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One of the few good-looking Douluo fans [face covering]

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In Douluo, I think this book is very good. The elements of death are introduced, including invincibility and strategy, and the plot is also very bold and novel. I'm looking forward to it. Don't let it end unfinished. It's better to move forward quickly. Personally, I prefer watching the plot of the competition. (⌯︎¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧︎

Tomato is one of the few Douluo novels that have brains and are not the kind of villain novels that defy the heavens, the earth, and the air. They are very good, but there is still room for improvement.

The book is good to read, I hope I won't have too much contact with Tang San later on. It's very comfortable to have your own plot. The only pity is my personal taste, I prefer Ning Rongrong. Not surprisingly, the heroine here is Catwoman.

I think the protagonist's soul ring can be obtained by going to the far north

This book is much better than the original

First couplet: With a trembling heart and a trembling year, I offer the author a glass of wine Second line: Scroll back and you'll see a shit-yellow button, add two ounces of wine to your head. Hengpi: The more you drink, the more you get

As a bookworm who has read hundreds of Douluo fanfics, I always say that seeing such a beautiful Douluo fanfic on Tomato, I can only say that it is first-class, the author should work hard, but it is not enough. If possible, it can be more than 10 chapters a day [laughter]

According to this progress, up to 400 chapters of Douluo World can be written. Should we just finish the book directly or engage in Zhutianliu? It stands to reason that if you have Bengyu (it should be an enhanced version of Bengyu), it shouldn't be a big problem to break a dimensional wall, it can cover the entire universe and so on. Even if the plot is more compact, it can be completed in 300 chapters.

I feel that this score is a bit low. Although there were two or three slightly toxic cleaners in the early stage, the overall quality is already higher than many 9 points.

It's quite interesting. I think the protagonist can unify the Douluo Continent and then merge with the Sun and Moon Continent. Later, he can also arrange plots such as the invasion of the alien soul clan, and then work with the God Realm to resist it. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the next plot will be more exciting. After reading it for so long, I found a problem. When the author was describing the characters, I always felt that the protagonist was the only one in the group who was thinking of ideas, while the others completely listened to the protagonist without any suggestions. They didn't say a word during the battle. No one said a word. It was quite embarrassing to watch. I hope the author can make the characters more vivid and interesting, such as who is arrogant, who is lively and naughty, who is aloof, who is upright, these character traits. As soon as you look at it, you'll be drawn into it, it's wonderful.

I think this book is very interesting. Anyway, among the many Douluo fanfics I have read, I think this book is the best. It is also the best Douluo fanfic in Tomato. Why is the rating so low? I hope the author can keep writing.

It looks good, but kill the force clan and don't lick Tang San!

It's quite good, but there are too few updates. It's not enough to watch. I finished it in just two days (づ ●─● )づFirst of all, among Douluo, I like Zhuqing the most, and I am very dissatisfied with her engagement. After all, Dai Mubai was a romantic and playboy at the beginning, mainly because Zhuqing saw him. When I saw him at that time, I felt that he was not worthy (●—●). But now Qin Yan is still very good to Zhuqing, and even gave her the heartbreaking red, and made it clear to Meng Yiran at that time [Chapter 146] The article adds the element of death, the subject matter is novel, and it is still very interesting. Thank you, the author, please come on💪

It feels good to read, but this is not the kind of villain story that targets Tang San. It is similar to a strategy story, strategizing the entire Douluo Continent, and everything is preparing for the unification of the Douluo Continent. Tang San is just a clown, and the protagonist is not interested in targeting him.

Everything you see is beautiful, and everything you do is worthy of your youth.

The article is indeed good, but what I want to see more is what happens between Zhuqing and the male protagonist. Although Zhuqing is the female protagonist, there is not much sweet interaction, so I will give you 4 stars. I think it will be better if you write more later.

The writing is very good. There is no invincibility at the beginning like other Douluo, and there is no particular prejudice against a certain character. But I personally think that the protagonist flirts with too many girls but does not accept them and does not talk about the harem. The current Zhu Qingmeng and Qian Renxue will be included in the future. It is not a harem. It is not too outrageous. So I hope the author can consider it. If it doesn't work, forget it. It's just my opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

The book is very interesting, I hope I can kill Tang San in the end. Otherwise, the hidden danger left would be too great. After all, judging from Tang Seng's sinister character and Tang San's layout of the entire continent in the later period of the original work, Tang San has regarded Douluo Continent as his own private property and arranged it at will on the continent. It would be better if the protagonist could kill Tang San.

It's pretty good so far, thank you to the author! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

Just two words and it's all good. It's the best Douluo fanfic I've read recently.

I've read a lot of it, and it's really good. Although I haven't watched Death [I'm about to cry], I've also read a lot of reviews, and there are some not-so-good remarks. The main reason is that the levels of some of the more famous characters designed by the author are not consistent with the age levels of the original work. I think, if you have to be strict, you might as well read the original work again to ensure that it is completely consistent. Finally, I would like to encourage the author. Although I have not read Death, this novel is still very good among all the Tomato Douluo series in my opinion. Come on, author, don't care about the bad reviews. Most people are very supportive and support the book. Come on! ! !

It is considered to be a very good Douluo fanfic. It omits the places that should be omitted and emphasizes the places that should be omitted. It is not a brainless novel. The author may not be very good at writing emotional lines, but that's okay. If the book is written here, it should be rated 9 or above in fanfics on other platforms. But although many of Tomato's books are short texts, they are all very volume. Not many people have read the Douluo novels, and they are not very popular (Blue Silver Entanglement, Dead Wife Douluo is too poisonous [laughing]), but this book is still very good. Give five stars

A direct descendant of the Marquis family of the Star Luo Empire, the family martial spirit Tiger Soul Sword, the mutated martial spirit Zanpakutō, and his own soul technique Kidō. The Star Luo Empire is about to change hands, the Spirit Hall and Shrek are hostile and have already killed Dai Mubai. 260

Not bad! The writing is interesting, keep reading.

It looks good. I hope it will have only one female protagonist or not too many female protagonists and just follow the current pace. I hope it won't start a class that abuses the original protagonist for no reason. It's meaningless and seems very biased.

Compared with other martial arts novels, this book is very good. Other martial arts novels are basically about extremely powerful martial arts. The life span of the soul ring is particularly high. The plot is written according to the original work. The author has a strong imagination.

There are really very few Douluo fanfics on Tomato. This is a very good one among all the Douluo fanfics I have read. It is sensible, humorous and decisive in killing. I like it very much.

The first few pictures look pretty good, but there are some people in the comments section. . . Anyway, I can't stand the heroine you wrote [face covering] I'll read the content again [eat melon] Although I don't like writing about female protagonists, writing well is another matter [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Isn't it a harem story? Well, there are so few people! I'm afraid the author won't be able to keep going [face covering].