The Beginning of One Piece: Grab the Slippery Fruit

As a newbie, please be merciful and try your best to give me good reviews so that I can be motivated to continue writing. Thank you very much.

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Hurry up, 20 chapters a day. . Come on

The author has mastered the character changes of the protagonist, which is very good, and there is also the Slippery Fruit. When I saw Brother Ming awakening, I thought of the Slippery Fruit, because it was too buggy. It is normal for the author to cut the superhuman body of the fruit. The strength is too super, how to write it, right? Who knows if we will be able to develop sliding space or even sliding time in the future. As for the heroine, I don't care at all. As long as the heroine doesn't hold back and has cerebral palsy, I can watch it. Five stars for it (off-topic: I actually thought about the explosive fruit of Mr. 5 At the time. If nano bombs can be developed, even Kaido will be seriously injured if all the bombs are circulated in his blood, right?)

I feel that the slippery fruit can take the conceptual route and let time slip away.

It's the tone I like. It's about taking in girls, not possessing them. It's a bit obsessed. They are all two-dimensional wives, and I won't let any of them go. (´◊ω◊｀)

As I write this, I feel that the protagonist is already invincible: Slippery Fruit + Tuntun Fruit + Thunder Fruit + Seven-Star Sword Spirit + Kirin Lion King + Navy Six Styles + Fishman Karate + Swordsmanship + Three-Color Haki + (Peerless Appearance). . . Next, you can settle down on the empty island, master all the abilities as soon as possible, and then build a brand new country on the empty island and perfect every place.

It is more realistic and down-to-earth and develops step by step. First of all, I feel that the opportunity to grab the original protagonist is right. Because when I came to the world of pirates with nothing, I must get all the opportunities that can make me stronger. The male protagonist came to this world without a system, no golden fingers, and no background. The development step by step is very reasonable. In order to survive, he becomes stronger and becomes stronger every time. Changes are the result of my own planning and hard work. I think it is much more beautiful than a systematic one that reaches the sky in one step. Moreover, I personally prefer the harem genre, because time travel is about having fun and doing whatever you want. Sometimes when reading novels, the sense of immersion also requires all aspects, not just fighting to become stronger. Having adventures, women, treasures, and pets is the life of a pirate.

The writing is good, and it captures the complex of heroes in troubled times. But we are young people living under the red flag, we must have passion, plot, passion and belief. Life may play tricks on us, but value is what we create. If you believe in fairness, you will lose. Only if you have the ability can you talk about fair competition. You are a genius because of your clear thinking, but what you write is the yearning and belief in your heart. Don't write about yourself as a restless person.

It's okay, I can watch it, and it's more reasonable than those types of systems. At least there's no one that's going to be in the air every second as soon as I travel through time! Those with super physical fitness will receive legendary fruits, etc.! It also satisfies the thoughts of most sea fans (the harem and Momonosuke must die!! [Laughing crookedly]). It's comfortable to watch. I just hope it can be updated soon!

Give him another devil fruit This is one of the more enjoyable movies I have watched. It doesn't have a good system and an imaginative address. I should go to Gaya Sky Island later to calm down and practice before going to the new world. I have no strength and no aura of the protagonist. It is easy to die there.

The author's writing is very good. I hope you won't give up updating. I have seen many authors who give up halfway. Although I don't have a lot of money, I can still give you some. I hope you don't dislike it! ! Come on😊! !

This could have been okay, there are some poisonous points, it's not serious, it's just that there are too many women. In fact, I think three, four, four or five will be enough. There should be more daily funny and deeply emotional plots. There are many other shortcomings. Overall I feel it is better than many books.

I saw 151 and saw the author's complaints before posting a book review. I'll give it five stars for the time being. Among pirate fanfics, except for those books where the main characters are navy, there are very few good ones where the protagonists are pirates. Either there are problems with the logic or the outlook. This one is pretty good. Some personal thoughts have been added to the original plot, and there are no loopholes in the logic. It is already very good. IQ is online, and I don't want to sleep with women. Whether I will change the book review in the future, I will tell you after reading it.

