Demon Lord******

I'll give myself a five-star review first, although it's a bit shameless.

It's very interesting, and the author's writing is good. Especially the control of the male protagonist is very good. If the male protagonist's character is too strong, it will not be in line with the female protagonist's worldview. If the male protagonist is too girly, many people will definitely feel uncomfortable watching it. Another bright spot is that there is no system, because I really have had enough of this system text. My favorite heroine in the book is our Demon Lord Mu Jinxi. Maybe it's because of preconceptions. From the male protagonist's point of view, he is the male protagonist's first woman. Although the Queen and Wen Daoyun are also good, they always feel a little worse than the female protagonist. Next, I just hope that the protagonist will not have other women. The three women in the protagonist's current situation and the queen appear to be historical facts in a daze, and the other two are considered facts because the woman forcibly had sex with her. So the protagonist's flirtatious personality is not established yet. I just hope that the protagonist will stop provoking other women. To sum up, the overall impression of this book is still very good to me, except for a small digression in the middle. Come on, author, I will keep chasing you.

Not as good looking as the previous one

The author writes very well, I came from a domineering sister. As for why the book's performance is not good, I think it's mainly because of the character of the male protagonist. Since this book mainly focuses on male characters, the male protagonist should lead the plot. However, if you look closely at this book, you will find that women are leading the plot. Whether the male protagonist is captured, goes to war or even kidnapped, it is the female character who is driving the plot. The male protagonist will always passively accept it, rather than actively change it, so it will give readers a feeling of a female protagonist, not to mention that this is a novel about women. If the author still wants to write a novel about women, he might as well write a time-travel plot. Only in this way will the reader have a sense of involvement. If you are a female-dominated local and write male videos, it is really Zhu Bajie who looks in the mirror and is no longer a human being inside and out. This is not the first time I heard you say that female readers mistakenly thought it was a female channel [smile] In summary, the male protagonist's character is too weak and the female protagonist is too strong. It's okay for the male protagonist to be weak, but the male protagonist must play a role in promoting the plot. Emmm, the writing is good, I hope it can be better, and I look forward to your next book.

Five-star praise is given with both hands.

I hope the hero's cultivation level can be higher

The author writes very well, keep up the good work! The writing is delicate and the descriptions are fascinating. It's very good. Good luck, author!

Very nice, I highly recommend it to everyone

I feel like it's better to do double cleansing

Although I don't know other people's opinions, I think your writing is very good.

I don't know what other people think, but I think it's pretty good-looking, so five stars. The content is pretty good.

Very good, don't give up, if you're familiar with it, people will read it, take your time, come on author😘😘😉😉٩(*´◒`*)۶

This book is generally suitable for men's tastes, I think it is anyway. I've already said that I don't like seeing Mo Ru, but it's not like I didn't remind you →_→I won over those people.

Big cheers for the author

Good, the content is interesting

Personally, I think it's okay, just think of it as support for the previous book!

I don't understand why the score is so low. This book is really good.

It was good up to chapter 18, but it will always stop at chapter 18. I recommend you to read the first 18 chapters.

To be honest, I don't know what the author wants, whether this is a male channel or a female channel. I'm a fan of the heroine genre, but I really can't bear it, wearing the skin of a heroine and doing male stuff. Out of courtesy I decided to give it four stars. To be honest, it really makes me feel uncomfortable. After reading so many novels, this is the first time I see something like this. It's really unlucky [laughs] Goodbye, never see you again.

She's on par with Sister Su, come on

Very good. Please support the author.

Good luck to the author!

Big cheers for the author

I think it's very well written

It looks good, give it a good review

Really great book

Well, how should I put it, anyway, I like it

Author I... Like you... This novel [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's still very good. Keep going.

It's a very good book. Some female book lovers may feel bad after reading it. You have to think about it, this book is about men's videos [grievance]