Longmen Police Skip Work Story

Alas, it's a pity. It's the best Ark fanfic I've ever read. I think the protagonist is almost perfect. The plot is also very good. So I don't really like to read the finished novel directly. I'm just afraid that a novel with a lot of ratings will only end with the word eunuch.

A masterpiece!!! The plot and characters are not broken at all, but in some places it seems that I have written several chapters where the word count is unnecessary.

I hope the author can still think of this book

This book is being moved, so it is the end. Don't say it is unfinished (although the author has not updated in February 2022 on our website, but the author is still alive and can be contacted). This cannot prevent it from being a good book. The characters are really full-bodied and the plot is very natural. Some of the comments said it was unfinished, so I explained it. , Some people say that it destroys the character, but I personally think it is not as serious as said. After all, it is a second creation, and the author must be given time and space to play (just don't be too outrageous, such as the Queen Mother Kai who turns into a head full of love (not targeted, but I saw it on other websites and it really shocked me))

Did the author not read the plot carefully? Tallulah and Sir Chen have the same mother! It's just that their fathers are different. Sister Tazi and Sir Chen lived together when they were young. Later, Kosiche threatened to exchange half of the Dragon Gate for Talulah and became their adopted daughter.

The whole story is very harmoniously inserted, and the sense of immersion is something that other novels cannot achieve. It feels like watching the plot of Ark, and the plot is not delayed, the rhythm is well grasped, and the characters also feel like they are alive [Sending Hearts]

I'm saddened that such a beautiful book has been written down in such a hasty manner. The characters are full-bodied and the plot does not rely too much on the original plot. It took me a long time after watching h to comment on it, and I still regret it to this day. [Cry][cry][cry][please update]

Why are you a eunuch? Why are you a eunuch? (Twisted crawling) (Roaring howl) (Dark scream)

It's super exciting. I don't know what's wrong. I only wrote about the tip of the iceberg in such a huge world view. Is there anything wrong with the author? I hope the author will come back for a second season! Ball ball! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The writing style exceeded my personal expectations, and the character creation was very successful (as well as Shura Field) ☺Although the ending seems to be a mess (maybe it is), I still feel that this book is like a prequel, and I predict that there will be a sequel (you have the right to watch it for fun, of course, if you are right, then I am a great prophet☺) In addition, it seems that the author himself is not here. You can try to find the author online. Maybe it is not unfinished but unfinished, or there is a problem with the contract.

I read this book on Shuke. The original author has been copycatting it for several years.

It's a pity that the author hastily discontinued the update. I look forward to the author reopening the book. This book is worth reading.

The best among the best. It's a pity that the author's biological problems would have been more serious. It can definitely become Tomato's Arknights masterpiece alongside Bai Gouzi and the others.

How can I put it, the normal ones are good, especially the first few chapters, which are very interesting, but when you meet Hei in the end, it starts to be illogical. Forget it, I won't comment until I finish reading it, but it is really amazing to let them go.

Alas, the ending didn't stop me from giving him a 50

To be honest, it was well written, but unfortunately it was unfinished and left many holes unfilled. I hope a second part can be released or something.

Shu is really good but the author just deleted the account and ran away as if he doesn't even have a bookshelf. There are no comments either. It's clean, a piece of white paper. I've never seen this homepage so clean.

Yes, it just ended suddenly.

Alas, this five-star is for Chen Huiyao ( ¯⌓¯ )

Why is he a eunuch? .

I have never played Arknights, but I prefer characters like Chen Huiyao I hope the author can publish a sequel

Promote the plot without losing the humor Various settings are particularly full in the humorous writing style

There are many pairs of eyes staring at you, hurry up and open a new pit! !

It's a great book. I read Ark. It's a pity that it's a eunuch.

I hope this book can be published as a second companion

A good book, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch

Damn it, why is such a beautiful book gone? ! Shouldn't this be a permanent update? The character descriptions are very good, and it's not a completely brainless fanfic. It's obvious that there was some thought put into it, so why did it stop! Ahhhhhhhhhh!

It's relatively good-looking in Tomato, but it's a pity that it hasn't been updated, otherwise it would be in the top five of Zhouwen.

Looks good, hope you cheer up

Good book, but not enough