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Dude, you are very good. You are the first author I have urged to update. To be honest, your writing is very good, so you understand what I mean.

Not bad, not bad. It's been a long time since I've had a good Naruto article. It's one of the few excellent articles. I hope I can write it down and avoid any hydrological phenomena. Personally, I think three or four heroines are enough. If there aren't too many, one won't look very good (all are just personal opinions, so please don't criticize me).

I have been following it until now, and I would like to express my evaluation of this book intuitively. The plot advancement of the main line is really great. The character of Deidara and the characteristics of the characters in other books really fit the original work. It really gave me the feeling of watching fan fiction, "wonderful stories brought by different characters in the same world." To a certain extent, because I have read too many harem novels [face covering], I have some thoughts in my heart that I hope the protagonist can have a harem or have two female protagonists. The current feeling is that it can be called a breath of fresh air in fan fiction at this stage, without excessively changing the plot of the original work, and also presented me with a different perception of Naruto. I think this book deserves a 5-star rating

It's good to read. This is the best Naruto story I've read on Tomato for so long (personal feeling) (first of all, I personally like Deidara). Although the author's writing has some flaws, overall it's good and worth reading. To be honest, I'm a little bit reluctant to leave it. The book is finished, and I still feel a little uncomfortable. Maybe it's my personal reasons. After all, I can't continue writing. There's really nothing to write about, but I just couldn't help it, I couldn't help but want to read it again. Hey, I can only say that Deidara in the author's great writing has won my heart. I really like this Deidara, and the regrets in Naruto have more or less made up for it. It's also very good. I recommend reading it (it's my first time to write such a long review). I personally feel very good. It leaves traces to prove that I have been here. Hehe

Although there are flaws, there are many advantages. It is difficult to find books that use brains to fight in the world of Shuangwen. The portrayal of Xiaodi is also relatively restored. The protagonist's IQ is online and his three views are upright. There is no background for other characters. I hope it won't be unfinished with five stars. Come on.

Very very very beautiful! Also, can you remove the leg shadow? [Laughing evilly] Of course it's towards the end.

Later in the movie, Madara doesn't have a big role, but the art of that line is "explosive drinking". This is the excitement engraved in the DNA. The only regret is that there is no black soil behind. Overall, it's pretty good. Since there are few people writing about it and book sources are in short supply, I highly recommend it. The five-star rating is well deserved.

Surprisingly good fanfic Maybe it's because the main character is Xiao Di, so its popularity is a bit ridiculous. But the plot is actually very good. Xiao Gaoguang's fandom is relatively small in daily life. Basically, they are fighting and exploding the whole time~ But the ending was a bit sloppy. The final boss was solved by an unexpected person, and the way it was solved was very novel. He was killed by a pure explosion without using the power of any bloodline (ﾟ⊿ﾟ)ﾂ It's not so much time travel as it is that the original Xiao Di knows what will happen in the future. So there is no obvious sense of fragmentation like other fanfics.

Tomato is a rare book about Xiao Di, I like Explosive Boy [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

My favorite thing in this book is the Akatsuki members. I feel like the characters are not broken. When I hear some parts, I have pictures in my mind. The Akatsuki members are really cute (very loud [crazy])

Deidara is my favorite among the Hokages. Come on, the author, the writing is great.

It's a very interesting book. The first part is very good, but the second part is relatively poor. The rhythm is not well grasped, but it is readable and not too outrageous. The author may not be able to control it, or maybe something happened, so he ended it in a hurry. Many of the characters in the original book have no roles, so I'm looking forward to the next one.

The quality is very good, consistent with the seller's description. The children love to eat it. Three children are very satisfied with it. One of them has taken off the orange color and is more white. After washing, the hair is very smooth and not oily. The screen is clear and runs smoothly. It is stress-free for sensitive skin. The grip is comfortable and does not hurt the gums. I will put a few books every time I cook. I am very satisfied with my purchase. It is exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeded my expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with this purchase.

Not bad, really good-looking, money support

This book is highly recommended. I have been looking for something about Deidara before, so I fell in love with this book. The plot is reasonable, the combat power is not particularly broken, and it is also very interesting. The only drawback is that two chapters a day are not enough for me to read for ten minutes.

