The Ice Wheel of Martial Spirits Comes to the World

One of the few good-looking Douluo fans [face covering]

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tu Su has been waiting for 900 years, Long Kui has been waiting for Long Yang for 1000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has been waiting for Yu Shu for 2000 years, Su Jiuer has been waiting for Ding Fengxi for 3000 years, Xiyao has been waiting for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan has been waiting for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for your update.

In Douluo, I think this book is very good. The elements of death are introduced, including invincibility and strategy, and the plot is also very bold and novel. I'm looking forward to it. Don't let it end unfinished. It's better to move forward quickly. Personally, I prefer watching the plot of the competition. (⌯︎¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧︎

Tomato is one of the few Douluo novels that have brains and are not the kind of villain novels that defy the heavens, the earth, and the air. They are very good, but there is still room for improvement.

The book is good to read, I hope I won't have too much contact with Tang San later on. It's very comfortable to have your own plot. The only pity is my personal taste, I prefer Ning Rongrong. Not surprisingly, the heroine here is Catwoman.

I think the protagonist's soul ring can be obtained by going to the far north

This book is much better than the original

First couplet: With a trembling heart and a trembling year, I offer the author a glass of wine Second line: Scroll back and you'll see a shit-yellow button, add two ounces of wine to your head. Hengpi: The more you drink, the more you get

As a bookworm who has read hundreds of Douluo fanfics, I always say that seeing such a beautiful Douluo fanfic on Tomato, I can only say that it is first-class, the author should work hard, but it is not enough. If possible, it can be more than 10 chapters a day [laughter]

I think it's good to watch, but after reading the first few chapters, I wanted to complain. At that time, level 87 was already very powerful. The starting point set for the protagonist's father was too high [star]. I felt that level 60 was acceptable, but level 80 was really too high.

According to this progress, up to 400 chapters of Douluo World can be written. Should we just finish the book directly or engage in Zhutianliu? It stands to reason that if you have Bengyu (probably an enhanced version of Bengyu), it shouldn't be a big problem to break a dimensional wall, it can cover the entire universe and so on. Even if the plot is more compact, it can be completed in 300 chapters.

I feel that this score is a bit low. Although there were two or three slightly toxic cleaners in the early stage, the overall quality is already higher than many 9 points.

I would like to make a suggestion, preparing to wait for Tang San to get the fairy grass before exchanging it is a poisonous point. It would be better if you plan to kidnap Xiao Wu to do business without capital, otherwise there will be no difference between you and an enemy. The author has carefully considered it. If you don't handle it well here, it will easily make people's evaluation lower.

Give me 5⭐ first. Telling me my opinion. This kind of fan fiction itself is neither easy to write nor enjoyable. Because there are shackles. Bring the original. Take two for yourself. It's even more troublesome. I had an idea💡I didn't jump out. Originally, the whole family was here. Just change it. Use Bengyu + sword martial spirit + a soul bone to transform into a mask or ten blades. The soul of the soul beast imprisoned by the broken jade actually comes out of the soul bone. Right? You are jumping back and forth here and there. In fact, a world without Douluo would be better. Just the world of martial arts + the god of death. You are still unscrupulous when you change it. Come on, I hope you can write better if you have the chance. Don't constrain yourself from changing.

I haven't seen much, but I want to complain about the opening of the previous battle. Maybe I've seen too much of this, and I feel like vomiting when I see it, and I'm not interested at all. Then there's the arrangement of soul skills. Don't you have death skills? As for the soul skills, just refer to Yang Wudi, and the full-amplification skills will be fine. Why bother with a long-range one? It's useless. I didn't read much of the latter part, as I had already exhausted all my interest in it.

Chapter 11 is extremely poisonous and teaches ghost ways. What do you think? At least if you can unify the whole clan, why don't you think about it? If you can't unify the whole clan, you still want to overthrow Xingluo? ? ? Wow, bullshit, I was poisoned anyway, bye bye

I took a look at it twice, Zhuo, isn't this urban writing? The protagonist is very powerful and looks very ordinary. People around him just run to others and sneer at the protagonist. Then the protagonist must have a sister or someone who doesn't dislike him, most of them are women. Then the protagonist starts to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger all the way to counterattack. . . . . . . . . . Kou area, no matter what age it is. Innate soul power is very powerful even with a kitchen knife, right? Did you learn from Tang San's Blue Silver Grass and was said to be useless when writing it? Please, can that be the same? A grass and a knife, which one has attack power? So cool. I'm speechless. . . . .

