(Bug modification in the previous article) Nohara Satoru originally thought that traveling to the world of Naruto was already outrageous, but the outrageous life has just begun (Naruto + Curse Return) (I don't write about stallions, only about those who enter the harem by mistake. In addition, there are cheats, but this is not a novel without cheats. This novel is also a writing practice. Low scores are acceptable, and no brainless comments are allowed)
Reader comments
Moses Moses, produced by Ayao, must be a high-quality product, updated twice daily, mainly for fun, if you like the dark, please don't enter!
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*
Come on, the author ٩( 'ω' )و
(ง •̀_•́)ง(ง •̀_•́)ง(ง •̀_•́)ง
The heroine must not be Kurenai Yuhi.
The writing is pretty good, and the character and creativity are pretty good.
Nice! ! ! ! !
Guess who I am, yes I am Tao Fa, hahaha
It's a very good book. The protagonist has his own personality, and the system doesn't have the power to reach the sky in one step. It's very real. The characters of the people in other original books are also very appropriate and don't collapse much. It doesn't feel like the characters of the people in other books have collapsed.
Coming from the Dragon Clan, this book is also very well written.
There's nothing poisonous about it, and there's no problem with the settings. Very good book. It's just that it's still too short, and there's nothing exciting about the plot. It's all about daily life. That's not to say it's not good. After all, it's just a new book, so I can't make any requirements in this regard. If I go through one or two hundred chapters in this way and read it all in one go, I think I'll be exhausted [laughing]
I want to ask the author. Kushina won't be the heroine, right? I still hope Minato Kushina is not taken apart.
Very interesting, come on, author
There is nothing poisonous at the moment🌝
It's quite beautiful\(//∇//)\I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs, come on! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧
This book is good, I, Wang Duoyu, voted for it.
It's very good, the writing is smooth, and there are no obvious bugs in the content. For now, it can be regarded as the seed of a sacred book. Keep updating and don't break it. I look forward to the author becoming a god.
You can watch it for a while. Books may have imperfections. But you can talk to the author. 😘
It looks great, there are no logical problems, and there is nothing wrong with the timeline.
Please update more and I will give you a rating of 9.5 [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
The writing is very good. The new Naruto routine and no harem are still worth looking forward to. The author has been working hard to update it and I finished reading it in one afternoon.
It's a very interesting book, but I would like to ask if Uncle Masahiko is the protagonist I thought he would be alive for a long time? So familiar!
Good review, just don't be a eunuch
Very good Naruto fanfic
It's pretty good. I hope I don't become a eunuch.
For the novel, for the author
Pretty good, very creative
Five-star praise, not much to say.
As soon as I saw it, I realized that the author was cheating! ! ! ! Too bad for myself! But very nice
It's very interesting. As for the character of the protagonist, I feel that he needs to grow up. Although he has the soul of an adult, he has never experienced war after all. Come on, author.
This is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen. I hope the author will continue to work hard [smile]
Very good, not being invincible attracts me very much
Looks good, the content is pretty good
Come on! ! !
It's very interesting. I've seen this book several times, but the title seems a bit confusing. I think it might be better if I change the title [smile]
Moses Moses, produced by Ayao, must be a high-quality product, updated twice daily, mainly for fun, if you like the dark, please don't enter!
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* Come on, the author ٩( 'ω' )و (ง •̀_•́)ง(ง •̀_•́)ง(ง •̀_•́)ง
The heroine must not be Kurenai Yuhi.
The writing is pretty good, and the character and creativity are pretty good. Nice! ! ! ! !
Guess who I am, yes I am Tao Fa, hahaha
It's a very good book. The protagonist has his own personality, and the system doesn't have the power to reach the sky in one step. It's very real. The characters of the people in other original books are also very appropriate and don't collapse much. It doesn't feel like the characters of the people in other books have collapsed.
Coming from the Dragon Clan, this book is also very well written.
There's nothing poisonous about it, and there's no problem with the settings. Very good book. It's just that it's still too short, and there's nothing exciting about the plot. It's all about daily life. That's not to say it's not good. After all, it's just a new book, so I can't make any requirements in this regard. If I go through one or two hundred chapters in this way and read it all in one go, I think I'll be exhausted [laughing]
I want to ask the author. Kushina won't be the heroine, right? I still hope Minato Kushina is not taken apart. Very interesting, come on, author
There is nothing poisonous at the moment🌝
It's quite beautiful\(//∇//)\I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs, come on! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧
This book is good, I, Wang Duoyu, voted for it.
It's very good, the writing is smooth, and there are no obvious bugs in the content. For now, it can be regarded as the seed of a sacred book. Keep updating and don't break it. I look forward to the author becoming a god.
You can watch it for a while. Books may have imperfections. But you can talk to the author. 😘
It looks great, there are no logical problems, and there is nothing wrong with the timeline.
Please update more and I will give you a rating of 9.5 [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
The writing is very good. The new Naruto routine and no harem are still worth looking forward to. The author has been working hard to update it and I finished reading it in one afternoon.
It's a very interesting book, but I would like to ask if Uncle Masahiko is the protagonist I thought he would be alive for a long time? So familiar!
Good review, just don't be a eunuch
Very good Naruto fanfic
It's pretty good. I hope I don't become a eunuch.
For the novel, for the author
Pretty good, very creative
Five-star praise, not much to say.
As soon as I saw it, I realized that the author was cheating! ! ! ! Too bad for myself! But very nice
It's very interesting. As for the character of the protagonist, I feel that he needs to grow up. Although he has the soul of an adult, he has never experienced war after all. Come on, author.
This is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen. I hope the author will continue to work hard [smile]
Very good, not being invincible attracts me very much
Looks good, the content is pretty good Come on! ! !
It's very interesting. I've seen this book several times, but the title seems a bit confusing. I think it might be better if I change the title [smile]