Change the introduction and leave it in place.
The protagonist has a golden finger, but he doesn't seem to have it completely.
In order to increase his strength, the protagonist ate a devil fruit and was almost silenced.
The protagonist finally felt that his strength was sufficient, and he faced either a general or a marshal.
Reader comments
It's okay but a bit boring
It's okay, but the progress is a bit slow. The protagonist should quickly become awesome.
It's okay but a bit boring
It's okay, but the progress is a bit slow. The protagonist should quickly become awesome.
Not bad, it tastes like that