When Liu Xu arrived unexpectedly, with the help of the system, he collected powerful generals and faced off against each other. Here you can see the generals and officials you want to see.
Reader comments
The writing is so messy that I can't understand it at all. Li Cunxiao injured Lu Bu on the first day, but how come Lu Bu recovered from his injury the next day and went out to fight. The problem is that they had a fight on the first day and didn't know each other the next day?
What does this say? The preface does not match the postscript. I thought the typography was wrong in the first chapter, but after reading chapters 5 and 6, I realized I was wrong. Elementary school students are better at writing than you.
It is recommended that the names in it be changed or the author reads it himself to see if it makes sense. For example, Hua Xiong, Hua Xiong and Huawei, it makes my head hurt to read it.
Overall it's okay. Just change Chapter 15 and some typos.
It's too bad, it's too messy, it doesn't make sense, the writing is too poor,
I haven't finished listening to three chapters, and there are too many questions. If I don't talk about other things, I will just talk about the dialogue.
The dialogue is rigid and it sounds uncomfortable. Can "Tao" be replaced by something else?
Liu Xudao
Liu Xu said
Liu Xu asked
Liu Xu replied
…
To finish is to "say"
…
Confused names, bad reviews
The book is probably good, but the layout is so disgusting that it makes me feel disgusting when I read it. There are still chapters missing.
The author asks you to study it carefully. Many places have wrong names. I'm convinced.
What kind of thing is this copied from?
The chapters are confused, the names of people are confused, the plot is patchwork, there are many typos, and the whole is confusing. Not recommended to watch now. Bad review
The content is not fluent
There are a few parts of the glue that are in a mess.
The plot is confusing and has too many mistakes
It's such a mess and I don't know what to write.
It's so chaotic. There was a war with the Xiongnu in Yanmen. Why did Ju Yi suddenly show up?
The article is extremely poor
Chapter 15 Being Eaten
A push of water,
There are too many words for water, and the writing is too messy to understand.
The writing is so messy that I can't understand it at all. Li Cunxiao injured Lu Bu on the first day, but how come Lu Bu recovered from his injury the next day and went out to fight. The problem is that they had a fight on the first day and didn't know each other the next day?
What does this say? The preface does not match the postscript. I thought the typography was wrong in the first chapter, but after reading chapters 5 and 6, I realized I was wrong. Elementary school students are better at writing than you.
It is recommended that the names in it be changed or the author reads it himself to see if it makes sense. For example, Hua Xiong, Hua Xiong and Huawei, it makes my head hurt to read it.
Overall it's okay. Just change Chapter 15 and some typos.
It's too bad, it's too messy, it doesn't make sense, the writing is too poor,
I haven't finished listening to three chapters, and there are too many questions. If I don't talk about other things, I will just talk about the dialogue. The dialogue is rigid and it sounds uncomfortable. Can "Tao" be replaced by something else? Liu Xudao Liu Xu said Liu Xu asked Liu Xu replied … To finish is to "say" …
Confused names, bad reviews
The book is probably good, but the layout is so disgusting that it makes me feel disgusting when I read it. There are still chapters missing.
The author asks you to study it carefully. Many places have wrong names. I'm convinced.
What kind of thing is this copied from?
The chapters are confused, the names of people are confused, the plot is patchwork, there are many typos, and the whole is confusing. Not recommended to watch now. Bad review
The content is not fluent
There are a few parts of the glue that are in a mess.
The plot is confusing and has too many mistakes
It's such a mess and I don't know what to write.
It's so chaotic. There was a war with the Xiongnu in Yanmen. Why did Ju Yi suddenly show up?
The article is extremely poor
Chapter 15 Being Eaten
A push of water,
There are too many words for water, and the writing is too messy to understand.