Fantasy*************

The book is very good, but there is one big problem. The author is too short and weak. Please update it soon [note] [note] [note]

Why hasn't it been updated? I wonder if my ancestors were in the razor field? Now that I have inherited the family business, I will become bigger and stronger, becoming the king of blades. Careful, I will have 100,000 workers under my command to process it overnight to make a 1.8 Million blade and send it over! [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out]

After reading about 30 chapters, let me tell you what you think. First, the author is planning to write about a martial arts world, so he needs to think more about it. Every martial arts world is different. If we put them all together, if the matching realm of each character and the performance in the book do not match the character's position in people's hearts, it will easily collapse. Second, I hope that the character of the female character can be reshaped. As for the future empress, she and the protagonist have not gone through any special process. What is the situation of this sudden emotion (if you insist on saying that she is handsome, that's fine...) [Thinking ] Personally, I feel that since you want to describe emotions, you must at least lay the groundwork. It would be better if there is a certain degree of experience between her and him before they can achieve a positive result. In addition, I personally do not recommend dismantling the original work in order to achieve a lifelong pair or a harem. This may also easily cause discomfort to readers. Third, since the theme is storytelling, it would be more appropriate to guide the plot from the storytelling aspect as much as possible. It would be good to add some funny elements appropriately. Just my personal opinion, if there is anything wrong in the evaluation, you are welcome to comment and point it out [explore][laugh]

Very good, but don't hit Kavin at the critical moment [punch hard]

I kind of know why this book isn't popular. It was quite interesting when I first clicked on it. The core and fun part of this book lies in the storytelling aspect. Of course, the development of other storylines is not impossible. After all, the main plot tells the story, and the side plots promote the main plot. This is a novel. But this branch line covers the main line, which is boring. There is a core chapter and more than a dozen branches. It's a mess of drama going back and forth. Maybe the author wants to whet his appetite. Maybe the author is afraid that writing too much storytelling will cause visual fatigue. But has the author ever thought about it? Everyone comes here because of the fun aspects of this book and its novel subject matter. Don't write irrelevant plots. That kind of déjà vu will only give people a sense of wasting time. I didn't finish it, I only watched part of it, but I felt like there was a sense of déjà vu at the end, with people worshiping from all directions, and all the characters being attached to each other. This book, how should I put it, has a very good subject matter. If anyone encounters similar storytelling themes, please let me know. Alas, I hope the author can read what I said. It is currently four stars. If it can be written well, I will give it five stars.

Okay, okay, especially the swordsmanship in the snow, other worlds should also see this wanton world! Look at these unique characters. Sword Nine Yellow: Six Thousand Miles to Rebirth, Emperor Wu left a sword box at the top of the city! Before he died, he struck out with a sword of six thousand miles, looked to the north, and said: "Come, waiter, serve wine to the young master!" Old Sword God: If heaven had not given birth to me, Li Chungang, my swordsmanship would last forever like night! The sound of the sword shook the world, and the heavenly gate of the Land Sword Immortal opened! Peach Blossom Sword Fairy: He rides on a donkey with a peach blossom in his hand, and a murderous sword hidden in the box. There are three million sword immortals in the sky, even if they see me, they must lower their eyebrows! Human Slaughter: Treading Horses to gain fame among the six kingdoms, who doesn't know the King of Northern Liang! The chess player is the most feared when he disrupts the game. He sighs: "I just want a son, will you give it to me?" The dandy prince: He has been hiding his talents for many years, and now everyone in the world knows about him! Pick up the knife with both hands and never put it away again, pick out all the invincible hands in the world. He said: I want justice in the world, and I also want human kindness! Nangong Pushe: There is no such beautiful woman in the world. She has dominated the list of beauties for ten years. She has been practicing her swords for ten years. Then she has thirteen swords in the world and can reach the immortals on land! …

Overall it's pretty good, but if you pay more attention to the details and describe the mentality in specific points, it would be even better. Come on, old man.

I quite like it, but I suggest the author add more storytelling content, try not to have a female protagonist, and save the plot like the previous Little Dragon Girl.

You have to believe the author. There are more boys who like harems. You have to catch up with the trend of the times. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's beautiful, why are there so few people watching it? On the Naihe Bridge, a boy had already drank ten bowls of Meng Po soup. Meng Po saw this and stopped him: "That's enough. Stop drinking. What can't you forget?" The boy replied dully: Your cheeks are red, why haven't you updated it yet?

Good news, good news, but too short. I hope the author will be longer like me [full] [full]

You can check out the episode details here. Since there are heroes. Why can't there be evil characters like the Vulture Goddess and the Western Poison Golden Wheel? You can consider whether to stay in martial arts or join Xianxia in the future. Especially joining the foreign forces in the Western Region. Gods of Olympus and the Great Tang series. Taking the protagonist as the focus of the picture, the Central Plains, the Western Regions, the Olympus Gods, the Ancient Gods, myths, immortals, gods, demons, and martial arts gradually grow up. Add treasure hunt, national war, divine war and other embellished paragraphs. Avoid a single plot. Great shots come and go.

Not bad, not bad. The author's writing style is excellent among Tomatoes. The plot is compact and the characters are well-drawn. It can be understood by everyone, but it is not like Jianlai's style, with less foreshadowing. On the contrary, it makes readers feel relaxed. Really like this kind of plot. [Like] It's just that sometimes the author is off-putting, and the title of the book isn't quite right. . .

Stop urging me to update. The book has been removed from the shelves and I can't even find it by searching. It's a pity that a good book is missing.

This book is no worse than those books with a score of 9 or more. Why is the score so low? The author should work hard!

1. In fact, the five skills of the Condor Shooting are really not very important. 2. Xianmen should be a money gang. Wolong Villa (Ming Dynasty) 3. Perfect or something, you think the strength is right. (Changed to Fengyun, Shushan) 4. One sword opens the gate of heaven, and two sleeves of green wind. May everyone be like a dragon. Confucian sage in white. 5. It's okay (under one person) Lao Tianshi, Eight Wonders...

It's exciting, you break the chapter, do you want to die [punch out] If you can't write, don't go out and write. What's wrong with being hospitalized?

Thanks to Sanshaojing. Com for letting everyone have no books to read.

It's still pretty good-looking, but judging from the updated status, I guess she won't be entering the palace.

This book is missing from the author's bookshelf

This kind of design can easily move readers' hearts. It's well written. Just update it quickly. Otherwise, raise money and send the razor blade.

It looks good, and it fulfills my attachment to Lao Huang

The title of this book by the author is unique, the character of the protagonist is perfectly created, and the situation is also very leveraged. You won't lose money if you invest in it O(∩_∩)O Haha~

I really like this mixed world.

It's really exciting. When I first watched it, I thought it was boring, but the more I watched it, the more I wanted to watch it. The only flaw is that the author's updates are too slow, and the production team doesn't dare to take a break.

You do update. I don't ask you for more. Can you update twice a day? [Smile]

If it weren't for the title being a fusion of Jin Yong's novels, I think it's pretty good. If you want to read it, you can read it. I can't stand it.

This book has a low rating, but it's quite good. I'll give it five stars.

I used to laugh very happily because I was open-minded. Now I don't laugh because I am open-minded.

Come on, author, don't suck, I believe in you