The Ultimate Summoning of the Three Kingdoms

The writing is so messy that I can't understand it at all. Li Cunxiao injured Lu Bu on the first day, but how come Lu Bu recovered from his injury the next day and went out to fight. The problem is that they had a fight on the first day and didn't know each other the next day?

It is recommended that the names in it be changed or the author reads it himself to see if it makes sense. For example, Hua Xiong, Hua Xiong and Huawei, it makes my head hurt to read it.

Overall it's okay. Just change Chapter 15 and some typos.

What does this say? The preface does not match the postscript. I thought the typography was wrong in the first chapter, but after reading chapters 5 and 6, I realized I was wrong. Elementary school students are better at writing than you.

Confused names, bad reviews

I haven't finished listening to three chapters, and there are too many questions. If I don't talk about other things, I will just talk about the dialogue. The dialogue is rigid and it sounds uncomfortable. Can "Tao" be replaced by something else? Liu Xudao Liu Xu said Liu Xu asked Liu Xu replied … To finish is to "say" …

It's too bad, it's too messy, it doesn't make sense, the writing is too poor,

There are a few parts of the glue that are in a mess.

The content is not fluent

The chapters are confused, the names of people are confused, the plot is patchwork, there are many typos, and the whole is confusing. Not recommended to watch now. Bad review