I Raised a Female Assassin

Very good, but I hope to open a harem, or give Xiaoxiao and Xinyu a very perfect ending, but I prefer to open a harem, because it is still a bit regretful not to be with the protagonist in the happy ending. The author continues to work hard

The title of the book is good, but it is a harem, a failure.

I felt pretty good about what I wrote earlier in this book. It's a new genre. It would be nice if the heroine was just a yandere 😏 I just like to see the feeling that no one else but the male protagonist can touch her (Chi v Chi) The author gives a big boost (ง •̀_•́)ง

To be honest, it's really disgusting. There is a better way to go than to write about the harem. The male protagonist is just an ordinary person, and he is constantly getting into trouble by those two idiots. If Su Xi'er hadn't died long ago, and Su Xi'er started to live again, she could have opened a milk tea shop with the male protagonist and lived a normal life. Wouldn't that be great? In addition, the two eldest ladies are causing trouble. They are of different classes and cannot get along with each other. They are still stalking each other. Moreover, some of the common sense written by the author is wrong. Please read more information. Although it is a novel, you really cannot treat readers as fools. If you continue to follow the harem routine, it will definitely collapse. Let's cut it off as soon as there are not many chapters left. You may feel regretful, but who has no regrets in his life? Later, when he enters samadhi, Su Xi'er will be as strong as a good wife in the spring. Really, you have to disgust people. If you don't have that worldview, you have to go this way.

Sorry, the title of the book seemed strange at first, but it's much better than I imagined (it turns out it's 1:02 in the morning now). I really like Xi'er, the sister who is only good to Yang Cun. The character of Xiaoxiao is quite well created. As a rich young lady, Dong Xinyu was so calm when she was kidnapped. It can also be seen that she has courage, dares to love and hate, and her image is also well created. The author's writing is very to my taste! I hope the author will keep updating! Although the score is low (although I don't think 8.7 Is a low score) (●'◡'●)♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥

Well, the subject matter is quite interesting, but the writing makes it difficult for me to read it. And from the title of the novel, I can tell that it should be written around a heroine, but it somehow makes me feel like I am writing a diary. At the beginning, the heroine followed the male protagonist without any plot advancement. It was very abrupt. There must be another heroine, without any prefix. At least it was a story or someone I knew before. Nothing made me a little confused. And when I read it, I felt like I was recording events, not writing a novel. Moreover, there is no emotion, and the words are relatively stiff, which makes people have no desire to read on. Also, the plot changes very quickly. The next plot is coming before the previous plot is finished. Well, it would be much better if we changed it and added this better subject matter. Personal opinion🍉

I hope the heroine can be alone and not have a harem

The front is very good, more everyday. There was still a bit of fighting, but it really fell apart later on. There were a lot of big battle scenes, and the daily routine almost disappeared. But later on, I finally saw the character of the protagonist clearly. The protagonist is a powerful coward. Forget about the previous article, the protagonist is a normal person after all, so just be timid. Later, the enemy will come to the doorstep, and the protagonist will be forced to fight every day. If nothing changes later, I feel that the protagonist will not change unless the heroine dies.

Okay, I don't want to scold you anymore, I'm just selling sheep's heads to dog meat. Was this what the author planned to write in the first place? Just give in to the market! Alas, it's not a harem, what is it? Purely speechless. You can't escape from clichés. Why did you write this book in the first place?

It's just so so. How many times has the male protagonist been in danger because of Dong Xinyu? The male protagonist doesn't mention it, so why doesn't the female protagonist mention it? Everything will be fine after the female protagonist saves people? At least she should express her dissatisfaction. The female protagonist who doesn't know anything about food protection is honestly a little dissatisfied.