Crayon Shin-Chan: General Kizaru Traveled Through Time and Became the Director of the Garden

In fact, this kind of fan fiction is not very popular, but don't be discouraged and believe that the harder you work, the luckier you will be. Come on [laughs]

Great imagination and good writing style

It's quite novel, it's the first time I've read this type of book.

Very well written, keep it up 😊

Very fresh and very good

Super pretty! The interaction between Polu and Xiaoxin is super fun and funny. Not many people can play the role of a general. Hahahahaha. Each character's personality is very vivid and independent. Come on!

The author must finish writing, come on

I never expected to be able to dress up these two worlds [face covering] It's just that Xiaoxin's role is a bit limited

The writing is okay, keep up the good work

It's well written, but it's not my favorite type, but it's still an excellent one. I hope to start another Crayon Shin-chan book after this one is finished (it has been replaced by someone else).

It's pretty good. It's the first time I've seen (๑•॒̀ ູ॒•́๑) la la la [smile] [smile]

I feel like my daily routine in the early days was pretty good. The more I watch it, the more magical it becomes. It feels very wonderful [laughs awkwardly][laughs awkwardly][laughs awkwardly]

I only read the first part, and overall it's pretty good. Xiaoxin and the others' descriptions are spot-on, and the overall style is easy to heal. But you have to be patient. Come on, author.

Very good, it feels like Crayon Shin-chan The description of the environment and the creation of the atmosphere are really outstanding, and the characters are also very three-dimensional.

This book is really good! Although it's unfinished, I came here to see daily life. When I look at it from the front, I feel that it feels that way. The further I look at the back, the less it feels.

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]