The ideas are confusing, the plot is not smooth, speechless, messy, difficult to write, boring, sleepy to the point of falling asleep, boring, the world view is laid out from the beginning, wrong writing method, the first book, many mistakes
Reader comments
The writing is really good. One of the few interesting articles I have read can keep me reading. The writing is really good and the thinking is clear, but the writing is a bit slow.
The setting is quite good, the collision between gods and demons, the alternation of falsehood and reality, it describes the warmth and warmth of the world, and talks about ghosts and ghosts. I look forward to the development of this book, support the author, and urge more updates.
The environment is really good
The cows in the production team didn't dare to rest like this [smile] [smile] After they had been working for a long time, they thought they had updated dozens of them [angry] [angry]
When was this book finished?
The writing is really good. One of the few interesting articles I have read can keep me reading. The writing is really good and the thinking is clear, but the writing is a bit slow.
The setting is quite good, the collision between gods and demons, the alternation of falsehood and reality, it describes the warmth and warmth of the world, and talks about ghosts and ghosts. I look forward to the development of this book, support the author, and urge more updates. The environment is really good
The cows in the production team didn't dare to rest like this [smile] [smile] After they had been working for a long time, they thought they had updated dozens of them [angry] [angry] When was this book finished?