The plot is great, and the fighting scenes are absolutely wonderful. Even the heroine Kurotsuchi has no role, and Konan's character is a bit broken. This is a wonderful fanfic, especially in the aspect of fighting.

The author writes well, keep up the good work and strive to update code words every night, lovely code word Ji★ But as expected, handing over Konoha to Danzo will only make Konoha more rotten. Everything is Toki's fault, everything is Danzo's fault!

Especially nice, IQ is online throughout the whole process, consistent with the original plot characters

Deidara is very satisfied with this book! The plot is also very exciting! It makes up for my resentment of seeing Deidara being forcedly used as a stepping stone by Sasuke in the original film. Art is an explosion! Xiaodi is so cute [laughs]

Although the ending is a bit sudden, the setting of this world view is very novel, and it takes it to a new level based on the original plot of Naruto, which is very good. The development is light in the early stage, but the world view and plot are highlighted in the later stage. It can be said to be a role model for Naruto fan fiction. The author is awesome and does not limit the rigidity of the original plot.

Yes, except for a few typos, the plot is still okay, at least it doesn't feel boring and is quite interesting. It's good-looking, although there are very few, but the quality is quite good. It's better to change the ending of a good book, although it's a pity that there are relatively few, but dragging it out will only make it more annoying. It's just that the ending was a little sloppy.

This is the best Naruto story I have ever read. The protagonist unexpectedly turns out to be Deidara. The overall plot is light and interesting, the characterization is also very complete, there are no embarrassing plots, and there are many interesting jokes, such as: This is all for Konoha. It also fulfilled my little wish of watching Akatsuki fight in a team fight. Moreover, the final enemy is also unexpected, and the ending is also very beautiful. All in all, the writing is very good and must be five stars!

It's also very beautiful. I would call it the pinnacle of Naruto fandom.

This book is really good. It is really interesting and funny, and the ending is not bad. It is just a bit too perfunctory, and the number of words is too few. What a pity. It is not enough to read, and it will be gone after reading it for a few hours. In addition, One Piece is a good book about a navy that likes manslaughter. It is similar to this one and has over a million words. I used to not like reading books with less than 100 words, but now this book has changed my mind a bit.

It's really good-looking, and the daily life is very interesting. The characteristics of the characters are basically consistent with the original work. It's the best-looking Naruto fanfic I've ever seen. It's just that the ending is a little disappointing, but it doesn't have much impact [Chigua]

Personally, there is no OOC. If you need to look carefully, you can think of Xiaodi as a smart and understanding capitalist. For me, it is quite a pity that it ended so quickly, but I probably won't be able to write anything later. This is the best novel about Xiao Di. I personally recommend it, but very few people write about Xiao Di. Most of those who do write about Xiao Di are OOC, so for me, it is a masterpiece among Xiao Di's novels. This is also the first time I have written a review with so many words. I'll just leave it as a thought and come back later.

It's really good-looking and to my liking, but I don't quite agree with the fact that the heroine is not a scorpion [smile][smile][smile]

It was so well written and I enjoyed reading it. Just a little less

The author's writing style is very good. After reading one article, I can't help but read the next one. I highly recommend it. 1. There is a lot of fighting content in it, the descriptions are vivid and detailed, and it is quite passionate. There are more powerful enemies behind, such as: gods (evil god, god of death, etc.). There are also emotional lines, and some plots are quite funny. 2. The protagonist will not be too invincible. Although there is a system, certain conditions are required to unlock things. The system is only a auxiliary function and is dispensable (personal evaluation) 3. It feels like there is no CP, but there is still a bit of ambiguity with Kurotsuchi. 4. The protagonist has an online IQ, he is very smart, and occasionally a little bit wicked. The late six levels of strength. 5. The creation is novel and the plot is attractive.

I like this book very much. Akatsuki is cute. Old man Kakuzu uses all the money he earns to buy explosive charms. It feels very cute and feels like home. Scorpion is the same. Deidara is also very cute. I like it very much. I didn't think about Xiaodi before. Now after reading it, he is quite cute.