Villain: Check the Script and Start by Raising an Empress

Ketengtun finally made his debut. Although not many people saw it, I still want to thank Xiaodian! This is the first release of a new book, so it's very important for you to give it a thumbs-up and give it a thumbs up. It's YaYa's motivation! Thank you! Bang bang bang (knock one) Realm: Body refining realm, Pulse Chong realm, Qi gathering realm, Sea-opening realm, Xuan-condensing realm, Yuan-building realm, True elixir realm, Law-breaking realm, Life-and-death realm, Response to tribulation realm, Ascending to heaven realm, Realm Body refining realm, pulse charging realm, Qi gathering realm, sea opening realm, Xuan Ning realm, Yuan building realm, true elixir realm, law breaking realm, life and death realm, tribulation facing realm, ascending to heaven realm

It's a pretty good book, but can the author write more? It's not enough [laughing] Author, after reading this, you may be about to lose a book fan. You may be thinking why you should be a little self-aware about this. Look at what you wrote, what is it? The storyline is very good, and the character creation is also very good, but you have two very serious shortcomings, that is, the buffs for the destiny protagonists are too low in word count. In the future, you can write less about the buffs for the destiny protagonists. Don't write too much, like that Li Taibai has one side, and the other one is the most serious. Look at other people, there are either four or five updates a day. I don't ask much from you, just ten updates a day, that's enough [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] (Please support me, all the pretty boys and little fairies, and let the author see it)

Author, I'm looking forward to the following plot, so I'll update soon [face covering]

It's good to read, but updates are slow. Go to the author's house, play around, and see what he does day by day. I'll give you some loose skin.

It looks good. It's finally not the kind that starts out as rubbish. It's getting good reviews.

It's pretty good. This start is either useless or makes too many enemies. The protagonist of Destiny is like an unbeatable Xiao Qiang, which makes me a little worried, haha. The author can write more plots about plundering heaven-defying opportunities. I would like to read them more.

I hope that in the future the author will write about the origin of the system, for example, as a gift from his future self. I don't want to study, but I want to go to school.

Hahaha, Si Guoyi. As an old bookworm, I have seen countless villains since the birth of Tomato. The boy Su Yixian is really the god villain I am looking for! [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Are you brave enough to update this every day? It takes more than ten or twenty pictures every day to be worthy of our group of handsome readers [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It is super exciting. Although the front may seem like an ordinary systematic article, the back part involves the plot about time and space, explaining some of the pitfalls that the author has buried in the front, allowing readers to travel in three different time and spaces in the past, present, and future. There are also many points worth thinking about in the book. We slowly understood the mystery of the protagonist's life experience through reasoning based on clues, which made me appreciate the charm of fantasy novels. Super exciting! ! !

As we all know, you shouldn't read book reviews when reading a book. There may be spoilers and bad emotions after reading them, so don't write random book reviews. I believe that most authors have an outline and will not mess up [Love][Love][Love]

Okay, your Su Yixian, I approve it I don't know what to say. What's written at the end is very disappointing. Is this the first ancient clan? No matter what you do, you have to give people face. The Yan family is so weak that it can be completely destroyed. Your Su Yixian, it is difficult for me to admit it now.

It's good to read but it's too short. The author should update it quickly. It's not enough to read at all.

I have been following it for more than a week, and I really enjoyed reading it. This book is more like a traditional fantasy system of cultivating immortals, and the author has basically never driven a car. There are currently 540,000 words, and there are still many characters that have not appeared in the introduction. I can only wait for the author to update it slowly.

Very good. Don't be a eunuch, don't be a mess either.

Let me first state that I have no malicious intent and am just offering some opinions. I couldn't stand it when I saw the protagonist secretly sabotaging Lin Feng's elixir at the auction and falsely accusing it of being defective. Although he is originally a villain, as a protagonist, he should at least have a positive spirit mentally. Previously, Lin Feng attacked the protagonist secretly, but even though nothing happened, he pretended to be injured and vomited blood to "deceive" other women's sympathy, causing Lin Feng and Xue'er to break up. Personally, I think it's a bit underhanded! If someone attacks you in a sneak attack and wants to kill you, it's okay for you to beat him, cripple him, kill him, insult him and trample him, it's fair and aboveboard! But it is still despised to pick up girls with this kind of hypocritical and deceptive behavior. Later, the auction house deliberately destroyed Lin Feng's elixir, destroying the reputation and interests of the entire auction house (collective) for personal grudges. In any novel, he would be a proper villain. If you add a little plot to let the woman find out that the man exposed it, it would be another story [face covering], and you can't quibble because you have done bad things in the first place and your heart is sinister and you deserve retribution. As long as the protagonist is not the protagonist, the final ending will definitely be a burp and a miserable death. Finally, I would like to declare that I really have no ill intentions towards this book. I just want to complain. It may be that the protagonist does not conform to my personal values. That's all. After all, I read novels of this type for fun and I can't ask for so much [laughs]. It's not easy to write such a long book review for the first time. Don't complain if you don't like it. Finally, I hope the author can improve it a lot and make the protagonist more likable. I also wish you good results and may all the bosses make a lot of money! 🎉[Love][Like this post][Like this post][Like this post]

