Villain *******

Lily, it's beautiful, I didn't comment well, but I can read it anyway. It looks good, but it's missing [smile]

It's very well written. It's the first time I've read this kind of article. I like the plot of Lily that switches between offense and defense very much. Because it's the first time I've read Lily's article and the protagonist is attacking, I give it five stars to the author!

All of you here are talents that can be met but cannot be sought.

Super cool, in line with my hobbies When I saw the end, I thought he was a loser.

It's a great book, but the ending can only be used: If the author is not dead, just say something. I saw someone said it was moved from an external network? Probably not. The tomato review is pretty ok.

It's pretty cool, why is there no one there?

I really like it, why did the author just start talking about it later?

The first 90% of the article is still good. The deeper you read, the more you can see that the author has read a lot of works. This book incorporates the creativity and writing techniques of many excellent works. At the same time, the characterization of the protagonist and supporting characters is relatively stable. It is not like in many works I have read, as long as the intimacy between the two reaches a critical point, it becomes an annoying character who is jealous and has a strong desire to control 24 hours a day. Most of the protagonists in it are quite likable in their characterizations. There is no Japanese-style plot where the characters are disgusting from front to back to the bottom line, and then are forgiven when they turn around. The shortcomings are also obvious. There are too many pitfalls that have not been filled in. There are also too many small stories that should be written in detail that have been skipped. There are fewer intimate interactions in the later period. There are also many characters who had a lot of plot scenes in the early days and were suddenly forgotten by the author later on. The outline of this work is quite good, but the author lacks writing skills or has not invested enough energy to polish the work for various reasons. After all, for an author who can finish a book and stabilize the main characters, I think the more reason may be that he has no passion or interest to continue writing. If the overall plot remains unchanged and the story becomes complete and beautiful, a book will cost at least 100-150k to complete. Personally, I feel that the current article does not have any deliberately descriptive description or plot.

Ah, this is another book that I like. But why did it end? This is the book that suits my taste the most after "Online Games: Fantasy Mage". I felt really sad after reading it. I really want to turn this into a full-length novel. It allows me to stay in my favorite world for a little longer. The last time I felt so uncomfortable was when I was watching the end of "Online Game: Fantasy Mage". How I want them to keep writing. I also like to read ordinary books, but I can't get into them at all. I just think they are beautiful, sweet, or... This novel has more than two hundred chapters in total and I didn't spend much time with me, but it is as beautiful and dreamy as "Online Games: Fantasy Mage". I want them to have more chapters. I want them to be completed, but I don't want them to be completed. I can't see the end of this world without it being completed? After it is finished, I don't want the world to stop in this way. This is my favorite book, and I will not read it a second time, because the first time I didn't know what will happen in the next chapter, and then there will be more excitement. If I read it the second time, I already know what will happen in the next chapter, so this is not a world in my fantasy, but a novel. After all, the memory is the most beautiful. When I read these two books, I bring myself into them. My perspective will become the protagonist, or someone else. Or the recorder following them. I like this kind of world, I like this kind of feelings. I like this fake world, even if I'm not successful in reality. But I am willing to experience and feel the best world for me. All I can say is this book is great. Come on!

The book was good, but the ending was a bit of a chore. It was as silky and smooth as going to the toilet, but there was no paper after I finished defecating. . .

Where is your ending! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! There is no marriage hall yet! ! ! ! ! ! Where is your ending! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Come out quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Obsessive-compulsive disorder patients are very uncomfortable! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

There are no shortcomings except that the speed is too slow and the content is too little [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

When I found this book, I was filled with joy. It is rare to find such a high-quality book... Unfortunately, I am a little disappointed now... But that's right, nothing is perfect, and maybe no ending is the best ending.

It would be great to turn this into a comic, right? Why don't you finish writing? It's really hard to calm down! The ending is too rushed! Otherwise, you can directly become a god! A little annoyed! Forget it, I'll give you five stars because of your good writing! Don't do this next time! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I really don't understand, feel heartbroken, feel sorry for you, and feel reluctant to let go. But... Still five stars...

It's a pity that it was moved online, but it's fun to watch half of it for free.

Although it is very beautiful and I like it very much, why is it suddenly gone? ?

A very novel work, it has grown on my xp [Adoration][Adoration]

I have been following this book for a long time, but it seems that it was interrupted and buried in the middle. The more I read, the more familiar it became. In the end, the ending was not finished well. The plot is very exciting, everyone has their own characteristics, and the performance of the Tucao actor is very good, but it is a pity that it is not finished.

The bad ending is really disappointing (›´ω`‹), but that doesn't stop it from being a good book worth reading in terms of character and description.

I had a liver attack for two days, and I looked happy. Why did I have to have it cut off?

It's very interesting, but why doesn't it have an ending? [Crying]

I liked it very much, but it's a pity that I didn't continue writing it.

Disadvantages: The ending is too sudden Advantages: I like it very, very, very, very much [smile][smile]

The content of the book is very substantial! Except that the whole thing is a bit short, the detail line can be expanded, and the combat power line is collapsed. Can anyone list and supplement the songs in it? I will write a few first.

After reading this, I still give it four stars. After all, it's hard to accept the ending of a good book, and it's hard to let go.

Just like the novel written by Lilith's competitor, it doesn't seem to end well for some reasons, but it is still well written. I hope to see the author's next work.

This is so uncomfortable. I really liked this book. Alas, the ending made me so uncomfortable.

After watching it for a while, I thought it was pretty good. Personally, I don't think it's anything depressing or boring at the moment. On the contrary, the atmosphere is quite relaxed. I always laugh unconsciously when I see certain clips. It should be more everyday (after all, I've only watched a little bit, so I don't know much about the plot behind it). Just look good. (￣￣)

Very well written (✪▽✪), It's just that the ending is a bit sloppy.