Pirates of Man: Starting with Saving O'hara

Although I haven't read anything about this book yet, one very important thing I saw is that Momonosuke died.

The new book is released, mainly focusing on some events and background stories twenty years before the original main story. Please read it with patience.

So far overall pretty good. The author continues to work hard, but I suggest that the author revise the novel's introduction to highlight some points, such as multiple female protagonists, such as Shuangwen. I think your current writing is very good, but the introduction is too bland, and you have also written some things that should not be written, such as relying on the original main line and other self-perceived shortcomings. Don't judge your own strengths and weaknesses. Readers have different tastes. If you deny yourself in your introduction, you will lose a large number of readers. I just came in after reading the introduction three times and running out of books to read. This shows how bad your introduction is.

5 Stars. Celebrating Momonosuke receiving a lunch box

Five-star rating

I gave four stars because, author, you have really done your homework! I didn't give that one star because the system is too rubbish. Only the beginning and the end appear to be frozen in other places, which can avoid all the major events that are going to happen in history. Well, it can be good. Like this change

Momonosuke is dead, this novel must be followed

The plot logic of this book is the most comfortable one I have ever read.

I think this book is very good,

Isn't the protagonist's teleportation fruit the Flying Thunder God in Naruto?

This book is good, good luck to the author

Yeah, that's interesting

I've read it, passed by it, and it's been a long time since I've read it.

It's okay, but the ending is too rushed

Chapter 8 alone makes this novel worth reading.

It's pretty good, but the plot is a bit fast. It didn't take long to watch.

It's pretty, but not detailed enough.

Yes, but in the end, I don't know who Luffy's mother and grandmother are, and who is Shanks' daughter... Etc.

It's a very good novel. I've finished reading it. I don't know why the score is so low. Is someone maliciously suppressing it?

It's still good, I hope the author can work hard and don't be a eunuch [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

It's more exciting and doesn't have as much nonsense as the original plot.