I was very optimistic about this novel. After reading chapters 11 and 12, I was helpless! The sense of immersion in a novel is very important. The sense of immersion is not good, this novel is 99% useless! Readers are selfish! What happened to the protagonist teaching skills?

I hope the seventh spirit ring is a snow girl or an ice emperor or a god-given spirit ring. I hope the upper limit of the spirit ring will be raised later or it will be too high.

I don't handle emotions very well It took several years to hang Meng Yiran before he could deal with it. Then, Meng Yiran's psychological activities were not described in detail. He looked pale, clenched his fists, and had too little interaction with the heroine (I knew Meng Yiran liked me, but it took several years to deal with it, and he still dealt with it in front of the heroine). A man who wants to overthrow the Xingluo royal family at the beginning and then dominate the continent does not have to be a stud, but two or three female protagonists are not a big problem. After reading more than 140 chapters, I feel tired to have a single female protagonist.

It's quite interesting. I think the protagonist can unify the Douluo Continent and then merge with the Sun and Moon Continent. Later, he can also arrange plots such as the invasion of the alien soul clan, and then work with the God Realm to resist it. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the next plot will be more exciting. After reading it for so long, I found a problem. When the author was describing the characters, I always felt that the protagonist was the only one in the group who was thinking of ideas, while the others completely listened to the protagonist without any suggestions. They didn't say a word during the battle. No one said a word. It was quite embarrassing to watch. I hope the author can make the characters more vivid and interesting, such as who is arrogant, who is lively and naughty, who is aloof, who is upright, these character traits. As soon as you look at it, you'll be drawn into it, it's wonderful.

I think this book is very interesting. Anyway, among the many Douluo fanfics I have read, I think this book is the best. It is also the best Douluo fanfic in Tomato. Why is the rating so low? I hope the author can keep writing.

It looks good, but kill the force clan and don't lick Tang San!

It's quite good, but there are too few updates. It's not enough to watch. I finished it in just two days (づ ●─● )づFirst of all, among Douluo, I like Zhuqing the most, and I am very dissatisfied with her engagement. After all, Dai Mubai was a romantic and playboy at the beginning, mainly because Zhuqing saw him. When I saw him at that time, I felt that he was not worthy (●—●). But now Qin Yan is still very good to Zhuqing, and even gave her the heartbreaking red, and made it clear to Meng Yiran at that time [Chapter 146] The article adds the element of death, the subject matter is novel, and it is still very interesting. Thank you, the author, please come on💪

It feels good to read, but this is not the kind of villain story that targets Tang San. It is similar to a strategy story, strategizing the entire Douluo Continent, and everything is preparing for the unification of the Douluo Continent. Tang San is just a clown, and the protagonist is not interested in targeting him.

Everything you see is beautiful, and everything you do is worthy of your youth.

The article is indeed good, but what I want to see more is what happens between Zhuqing and the male protagonist. Although Zhuqing is the female protagonist, there is not much sweet interaction, so I will give you 4 stars. I think it will be better if you write more later.

The writing is very good. There is no invincibility at the beginning like other Douluo, and there is no particular prejudice against a certain character. But I personally think that the protagonist flirts with too many girls but does not accept them and does not talk about the harem. The current Zhu Qingmeng and Qian Renxue will be included in the future. It is not a harem. It is not too outrageous. So I hope the author can consider it. If it doesn't work, forget it. It's just my opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

The book is very interesting, I hope I can kill Tang San in the end. Otherwise, the hidden danger left would be too great. After all, judging from Tang Seng's sinister character and Tang San's layout of the entire continent in the later period of the original work, Tang San has regarded Douluo Continent as his own private property and arranged it at will on the continent. It would be better if the protagonist could kill Tang San.

It's pretty good so far, thank you to the author! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]