It Makes Sense to Mix a God into a Survival Game, Right?

I have nothing to say about the fairy grass [laughing evilly], I think that the Xuan Shen chapter is an upgrade, the essence of the book, and cannot be changed. The plot arrangement is reasonable and in-depth. Apart from the complicated operation of arranging Zhao Min and then writing it to death immediately, which is incomprehensible [what], other words, after experiencing "masterpieces" such as Ultra's Son-in-law, I am no longer afraid of poison resistance Max [Thinking], author, please come on, don't change it over and over again and finally collapse [Thinking].

After reading the book, I found that many people have opinions about the character of Zhao Min and the protagonist's personality. To sum up, I think the author may want to write about a little girl who is inexperienced in the world. Because she suddenly gained strong power and became a "noble" mage, she became swollen and felt invincible. This is probably what the author meant. However, the writing may not be very good, so the writing is a bit flawed, but she can still work hard to improve it. Come on! However, it still needs to be changed, otherwise many readers may be lost. Then there is the protagonist. I think the protagonist should be lazy and a collector (quite contradictory). (There are many more, but I am too tired to type, so that's it.) (I just checked for typos and found that there is no period, but I don't care, let's leave it at that. Typing is so tiring) (Quietly: I don't want to type periods, but I type so many words, ha)

The masterpiece in Tomato is so logical that I wanted to give up on Tomato for a while, but finally I found this book. The author beat most of the writers in it instantly. Insist on updating thousands of pictures or you won't be able to read them enough

It is no exaggeration to say that if this novel can maintain such a sophisticated plot, it actually has the potential to be adapted into a comic or animation. I think the plot and setting are already comparable to the masterpieces of comics a few years ago. However, in the last few chapters, it can be seen that the author has been a little rushed and may not be able to do that well. But if there is no ban, the next person who borrows the setting should be better.

Avoid poisonous points in a timely manner, the writing is pretty good and creative enough. I personally think that Zhao Min and the protagonist's plan to open a trumpet in the upper world in the book may be poisonous, but one of Zhao Min wrote it to death, and the other mentioned it but did not implement it.

The pace is slow and the plot is awesome. Especially the level control is very good. There is no feeling like level 20 in one chapter. The level limit of equipment has a sense of belonging. Otherwise, the chapters will be changed too frequently [Top post][Top post]

The second game article I read that I was interested in, I remember the last one was God of Hunting from Ruoyu Suifeng [laughing]. In my opinion, it was good, and the content was quite rich, but it would have been better if there were fewer words that were similar to venting emotions, complaining, and excessive words. In addition, the frequency of the development of the world view of the plot is a bit different. Sometimes it unfolds slowly, and sometimes it is directly narrated. It looks a bit strange. In addition, the gods of that world sometimes act a bit wrong. All in all, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. This is the third book I have read on Tomato. It is very interesting. Good luck to the author [Like]

Comparing the two worlds, Xuan Jie is more interesting and reasonable. In addition, regarding the protagonist, everyone has their own favorite character. It's fine as long as it's not distorted. I quite like being kind to others like this. Maximizing benefits in everything is quite boring.

From 300 to now, I can only say that as a harem novel, this one has achieved a level that many works cannot achieve. The ending is full of flowers. (｢･ω･)｢♥

It looks very good, especially the cross-writing between the upper boundary and the main line. Many people are confused when they read it, but I think it is quite good and reasonable.

It's very interesting and I'm looking forward to the following plot. I hope you don't give up. Come on!

I give you my five stars when the book is finished. It is also the first five stars given by my account. Except for an uncomfortable character in the first few dozen chapters, this book has no poisonous points. It has a two-line plot and a happy ending. There is no harem, no indiscriminate killing, and it is not a virgin. You can read it with confidence.

It's a very interesting novel with unconstrained ideas, interesting concepts, decent update capabilities, and a relatively compact plot. I hope the author will continue to work hard and optimize some of the main lines of characters that have disappeared inexplicably in the later period, and fill in the holes [smirk][snicker][smirk]

I think this book is very interesting, but it doesn't have any flaws. The lighting role was also brought over directly. But why is this review so low? Normally it is almost 8:06 or above now.

