Pirates: Starting from Phantom Beasts to Build the Strongest Group

It's a very good pirate work. It not only has the protagonist's battle but also the battle of the crew below. I like this kind of pirate theme. Come on, author. The author personally thinks this is a novel with a very good setting, and I would like to make some suggestions. First: I don't think it's good to cancel the setting that people with Devil Fruit abilities are afraid of water. It would be a bad idea to lose the soul of the original Devil Fruit. If the setting that people with Devil Fruit abilities are afraid of water is preserved, it can give the plot a little more sense of crisis and urgency. Second: I think Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba's breathing method can be added, which can add more elements to the battle and allow the protagonist to increase his lung capacity, so that he can survive longer if he accidentally falls into the water. Detective Conan's inflatable belt and bubble coral can also be added to save himself. This can make the plot more ups and downs more exciting. I hope the author will work hard otherwise it will end. Finally, I would like to add that I personally think that Breath of the Golden Crow and the Sun is quite meaningful [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's okay, but I don't like to read too many pirate stories that interfere with the original protagonist group, so it's not to my liking. But it's still okay in Tomato.

Good-looking, but a little lacking

There are many Devil Fruits in pig's trotters. You can eat one as a pirate ship. For example, a gun with a dog fruit, a sword with an elephant fruit, and a pirate ship in the form of an animal, phantom beast, fish fruit, and Kunpeng. It's very reasonable, right?

I like the author very much, cheers

After saving it for more than a week, it disappeared within half an hour [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy]

I feel ok. Unlike other texts

Can't the Golden Crow fly? What moon steps to use? Has the author heard of Kunpeng's extremely fast golden crow turning into a rainbow? Top speed!

The author takes the form of a nine-headed saint and a nine-headed lion roars. The door to hell opens. Come on, come on, come on. That's it. I'm dizzy and have appendix surgery.

It looks good, but it's a bit slow. It would be better if the update is faster. Are you drifting too? From three chapters a day at the beginning, to two chapters a day, and now there is not necessarily one chapter a day. You are too slow. I support you. Please update.

I haven't seen such a good pirate in a long time, keep up the good work [stop]

The book is readable, but the author is asking you to update it too much. From three chapters to two chapters, now it's just one chapter a day.

Or should we describe the mental illness of office workers in the emergency room, asking yourself, forgetting at your house, being embarrassed, and being helpless in the third and fourth quarters. It was you who deleted the signal.

It's too short. It's really short and concise.

The content is very good and creative. It would be better if it is updated soon [laughing]

Very nice. I believe it will be popular, although it is a bit brainless, but it will be less poisonous.

Very well written, keep up the good work.

It's too short. Come on, the author.

Really good, really good

Like to keep working hard

Don't use the later combat power all at once, it will cause strong damage and easily destroy the combat power.

The start is engaging. Mainly because I want to see how the author of One Hundred Fruits compiled it [laughing evilly]

This book has new ideas, the chapters are a bit short, the plot that happened does not explain the outcome, and it ends in a hurry. It feels like their journey of conquest has just begun.

It's okay, except that the timeline is a bit messy, maybe for the sake of plot arrangement. After all, it's a pirate fanfic. It's well written. Give the author support.

Give five stars and respect the author [blowing kiss] But, I have a question, why didn't Three Mast bring the whale to Brooke [crying]

The book is very enjoyable to read, and the poisonous aspects can be ignored, but the author can stop being so short and weak... Write more, bro.

Four stars is already excellent

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

May the mountains and rivers be safe⛰️ and the world be safe💫

Why I feel pretty good. . . Maybe it's because I don't watch pirates that much. .