It's a very good novel, although some details are not well written, but overall it's still very good and very in line with my taste. Especially the imagination. The Slippery Fruit can think so powerfully. Later, he added more fruits to himself through various souls, opened a harem, and became a huge power. Although this power is not stable at all, if the protagonist is bad, the power is also bad, but now the protagonist is basically basic. Basically, the strength has reached the upper limit. The main purpose is to increase the strength of one's own forces. I don't know if the protagonist's strength can be extended in the future. Moreover, I found that the protagonist's most fatal weakness is lack of physical strength. He obviously has fruit awakening, and there are more than one, but the physical strength is not enough for him. If he activates a single fruit awakening for a long time or opens the fruit awakening together, it can be said that the protagonist has a burst flow, and his lack of endurance is his weakness. It's finished, and there's another book missing.

Looking forward to the follow-up plot. I like becoming stronger and occupying territory with such purpose. There are a lot of poorly rated books on Tomato. The reason is probably the harem. I don't know why so many people on Tomato are disgusted with the harem.

As a fellow author, I am just a little curious as to how I can achieve a total reading of 24,000 and still persist.

Yes, it feels good. Come on, author.

Five stars will be given after one hundred chapters, come on! (In addition, being a scumbag is not acceptable. Although having good-looking people around you will indeed put you in a good mood, and talking nonsense is also a characteristic, but the relationship cannot be unclear. I have only read a dozen chapters. If you are not a scumbag later, just pretend I didn't say it. PS: Mainly because I got ptsd from this kind of novel)

Not bad, not bad. The writing is very smooth and there are no major flaws. All the pirates in the navy are wiped out and all the women are taken away. I just feel that the emotional line lacks polish, but it is already a very good pirate novel. I feel like I can write more about the moon chapter.

A very nice book. The Peach Pillar and the Wano Kingdom were all destroyed, and they were very satisfied. Unfortunately, the Seraph army was not formed, and the Clone Elephant Master and Flame Calamity Clan were a little disappointed. What happened to the fur tribe in the end was not said, and whether they were loyal to the protagonist Mo Ye's tribe. It would be more interesting if the protagonist could use Vegapunk's technology to create Devil Fruits, allowing abilities from other worlds to appear in the form of Devil Fruits, such as the various magics in "Fairy Tail", Akunokia's black dragon, the protagonist Natsu's fire dragon, etc., And the blood inheritance limits and ninjutsu in "Naruto", such as Sharingan's double eye technique, Susanoo, and the power of six paths.

The opening is very well written and very realistic. In fact, as an ordinary person in our country, there are actually two things to worry about. The first plot is strength, and the second is domineering (not to mention just useless people in peacetime, our country is the most fighting nation in the world, and once the bloodline breaks out, it is a rational war maniac). Although I choose the first plug-in plot and use the plot to get results (but I still like to think that strong people like Garp and Rayleigh at least are not restricted by the sea), I will follow up on how to write it.

Very good, but the Devil Fruit has a lot of abilities. Sometimes I feel dizzy. The Seven-Star Sword was broken like this, and even Enma or the sword was bent. The development is still too fast. The chief engineer is only a few years old. It should be written that the development in the 10 years before the Straw Hats came out was not long enough! [Laughing and crying]

I think the author wrote it very well, and it feels like this is the real pirate world, unlike other pirate fan works, which feel like playing house.

This book is not bad. . . You can take a look. . Multi-fruit settings are also good. The title of the book should be changed. . Hua Hua Guo is incapable of writing much. . In the middle period, other fruits will be added.

In fact, it is very simple to treat the disease of little beauty Koya. You don't need to go to find any famous doctor. Just eat a devil fruit and the disease will be cured. Of course, it is not a problem to learn the medical skills of famous doctors as a ship doctor.

. . Objectively speaking, the debut novel is really good when coded like this. It is even better than many similar novels. At least it is not unfinished. It is also rare for a pirate fan novel that is not systematic and does not have messy Naruto elements...

It's the best One Piece novel I've ever read. There's no brainlessness and I just rely on the system, and I don't always rely on swordsmanship. The biggest highlight of One Piece is the Devil Fruit. The author can think of using garbage fruits to develop the protagonist at the beginning. It's really interesting [Like] [Like]

How can I put it this way? If you read this book slowly, you will find that it is very imaginative and rich in content. It is much better than most pirate novels. I don't know why the rating is so low. When I saw the rating was low, I planned to read it casually, but as I read it slowly, I felt that this book is quite good. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] I hope the rating can go up. Such a good book cannot be buried.

I have read about 10 chapters. The novel is very interesting. Why is the rating so low?