original owner Gu Laiyin (Volume 1) the most beautiful flowers in the flower shop that day, and also paid attention to Ah Y. He was really trying his best to help others. He was really good, and he was still alive and clear. He always knew what he wanted. Love it, love it [like][like]

I really like the ending and the plot is okay. After watching the endings of the first three male protagonists, I actually felt nothing at all until the last male protagonist, Duan Si Nian. He makes me feel very good, gentle and strong, and he knows how to respect the heroine. I quite like him, but I also don't want him to be with the heroine. The heroine is very good, and I think she deserves a better person, for example, someone who has no purpose at the beginning, but simply thinks she is very good and wants to get close to her.

It's very interesting. Although it may have many regrets and shortcomings, I still think it is a good work. The final result is Dumei, which is actually not surprising... Emmm, forgive my poor expression skills. At the end, what I felt was a bit like a kind of open-mindedness, relief after going through hardships, which made people feel at ease and calm. I think that might be a good ending for Gu Laiyin. Forgive me for not being able to finish the book as soon as I found out about it now. Maybe what I understand and feel is not correct, I don't mean it that way, please forgive me (dog head saves life)

What a beautiful book. The characters in each story are vivid and full-bodied. It can be read as a daily entertainment novel. Each story chapter is very short and the plot is not protracted. It is so awesome that you can read it with your eyes closed. The heroine is also very interesting and super sensible.

This is the first Tomato book that I have read. I really like the calm, rational and gentle protagonist. I feel that it is a delicate and eloquent writing style. I am very much looking forward to the author's detailed story of a single world. The main thing is that the ending of the protagonist's unique beauty really touched me.

Yinyin wrote one chapter after another in her life. She never gave up going home and never bowed to the world. She knows very well that she is also a victim, so she does not overflow with sympathy because of the system's retention. This kind of heroine is the real heroine in her story. The author writes very well, come and take a look.

I like this book. The plot is not procrastinating. I like the heroine very much. I won't give up returning to the original world for anyone. The key is that each small world is relatively short and can be read quickly. I like each small world very much. The author is really good at writing [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

I can't write anything. I can only say that it looks so good that my whole family will go see it! I really love it to death. I love it to death. I love it to death. This is the first novel that suits my taste so much. I love it to death. It has been written into my heart. If there are still people who haven't read this book, I will really cry to death. I have loved the author for ten thousand years. It is really good to read. The ending is OK. There is no cp. It is absolutely brilliant. It's just that the chapters are a little short and I haven't read enough! It's so good to watch. The relationship between the heroine and the men in the world and the plot are handled very well. I love it! Families must check it out! Watch the end~~[cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Don't be fooled by the low rating, this book is super good-looking, and even though the heroine didn't end up with the other male protagonists, it still had a good ending. The heroine returns to normal life, gets the health of her relatives, and also gets the guilt compensation from the heroine's father, even if the heroine doesn't care. The heroine has a good personality and is not bad at all. She is a very rational and kind person. The author's writing is very good, and the heroine has a well-developed character. She knows exactly what she wants. Overall, this book is very good and worth recommending. You won't lose money if you invest in it! !

Overall, it is good, but there are still a lot of things that are difficult to explain. The article has loopholes, and some places are not coherent. The author has dug a lot of holes and has not filled them. I feel that the author may not be strong enough in writing and has not expressed what he wants to describe. Sometimes I feel like I am choked halfway through reading, but it is still very interesting. Thank you for the author [Love]