The Immortal Venerable Returns to the City

Is this the end? Why don't you tell me and make some arrangements? Your father hasn't been rescued yet, you're about to ascend, and you still can't break through a single restriction? Furthermore, there are a few things about the protagonist's personality that I don't like very much. Sometimes he is choked when he speaks, as he is his vassal. Also, he is soft-hearted when he sees his mother, which is very awkward and makes her appear to be a hindrance. All in all, I feel like I haven't finished writing it, and some things haven't been explained clearly. I hope there will be a second volume.

Very nice! Awesome!

Not bad, I can watch it

This tail is knotted a little too fast, right?

The ending is a bit sloppy