Dragon Ball: Rise from Planet Vegeta

This book is quite good, and it is a rare book in the Dragon Ball genre. But the author is a newcomer, and this is his first book, so there are some minor flaws. The first is that I feel that the combat power value is about to collapse. If the male protagonist does not move, the improvement will be two thousand, three thousand, three or four thousand. In another twenty or thirty chapters, the male protagonist may directly kill Frieza. I don't know if the increase in combat power in the original book is so exaggerated, but I think it would definitely be too invincible if written this way. The second is that the author may be a newbie and has a lot of typos, but not much else. Finally, I would like to ask the author a few questions: First, is there a female protagonist? Second, if there is a female protagonist, can she be number 18? The worst heroine could also be Bulma. These are my two questions. I hope the author can take a look at the comment area. Finally, I wish the author that his novel will be a hit! ! 😁😁😁 (I would like to encourage new authors and give them five stars ⭐⭐⭐) Author, I can give you a suggestion. That is, every time there is a new character, you can put some pictures of the character in the chapter review of this chapter, so that people who have never seen Dragon Ball or have forgotten what they look like can understand it. (It's just a suggestion, the author can adopt it or not.)

This book is really good to read. There is just a little bit of water, but that can be ignored. If the author can continue with this momentum, more people will definitely like this novel!

It's a pretty good book, nothing bad about it.

Heroine No. 18 And one of the two (Caulifla or Bulma)

Very good. I haven't seen such a good Dragon Ball novel in a long time. Come on! !

Not many good Dragon Ball books

Not bad, but not enough

This is the best batch among all the Dragon Ball fanfics I have seen, so I must give five-star praise to the author. Keep up the good work and speed up the update. Add a heroine, Bulma or Caulifla, or number 18 would be fine too

When will the main story start [Thinking]

Keep writing and look forward to the follow-up 😊

The writing is good and innovative, and it does not deviate from the plot. I hope the increase in combat power can be normal and not too exaggerated. The increase in combat power is still normal now.

To be honest, sometimes some of the plots in this book are a bit inexplicable. It is undeniable that the author can create secondary creations based on the original plot. Some settings are also quite consistent with the original work.

[Top post] Good book, five-star praise, cheers for the author. [Please update]

A rare book

After a lot of reading, there is finally no system.

It's very interesting. Keep up the good work and the author hits the nail on the head. As for the heroine, I suggest that it would be better to create one, otherwise I would separate the original CP every day and look very speechless =_=. Don't listen to those Daily Heroines No. 18 Or Bulma who are speechless. A heroine created by oneself will have no problems and be very strong. Every time I read fan fiction, I get tired of tearing apart the main character of the original CP like this. The author might as well create one himself! Also, Future Trunks' plot won't be too confusing. Stable and relaxed, it is especially easy to write. This way the plot can be fully realized. Bardock's plot can come later. I wouldn't read it if the author's number was 18. Krillin is miserable enough, let him have a good wife. And the protagonist himself can be the White God from the fan video, or Super Saiyan 5, etc. Yours is one of the best Dragon Ball novels I have read so far. After all, the CPs of Vegeta and Goku have not been opened. I hope you keep all the original characters and create a new heroine or no heroine. Lan Qi is not bad. The author should think about it, after all, she is one of the beauties in Dragon Ball. Leave a message: I once wanted to write a Dragon Ball novel.

Very good this book

That's easy to say. You heard me talking in circles.

It feels like the development speed is too fast, but the content is quite good

Very good, almost nothing wrong

Not bad, not bad. Unlike other Dragon Ball novels, where the system is upgraded with bang bang bang. This Dragon Ball novel relies on self-training and upgrading step by step. It's really good. I give it a five-star rating.

It looks good, keep writing.

Well written, five-star praise

Very good, keep it up!

Good looking ooh ooh ooh

Not bad, keep working hard. . . . . . .

Very good, just too short

A very good novel

I remember that the gravity of Planet Vegeta is 10 times that of the Earth, but this has not been discovered

I hope things won't be simple in the future, come on