Five ****

Support, in general, there are many shortcomings. The first is the licking of group members. Esdeath's character will not lick like this. She is a person who believes in the law of the jungle. She wants to challenge and surpass the strong more, and it would be meaningless to just lick. Without contradictions and conflicts, there would be no climax. This is why many people like to write about Tony joining the group. Moreover, the main world you choose has little plasticity and little remaining plot content, which also means that there are too few words that can be written in the main world without water. What follows is basically what happened to the group members. The protagonist travels through time, fights monsters, or just chats, which is really boring. There was a group article where the protagonist was the Silver Superman, and it seemed to be a eunuch at 450,000 words. Compared with his amazingness at the beginning, this word count is really pitiful, and invincible articles are really difficult to grasp. Finally, to be honest, the best results this book can achieve are average. I hope the author will not be too disappointed with the results and give up writing. It is rare to write a five-point book nowadays. I hope the author can keep going. In addition, I have an idea. If the author wants to write a book after this one, you can refer to it. The protagonist takes Gojo Satoru's template and travels to the Gojo home where the protagonist changes the doll. He can become brothers with the gyro protagonist or replace him. This is a highlight. If it is named after this highlight, such as "As a puppet master, I learned magic after falling out of love", it will definitely deceive many people.

How to say it? The plot is still good, and the content is not bad, but there are too many typos, which can easily affect the viewing experience. If the author corrects the previous typos, the rating should go up.

I'm thinking about what to do with the protagonist in the later stage. There's no way he can win when he meets the prehistoric level. Even if the protagonist develops quickly, he won't be that strong within 1,000 years, unless the timeline is extended [Thinking]

Very nice, keep up the good work There are a lot of typos, but it's still pretty good.

It's okay, don't mess with it

It feels quite interesting, but a bit short.

It's okay, but it stops at being okay. There are many typos in the plot. The advantage lies in Wutiao It sucks. You can't check it over after you've written it, right? Lots of typos. Lots of symbols, lots of spaces, lots of plot, just like that.

Come on, your book is very suitable for me, I will always support you

I also think it looks great, plus one for my fans! ! Author, come on (little cutie, come on to my bowl (•ࡇ•)(✧∇✧)

I am your first fan (´∀｀)♡

I hope to continue writing in the future. Can the author not join the harem? Overall, it's good.

Very good, good luck to the author^ω^

Great! Why is the rating so low? Someone did it on purpose?

Very good, come on author, there is great potential

The author looks at me, looks at me. It's not a sleeping stall, it's a sleeping stall.

Why does the Dagu inside become Taigu?

Okay, when will you join my Zhatian Gang?

Author, can you add some characters from jojo?

It's not bad, but from the beginning of more than fifty chapters, there are typos and garbled characters. I hope the author can correct them.

In terms of general rationality, this book was originally quite good, but unfortunately there were too many garbled characters. I only hope it can be improved. [Learned][Please update]

It's very beautiful and I love it very much.

Very good, really beautiful

Wow, don't break it, author

There are many typos and I hope they can be corrected. If you can see them, please pay attention to them in the future. Thank you (*^o^*)

Why do I feel that the plot of the chat group I read in a certain paid novel is a bit familiar?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

There's really nothing to say about giving it five stars.

Although I don't know what the story is, it's very interesting⊙_⊙

It's not bad. Update it well. Speed ​​is not required. Good quality is really good. Come on＾0＾~