Dragon Ball: My Practice Is Broken

If the author forgets the setting, he can check the information first. For example, there is no 1x Kaio Fist in the original work. The official setting is at least 2x Kaiowen. Let's take a precaution first. Beerus's evaluation when he saw Goku for the first time was "It doesn't look like he can defeat Frieza." That is to say, this At that time, Goku's normal combat power would not be higher than Frieza's 120 million back then, so the Majin Buu chapter wouldn't have as many people on the Internet as everyone with hundreds of billions. Super 3 is 400 times normal. Fat Buu back then was estimated to be just over 40 billion, and Gohan Buu should have started with hundreds of billions.

It's pretty good, but it feels a little weird for the protagonist to take in Bulma and No. 18 At the same time, but it's okay.

The writing is really good. At a time when Dragon Ball fandom is full of garbage, this is already a masterpiece. However, there is still one biggest flaw. The writing is not good, but there is nothing we can do about it. After all, it is good for a new author to write like this. Practice makes perfect. Keep working hard, gold will always shine, although there are not many people yet.

Author, let me tell you, this book is one of the most interesting. If you dare to stop updating it, I will give you a hard time [laughing] [laughing]

A protagonist who is very intelligent, has goals, and is also very sinister, which suits me very well [laughs evilly]

I have finished reading the book. It is well written. I hope to write more. I have urged it to be updated. The author has a few suggestions. You can be outrageous but don't jump around. You can not find margins but don't write randomly. You can have your own ideas. After all, it is a novel written by you. It is reasonable as long as it is not forced to explain. Everyone can accept it. There are more funny things. The plot of Dragon Ball Super is also good. But Goku has completely turned into a fighting maniac. He is ignored by all the idiots. It is not a good image. You can modify it to let him take care of the family. Then our lunch nephew can also be strengthened so that he doesn't go to waste studying. Or we can bring both of them to do scientific research or something. Art, don't make it too miserable. Goten can modify it and modify it. The scumbag is too torturous.

I've seen a lot of comments like, "The fighting power is so strong, why can't people turn to ashes if I slap them?" No, let me ask you, during the Dragon Ball Super period, when Sun Wukong shook hands with ordinary people, the other person didn't turn to ashes? Generally, they have strong control over their own power at this time, so this won't happen. Dragon Ball's combat power is indeed very high, but you must also be sensible! [Cover face][cover face]

To be honest, this is the better-looking Dragon Ball I have ever seen. Why? Because this protagonist has brains, in my opinion, there are too many bugs in Dragon Ball. Other Dragon Ball novels only have battles, but this protagonist will use a lot of resources since childhood, and it was written from a young age, which is quite good. It's just that Dragon Ball is a subject that relatively few people read, and that's probably why the author rarely updates it.

It would be boring to have a harem, you know the author [Thinking]

It's okay, at least I haven't seen it written that the bad characters have become stronger because of the change in the protagonist. Also, since the author has great potential in writing the protagonist, I hope the author will give the protagonist a description of what a dragon can become. It's enough to be as strong as a Saiyaman. As a traveler from the Dragon Kingdom, his bloodline is stronger than that of the God of Destruction, right?

The name of the novel is actually "Daily Life of a Saiyan Nanny" [laughing and crying]

"A gambling father, a seriously ill mother, a school-going younger brother and a broken her." "If I don't help her, who will?" "I just lament... The love without material things is in disarray, and the love with material things is caught by the police. The author will update quickly. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Not bad, but the language expression is a bit stretched, not rigorous enough, and the language description is too frivolous, giving people the impression that the protagonist is not mature enough. Hopefully it will be corrected in the future.

It's the first time I've seen a non-Saiyan protagonist. Since I can't dye my hair, why don't the author arrange for colored contact lenses for the protagonist [Thinking][Thinking]

It's okay, I can watch it, but it's actually a bit not to my taste. I watched the end of the Final Tournament of Power [thinking], but I still insisted on watching it and gave it 5 stars. It can be said that it is quite interesting, but after watching the end, I felt a bit tasteless [face covering]

Although it looks very good, Dragon Ball seems to rely on blood [laughing and crying]

A single female protagonist is better, a single female protagonist will chase you to the end

The author is so slow to update! 😂 From the beginning of last year until now, I've only been able to write like this

Su Su is here, Su Su continues to do the mission of Red Thread Fairy

Well enough. . Finished reading. Two women, Bulma, number 18. Son Goku and Vegeta, these two are low-level gods of destruction. A little bad.

Author: In the morning, "The Voice of China", at noon, "Boys and Girls Rush Forward", in the afternoon, "If You Are the One", in the evening, "The Most Powerful Brain", in the middle of the night, "Outstanding Chinese", in the early morning, "Avenue of Stars"

This book is good. It is all based on my own ideas. As long as the author doesn't write it himself later, it will be fine. Write it well and don't dig holes without repairing them.

The writing is very good, much better than the ones next door.

The plot is reasonable and compact, the sentences are smooth, and the descriptions are humorous and reasonable. It can be seen that the author is very well prepared. Although there are only more than fifty chapters, I can't wait to give it a five-star review.

Come on, the author, the writing is very good! ! ! (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

Come on, author, it's so wonderful. Ever since I read this book, I can't stop laughing.

Author, hurry up and spread the sweets. Everyone is eager to read the sweet articles. Come on!

I think if the protagonist doesn't have a system, he can try to practice according to the recorded cultivation methods of the original earth, such as cultivating immortals. Otherwise, how can the protagonist compare with a Super Saiyan?

I just watched a wonderful and unfinished movie, and then I clicked on this one. I found that the writing was quite good, and I liked the main character, so I won't find fault with it. I gave the author five stars and hope he will continue to write good works.

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