Invincible control of the dependent plane + almost invincible on the main plane (God) It could have been divided into two cool topics, but they were packed into one novel. Moreover, both aspects are pretty good, so the rating is naturally high. I hope the author can better coordinate the relationship between the two planes

This book is the most awesome fusion of game writing and family-rearing writing, bar none! ! The two are constantly layered, not stuck, and complement each other. They are so harmonious that people really trust the setting of this world. This will be fascinating, with game text as the main body, a plot that is neither procrastinating nor cliche, a running account, or rhetoric, a few characters with distinct personalities, and a vast worldview. It's the first time I've seen a game where the protagonist feels so comfortable. He's not selfish or a Bodhisattva. He seems to be a human being, a person whose profession is God. Let's talk about the family story, supplemented by the plot of the world, it is still comfortable in one word. It reminded me of when I watched Let Go of the Witch. I am following a semi-technological and semi-fantasy route, and at this stage I am mainly focusing on cultivation. Use fantasy materials to promote the development of science and technology, and look forward to what it will develop into. The dreamy linkage between the two worlds, the difference between people in the upper world and the people in the lower world, the conflicts between people in the game world, organizations and organizations, cities and cities, empires and empires, humans and humans are wonderful and not messy. The full text is wonderful. I read it in two days and enjoyed it. I hope the author will update it with high quality and soon.

To be honest, the rating of this book is a little too high. First of all, let me talk about something that makes me uncomfortable. The city where the protagonist in the book (Lone Star City) should be the place where Chinese players come, so the content written in the article about Tongtian City should be the place where players from Japan (who lived a good life) came. Then it can be clearly seen that the occupations in Tongtian City are very close to their traditions. Customs and so on, but when it comes to Lone Star City, the city where Chinese players are located, it is different. Instead, it is very biased towards the Western side. There are no Chinese professions, etc. Whether it is warriors, mages, priests (nurses), assassins, demons, etc., They are all biased towards the Western side, which makes me feel a little cultural inferiority. In fact, there is no need to read and read novels with such confidence. After all, they are just for fun and make people feel happy. This is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. Secondly, I also like the author's style and creative ability. I find it refreshing, especially the part about family members. Finally, I hope the author can work hard and produce better articles. Come on [like]

It's a very interesting novel, and it's realistic. At first it felt like an online game, but the world of gods is even better written. Based on my experience of reading Tomato for several years, the online game scored 9.0 And the world of gods 9.4.

I started following this book when it had more than 400 chapters. Although it was a little long ago, I have forgotten the plot and only remember the outline. But since I can read it to the end, the plot must be good. The author's writing style is very good, the story has a beginning and an end, and basically the ending of each character is clearly explained. It is a good book.

Hurry up, author. I finished reading it in two days. It's very satisfying. One more thing, don't just talk about driving. Think about it in practice.

A very interesting work, not too toxic. As for the role of Zhao Min, it is just a transitional one to lead the plot, so don't mind it too much. Just like other novels, there will always be a passer-by, but don't let it exist for too long. After all, it will make people disgusted, and the author doesn't want readers to abandon the book because of this character. So what, I hope the author will add more updates soon, it's not enough!

The writing at the beginning is quite satisfactory. There are some small mistakes in some places, but after that it becomes quite good-looking and worth planting. But I haven't seen yet whether it is a harem story. After all, there is only one female protagonist now, but the author prefers to write female characters. Except for Zhao Min who received the lunch early, these characters are not surprising.

It's a challenge to the peerless writing style of netizens. I once looked at the notes in the book_1. I once looked at the notes in the book, recalling my immature past, recording the scrawled and messy thoughts, and remembering the footsteps that I can never go back to. 2. I once looked at the notes in the book, recording every moment of time, including the ignorance of youth, the heroic words of youth, the helplessness of middle age, and the dullness of old age. 3. I once looked at the notes in the book and flipped through your memories here. The marks on the table depict the past between you and me, and the photos capture the memories of youth. Life should not stop here. We want to meet again. We look up and still remember the friendship of that year. We look down and laugh about the difficulties of life. 4. I once looked at the notes in the book, connecting ten years of memories here. The breeze blew up the essays on the table, and I reached out to hold my thoughts in my hair. I lamented that time does not leave behind friendships. I closed the book and cut off the memories. I didn't want to continue writing about the four seasons. I just wanted to have only green memories in front of me. 5. I once looked at the notes in the book and picked up the memories of youth, the Chinese teacher's writing, the mathematics teacher's collection, the English teacher's friendly, the physics teacher's sphere, the chemistry teacher's reagents, the biology teacher's Dolly, the geography teacher's trajectory, the history teacher's victory, the politics teacher's timing, youth is passing away quietly. (Sourced from fan submission)…

