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There's something wrong with this script Author, please don't change the script, OK, the protagonist is so cowardly

This, a time traveler? I forgot the plot, it's okay, it doesn't matter. You can change the Pokémon plot a bit as long as you don't change the magic. It's fine. The protagonist is weak and a bit childish. The author is a newbie, so there is nothing I can do. But what is the operation to conquer Mew at the beginning? Author, I won't say anything about conquering you in the mid-term or late stages, but in the early stage, you are still just starting out, and you don't have the strength, so don't you think it is rash to conquer? It's not a gradual improvement if the writing is cool or not. Level 100 elves are on the street. They are on the same level as the phantom beasts. They beat the phantom beasts for seconds. There is also the word water.

The time traveler is not a newborn baby, so why are his words and deeds so childish?

Feeling a bit childish

The sea. . You are all water

Please read my new book!

Very good