Fantasy**********

Come on, brothers, give me a round of applause for the jockey to destroy his ancestors [laughs][laughs]

Personally I feel it's pretty good, just a little lacking.

My second favorite life-script type novel. Too little too little.

Is this book gone? I couldn't recommend this book even if I went to the bookstore to recommend it. Damn it, it's so beautiful. It's gone in just one book.

Author, let me give you some advice. Since it is your first time to write a book, it is best to have two or three protagonists. You can make several male protagonists hate each other and then fight each other. This will make it interesting. Also, there are too few female protagonists. As a villain, you have to have a female protagonist for every male protagonist, right? In addition, there are some lucky female characters, which are indispensable. And the most important point! This is the character of a clear organization, what kind of character he is. Don't do anything. Don't look at the disgusting ones in the back. Don't show up. Then if the protagonist wants to be stronger, the heroine will subdue her. Don't hang on us all the time. The heroine's point is not to be a vase. Everyone should be strong enough to be able to stand alone. That's about it. Come on, I still rely on you [Chigua]

Come on, author, it's just a little lacking.

I don't know how to classify it as low, but the book is a good book, and the villain novel is relatively good. My life script category and the Gou Shi Golden List category are all integrated into it, but the logic is clear and not obtrusive, and the setting of the protagonist's time travel is also very interesting. It is indeed good, but it is a bit awkward. I will give it five stars to express my gratitude. Finally, I hope his father will arrange for him to go to hell as soon as possible. Ahem, everyone knows who to arrange. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you [Laughing evilly] Hurry up and update. Even the production team members don't dare to delay like this.

I think it's super pretty

It's great. It's been 2 days. It's coming out soon. Has the book been taken off the shelves? The author, come out quickly and say something [cry][cry]

I haven't read the book yet, but I read everyone's comments. Some said it was good and some said it was bad. The level of fantasy nowadays is not uniform, and my hobbies in reading are also very different. Personally, I prefer fantasy with sincere feelings, and some also like harem novels.

Very good, I finally saw a villain who is not a post-official. It's not easy.

Why another demonic body? Is it because the chaotic body doesn't smell good? Trouble as hell. The combination of his personality and his physique feels weird. One has a demonic body, the other has fluttering white clothes, and their personalities are not two-faced. Not suitable. I dismissed it. Can't we create a chaotic body? [Pouts].

Come on, update quickly. There are basically no good-looking scripts now. One of them was reported last week. Bother

I think it looks great

It's pretty. Come on.

I always feel like I'm fighting between elementary school students [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Is it an illusion?

Finished reading, it's okay

Looks okay, give it five stars

Why the hell is it 6.6? Obviously so beautiful

Do you know what it feels like to finally find a good book, only to lose it as soon as you look at it? It hurts, it hurts so much! Ah

This book is good, but a little lacking.

Personally, I think it's a pretty good villain story.

Five stars. I don't know why the rating is so low, but this book is well written. It may be an error in the Tomato rating or a malicious negative review. There are mostly five-star reviews in the comment area. Why is the rating so low? Come on, author, don't give up. It would be great if the update is faster.

Not bad, not bad. He is decisive in killing. Pig's Foot is still a master and a disciple. His apprentice is also a master and a disciple. He kills the original protagonist when he is in love with him. Now he has planted a slave mark. Anyway, the protagonist is the demon body of the era. He has a companion great magical power, the Dao Heart Demon Technique, and controls him directly.

One of the best books I have ever read and one of the best books I have ever read

It's so beautiful. Where did this incredible baby come from?

Author, please continue to write. It's really good. Come on, come on, work hard, come on, come on

It's pretty cool, come on!

Come on come on come on come on