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I think it's very well written, great! Very nice!

This is another new star in Harry Potter fan fiction It will definitely be on the recommendation list with the qualifications to succeed, and will be commented and loved by others. And I will write on it my pen and ink

The content of the book is very good, the writing style is also good, and the subject matter is different from other HP books, fresh and refined (?). The character design of the protagonist is also very interesting (I feel like a person with a lower IQ will be sold and help him count the money). The characters in the book are very consistent with the original work (no OOC). I have read so many fanfics and they are the most consistent (don't argue, you are right), but However, it depicts the characters in the original work in a very full and rich way, unlike some fan fiction that just makes a fool of themselves (it is not meant to be specific to any book!!!). It directly transfers passages from the original work. In this book, everyone has their own unique story. The protagonist is not the cliched image of being invincible, but he is not weak either. He has his own growth path, and he is not the kind of love-minded who concentrates on his career, has no women in his heart, and is a god of nature who draws swords (?). Although there are indeed two female protagonists (it seems to be two), but the role is the same as that of NPCs, and they are almost just for giving experience |･ω･｀). It has its own personal setting but it is not too outrageous and does not look like a "fanfic". The author has his own ideas to write this book. This is the best thing in my opinion. It will not get stuck by the original work, but it will not deviate too much from the original work. The last and most important point: Go ahead and update the book. You actually have time to read the book reviews. As long as you can't code S, just add S! ╰（‵□′）╯

Although I haven't read many fanfics, this one is really good-looking. It appeals to me in every aspect. It's really to my liking. Please update it! I will see this book until the end! ! !

I think this book is very good, thank you to the author

It looks good, I like it! The author should be more confident

Not bad ↖(^ω^)↗. Let me see!

It's very interesting, but the author went to meet Merlin.

Among the Harry Potter fanfics, this is the only one I've seen that doesn't break down. For me, who has read both the Chinese and English versions of the Harry Potter series, it deserves 5 stars⭐.

It's really good. It's a high-quality product in HP. Don't be fooled... The author was killed for not updating. The death was tragic. Not only were his hands and feet cut off, but he was also hit by more than thirty bullets. Not even a god could save him. This is what happens if you don't update! So I want to correct this bad trend, and I want everyone to know that the author does not update! Renew or die, that's the hard question?

Really good, yes, be more confident

Great, the style I like

Five-star negative review, it's so beautiful! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It looks good, but it's cold.

It's pretty, but a little short

Hey, is there a possibility? I said it is possible. Is it because the author has not updated for so long? Author! Wake up!

The author hurry up and update [crying] I am short of books [crying] I can only live by reading your books

The author has worked really hard to type so many words every day! (Don't interrupt, you won't go see Merlin!!!)

Not bad, come on, author, I'm optimistic about you. ~\(≧▽≦)/~

Come on, author, if you dare to change it, I will read it [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Come on, the author writes very well. I have read some Harry Potter fanfics and they are all too sharp. I hope the author can last a little longer.

I would like to ask, isn't the natural magic developed by the male protagonist elemental magic? Are there elements in the Harry Potter worldview? But overall it's still very good. I hope the author can write it down carefully or learn from the elemental magic next door.

It's pretty good. I'd like to ask, is there a book group?

No need to poke, no need to poke, no need to poke

Look, look, look, look

Very good, just a little short

Very good, but why?

The content of this book is wonderful.

Okay, okay, I didn't expect it, my brain circuit is very strange

Come on come on! Very nice