A God Joining the Survival Game Is Pretty Reasonable, Right?

I have nothing to say about the fairy grass [laughing evilly], I think that the Xuan Shen chapter is an upgrade, the essence of the book, and cannot be changed. The plot arrangement is reasonable and in-depth. Apart from the complicated operation of arranging Zhao Min and then writing it to death immediately, which is incomprehensible [what], other words, after experiencing "masterpieces" such as Ultra's Son-in-law, I am no longer afraid of poison resistance Max [Thinking], author, please come on, don't change it over and over again and finally collapse [Thinking].

After reading the book, I found that many people have opinions about the character of Zhao Min and the protagonist's personality. To sum up, I think the author may want to write about a little girl who is inexperienced in the world. Because she suddenly gained strong power and became a "noble" mage, she became swollen and felt invincible. This is probably what the author meant. However, the writing may not be very good, so the writing is a bit flawed, but she can still work hard to improve it. Come on! However, it still needs to be changed, otherwise many readers may be lost. Then there is the protagonist. I think the protagonist should be lazy and a collector (quite contradictory). (There are many more, but I am too tired to type, so that's it.) (I just checked for typos and found that there is no period, but I don't care, let's leave it at that. Typing is so tiring) (Quietly: I don't want to type periods, but I type so many words, ha)

The masterpiece in Tomato is so logical that I wanted to give up on Tomato for a while, but finally I found this book. The author beat most of the writers in it instantly. Insist on updating thousands of pictures or you won't be able to read them enough

It is no exaggeration to say that if this novel can maintain such a sophisticated plot, it actually has the potential to be adapted into a comic or animation. I think the plot and setting are already comparable to the masterpieces of comics a few years ago. However, in the last few chapters, it can be seen that the author has been a little rushed and may not be able to do that well. But if there is no ban, the next person who borrows the setting should be better.

Avoid poisonous points in a timely manner, the writing is pretty good and creative enough. I personally think that Zhao Min and the protagonist's plan to open a trumpet in the upper world in the book may be poisonous, but one of Zhao Min wrote it to death, and the other mentioned it but did not implement it.

The second game article I read that I was interested in, I remember the last one was God of Hunting from Ruoyu Suifeng [laughing]. In my opinion, it was good, and the content was quite rich, but it would have been better if there were fewer words that were similar to venting emotions, complaining, and excessive words. In addition, the frequency of the development of the world view of the plot is a bit different. Sometimes it unfolds slowly, and sometimes it is directly narrated. It looks a bit strange. In addition, the gods of that world sometimes act a bit wrong. All in all, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. This is the third book I have read on Tomato. It is very interesting. Good luck to the author [Like]

The pace is slow and the plot is awesome. Especially the level control is very good. There is no feeling like level 20 in one chapter. The level limit of equipment has a sense of belonging. Otherwise, the chapters will be changed too frequently [Top post][Top post]

Comparing the two worlds, Xuan Jie is more interesting and reasonable. In addition, regarding the protagonist, everyone has their own favorite character. It's fine as long as it's not distorted. I quite like being kind to others like this. Maximizing benefits in everything is quite boring.

From 300 to now, I can only say that as a harem novel, this one has achieved a level that many works cannot achieve. The ending is full of flowers. (｢･ω･)｢♥

It looks very good, especially the cross-writing between the upper boundary and the main line. Many people are confused when they read it, but I think it is quite good and reasonable.