The Strongest: To the Ancient Saiyans

It comes from a female writer who wrote the last Dragon Ball. Don't criticize me while you are holding it in. Wait until I write a million first, and then you can scold me for the rest [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute] Readers, I'm sorry. I'm exhausted in writing about my combat power, but I'm in a good mood. [Thinking] Regarding the issue of the heroine's harem, I can only say that after one million, I will schedule it on the 21st. I won't consider anything else. This is my respect for Dragon Ball. I can still write up to one million. The goal is to write for one year [Start] (budget 2 million words)

For now, it looks pretty good. Instead of simply taking the path of God, it takes the path of transformation. It feels strange for Saiyans to simply take the path of God. Although the official Dragon Ball Saiyans have indeed followed the path of God since then, I think the author can combine transformation with God's transformation. For example, Super 7 is merging the power of God and synthesizing another transformation. Also, I want to know if there is a female protagonist. If there is, if there is no hope on the 18th, can I date the angel girls? After all, there are several beautiful ones among the angels. Is the harem open? [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] After all, if you are always fighting or on the way to fight, you will get visual fatigue. Pig's feet are not flat-headed brothers, right?

People, come out and continue coding.

This book is good, especially the fact that there is no female protagonist. I really like it. I just don't understand why some other Dragon Ball novels have a harem. I feel that it is not necessary to have a harem in the hot-blooded series. It is also possible to have a single female protagonist, but it still feels weird to have a harem in the hot-blooded series.

Not bad, not bad, really good. So can you post it together next time? I don't think it's too long. As long as I can watch it all at once, even if you save for three months, I won't take too long.

It feels good. It's the kind I like. It's the kind where the protagonist mainly fights, rather than looking for that kind of woman. But it feels a bit mixed and messy. Oh, by the way, it's the author. Sometimes you check the settings. Super 4 may be able to beat ordinary Super Blue, but it's different later. Yes, and you can learn from the Dragon Ball fics that have come out and are recognized by Akira Toriyama, such as Dragon Ball AF, etc., But I don't recommend you to find that kind of nihilistic Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan 7, etc. It's better to strengthen the protagonist's basic combat power, and then Later, I will arrange a bloodline for him, such as a super hero, and also improve his talents. Then I can't just come up and fight fiercely. Then I need to rely on some combat IQ, plus some small skills. For example, there is magic in Dragon Ball, but I am very curious. Why don't you learn anything similar to magic when writing Dragon Ball fans? Well, that's all I have to offer. Author, try to think about it when you see it. After all, many Dragon Ball fans either have the idea of starting a harem, or they have the kind of mentality of being the only one in heaven and earth.

Good writing, but the transformation multiplier of Super Four is a poisonous point. It cannot be more than 1200 times normal. This is only 3 times the distance from Super Three. Wukong personally experienced that he did not expect that he could become so powerful. Moreover, he is 50-50 better than the giant ape Baby who shines with 17 million times of Brutz's light. Ordinary Brutz's light can turn Wukong into a giant ape, not to mention 17 million times, so the lower limit of Super Four is at least 10 times more than Super Three.

The writing is pretty good. Why no comments?

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By the way, the author, I remember I read one before. The comic is about many parallel worlds of the Dragon Ball universe being brought together to compete and fight. This parallel world is not like Dragon Ball Super, but a multiverse like DC, which is probably like this. I hope the author can see this comment. If possible, if the author sees this comment, can you write about it too? It's okay to be a side story