Live Broadcast of Mercenaries: the Battle Starts from Within the Wa State

Nice! Come on, the author [currently working on the manuscript]

I feel that the protagonist in the author's novel is very pitiful. A 17-year-old high school student was assigned to work as a mercenary abroad. He not only had to fight and kill on the battlefield day and night to save his life, but also had to flirt with various girls on the battlefield. He also had to deal with major female anchors on the Internet. So, can the author tell readers what the main plot of this book is? Is it a mercenary or an urban romance? If the two go hand in hand, aren't you afraid that the protagonist will suffer from schizophrenia? Although writing a book is not easy, I still hope that the author can rationally distinguish between priorities and personal preferences. Finally, I hope the author can

For the time being, I just read the previous part and expressed my opinion. The first point is that you can only afford ability through live streaming. You will be blocked at every turn. Damn the system. Don't say anything. It's impossible if the system has appeared. Everything is possible. With the system, everything is possible. This live broadcast is the ability of the protagonist to survive. The ability will be blocked by others. I can't do anything. I haven't finished reading it yet, but the previous point is a big flaw. {My own opinion}

I think the previous plots are very good, but I think if the system wants to live broadcast, it can create a special live broadcast room, at least it will not be blocked. I don't understand what I'm trying to express in this ending. Is our protagonist brother going to find that mercenary to avenge the captain? Or should he develop slowly and then find that mercenary group? I personally don't like this ending a bit, but the previous plot is quite to my liking, but the chapters are a bit short. Why do I feel that the ending is a bit weird? I can't explain it, it just feels weird. Anyway, it's pretty good-looking. It's all pretty good-looking. The plot is also very Western.

The writing is very good, the plot is also very compact, the brothers just rush in and it's over! [Laugh]

The book is very good, you can give it a try

Come on, author! ! !

666666 Is awesome, brother, it's so awesome.

It's good, but I don't feel like it has the ending.

Very good, come on

Chapter 30, Disguise Skill, you can disguise by touching a person. Disguise lasts for a week. You need to touch again to disguise again. Author, do you know what you are writing about? Why don't you become Ultraman? The main reason is that his skills are so awesome that if he kidnapped the president of a certain country, wouldn't that be the pinnacle of power? You can wear a vest as you like, and it doesn't matter even if you are discovered, as long as your true appearance is well exposed. What else is there to write about?

It's a bit poisonous. Baili Qianba doesn't know what to say here. If you save someone, just send her away. Don't ask anything. If it was a man, I don't believe you would go to the base. To be honest, you are still a pervert. As a result, you were attacked that night. If there was no system, you would have died many times. If you don't have the strength, you still want to be a saint. In the world of mercenaries, you still want to be a saint. You can save people, but you don't want a saint. After you save it, you will be fed and taken care of.

Keep up the good work, keep up the good work, keep up the good work

Fortunately, I give the author some points

Very exciting

Very nice

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you, come on

It can be said that it is a simple article, but it is also a pretty cool article.

I think it's better to write about mercenaries as much as possible. After all, this is a mercenary novel.

666 Was well written, but it ended too quickly! ?