Single heroine—————— Destiny's Son 31 Lin Feng's soul and the soul body in the ring were imprisoned in the soul bead. 84 The Martial Emperor of the Upper Realm was reborn and Wu Fa died. Long Chen, the protagonist of 87 Destiny, is full of loyalty. 🟥🟥🟥Kung Fu Pills🟥🟥🟥 Huangxuan earth and sky, 🟥🟥🟥Weapons🟥🟥🟥 🟥🟥🟥 Realm 🟥🟥🟥 Physical training, pulse stimulation, spirit gathering, secluded sea, Xuan condensation, Yuan building, true elixir, law breaking, life and death, coping with calamity, ascending to heaven, Holy Realm: Shaping Tao, Nine Transformations Realm, Immortality, Nirvana, Spirit Transformation Realm, Heaven and Earth, Divine Ruins, Imperial Order, Immortality, Great Emperor, 🟥🟥🟥Single heroine🟥🟥🟥 [The ancient tribe in the upper world ♦ the orphans of the ancient tribe] Qiu Qingli—— ————Forcibly taking prisoners———— [Upper Realm Sky Fox ♦ Spirit Clan] Bai Youyou—— Jiantian Pavilion ♦Tiannu Lin Rou——

Life is about daring to fight, and every choice we make will change us. Start working hard from now on, everything will come in time The most beautiful years of youth! How can we not let go and fight for the end of the world? Even if it is a weak light, we must spread it to the place that needs the most warmth. When you stop to rest, don't forget that others are still running. Don't be anxious, the best will always appear when you least expect it. Then what we have to do is: work hard with hope and wait for good things to appear Destiny will not treat you badly if you are working hard to become a better person. Although it is very difficult right now, this experience may bear fruit in the future! What kind of gesture you give to the world, what kind of life will the world give you in return? Take dreams as horses and live up to your time. The so-called glorious years are not the shining days in the future, but the paranoia about your dreams when no one cares about them. No matter whether life gets better or not, you have to get better yourself

After reading the whole thing, the objective evaluation is still good. It may be a new author. Many narrations are not well written. Some plots like to be brushed off in one stroke. The plot is average. The mid-term articles have some deviations from the theme and villain settings. The writing is too decent. Overall, it is good. It is better than 80% of Tomato novels (✪▽✪)

Give the author one star more than four because I'm afraid he will be proud.

The subject matter is very good, unlike other books that only focus on interests and not on emotions. Come on

This book is okay. It mainly depends on whether you can understand it. If you can understand it, this is a very good book. There is no brainless behavior. The author also spent a lot of money on foreshadowing. In short, this book is very yyds

Will it be linked with some books in the future? Some books where memories are exposed. Because the main character's name is the same as that of a memory book I've read. The same goes for the first female protagonist, the Empress. I don't know if it's a coincidence or something. Su Yixian

A very interesting life drama book

The writing idea is good and very novel. Although it mixes a variety of existing materials together, the processing effect is not bad. What is particularly noteworthy is that the author's overall ability to foreshadow the article is still good. But at the same time, there are also some fatal problems, such as insufficient writing, lack of ability to coordinate the article, single characters, too hasty handling of characters, such as Chen Xueer, Jiang Shenzi, etc., And the ending is too hasty. However, I sincerely hope that the author can rewrite the content after 10,000 pages if he has the ability in the future. I think this work may be able to go further.

Come on, author, this book is very good. As long as it doesn't suck. Don't listen, it's not easy to be an author. You can't make much money on Tomato. Halfway through writing, I can't continue writing. No more talking, come on, author. 666

Like it very much. The protagonist has a rich background, and he is finally not the kind of protagonist who wants to ridicule and stomp on anyone who meets him. This book, well, it doesn't feel frustrating to read. There are always some books where the protagonist is obviously very powerful, but always gets confused with some little shrimp. As a result, the protagonist does not have the demeanor of a strong man, loses his identity, and feels uncomfortable to read. This one is different, the characters are well created, the identities match the characters, and the background matches the content of the story👍

It's not bad, but I don't want any female protagonist. Women will only affect the speed of drawing my sword. I also want to ask those people in the comment section who asked my sister to be the single heroine, but they are a little perverted. It's not good to be a wife to the sister you have raised for more than ten years. . . . . . . .

The plot is very interesting, but I feel that the protagonists are a bit naive and have no scheming at all, but they are very funny, such as Emperor Wu [laughing evilly], keep up the good work, I am looking forward to the future plots [eating melon]

Why it's only 8:00 or so, I think it has something to do with the protagonist's character and behavior. From this we can summarize the following points: 1. Are there too many cliche plots of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? Answer: Yes 2. Does the identity of the protagonist not work? Answer: Yes 3. Is the protagonist decisive in doing things? Answer: No 4. Is the protagonist's role too small? Answer: Yes 5. Is the protagonist a bit conceited? Answer: Yes 6. Is the protagonist a bit useless? Answer: Yes To sum up, it can be concluded that: from this, you will not get more than 9 points (Personal opinion: Don't comment if you don't like it [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh])