There Was a Thunderous Song in the Funeral Home, and the Little Girl Broke Her Guard

I'm a newbie. This is my first book. The writing is too slow and the content is too awkward. Do you want to read what you wrote? And the songs you picked up are all a bit thunderous, like wild wolf disco. Brother, you won't be allowed to use those songs that have more profound meanings. What you want to write is a positive protagonist who is not afraid of hardships and fights against capital, but. You want to write about showbiz in a darker light. You describe too much. There are too many things you want to say, but you don't have the ability to put so many things together and write them, so the entire article you write is composed of water characters, and the content you want to write is still okay, but there are some shortcomings. This is what you need to improve. What you write is still okay, but just because you don't have the writing skills and poor writing skills, what you write is not very good. I watched it from beginning to end. Come on!

It can blow up thunder. I admire the author for this. Awesome!

Why are there so many hydrographs?

The author is so damn short.

It's so exciting! To read this novel, you have to listen to the song! Thunder, wild wolf! Otherwise you can't understand

It's too watery. It's all nonsense. What other people say alone is over 80% false.

Come on! Persistence is victory

Si Guoyi😀😀😀

I looked very excited at first, but the silly girl's words reminded me of Liu Dekai. I really want to vomit, I can't watch anymore, bye.