Although I am a boy, I don't know why some people keep criticizing him. I really feel that there is no need to criticize Cai Xukun so much. Cai Xukun is a high-quality idol, very popular with fans, and has a very positive outlook. In a reality show such as Running Man, Cai Xukun's excellent personality and way of dealing with people are really reflected. When playing games, he does not bother to use extraordinary means to win the game, but uses his own known conditions, smart and logical bold analysis, which is very admirable! He is also very polite, he works hard, and his meat is very nutritious. Seeing him can ignite my enthusiasm for learning and regain my hope in life. Isn't this the meaning of an idol? Isn't it because the little black people keep hating him because they envy him for living a more comfortable life than they do? Please, his good life is the result of hard work and countless days and nights of practicing singing and dancing. Little black people, continue to hate him. You will still face the same struggling life when you get up tomorrow, but as an iku n, I will still continue to fan him because the positive energy he brings to me helps me get out of the haze. I wish Kunkun to go to the Paradise of Paradise as soon as possible [smile]

Yes, the name is a bit off-grade. The only bad point in the early stage is that Zhao Min's handling method is a bit radical but it is still handled well. I find it very enjoyable to intersperse traditional online game adventure and farming simulation styles. The protagonist is decisive and ruthless in Tianji, which is similar to the male protagonists in some cool novels. In God's Domain, he is kind, and his speech will be uncontrollably distorted to be a god's serious speech, giving people a feeling of being ruthless. When I see the author asking for praise, I will also be happy to give you an evaluation. Those who like online games or farming will enjoy reading this. There are some typos but not many, and the logic processing is OK and there are no big mistakes. Well that's it

Overall, it was okay. I didn't have much to say after watching it. I just felt that some of the character creations were a bit boring, especially the protagonist's harem. The male protagonist said that he only loved Yi Qing, but in the end, he got a harem group. Well, how should I put it? It's weird, and many female characters' affection for the protagonist is more or less inexplicable. I can still find some reasons for Satan or Ti. I can't find reasons for the rest of them, which is a bit far-fetched. I can only say that the image creation is not good. That's enough. I personally read less harem stories. I don't know if this is a common problem with harem stories or if it's unique to this genre. But my personal suggestion is to write it well and don't write it next time. There is also the final scene where the protagonist fights in the end. I almost beat the protagonist to death at the end. On the contrary, You are all created by me, so I will delete it if I want. It is more or less forcing the halo of the protagonist. I want to make the protagonist die together to create some atmosphere, but the result is that the protagonist is forced to write "I don't understand". I personally can't understand what I don't understand [face covering] But overall it's pretty good. The content isn't interesting but it's still watchable. Most of the parts are passable. It's quite fun to watch the protagonist cheat and kill randomly. If it doesn't drag on, I'll give it four stars for encouragement.

The Xuanshen world and the Tianji game world are interconnected and influence each other like two planes, and the male protagonist is a god who has lost his godhead. I am curious about his background (I hope you will not disappoint me (doge)). The pace of the storyline is more appropriate. The characters are vividly described, and each person shows his or her own characteristics. According to my guess, the world view should be relatively large and I can write a lot. The plot of the story is so intertwined that people have the urge to keep reading, and the author "can't" be erotic. I hope the author can give us a better reading experience

Fine. There is potential as long as you persist and get a rating of 9.0 Or above (at least) The ratio of plots inside God's country and those outside God's country must be well controlled, 2:3 is about the same (3 is outside God's country). It is recommended that the domestic and external labels be added. Some people like the Kingdom of God. Some people like God abroad.

The evaluation is as follows: Advantages: 1:) The subject matter is not new, it is a story about gods and their dependents, but the idea is good. The protagonist develops in a world similar to online games, and the dependents cheat and kill in another upper world. The writing method is a two-line method, and the story connectivity is well handled. 2:) When I posted this comment, I had already read Chapter 400. The male protagonist is still a single female protagonist (physically). I don't know if there will be a harem in the future, but I hope it won't be a stallion. 3:) It is written in two lines, so it still tests basic skills. It is well written, and the relationship between the dependents and gods is clearly explained (no spoilers, just read it yourself), and it is updated three times a day stably, which is worthy of praise. Disadvantages: 1:) The preparation is too long. It's almost 400 chapters before the protagonist's story reaches its climax. The previous story points mainly focus on the dependents, so it's more about daily life and training (divided into the protagonist line and the dependent line, and the early development is mainly on the dependent line) 2:) The description of its own abilities is sometimes too vague, such as the setting of divine grace, but the rest is fine.

It's super, super, super good-looking, but there was a girl named Zhao Min in the early stage who was a bit annoying, but it ended after a few chapters, so you can eat it with confidence! ! ?