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The logic is very well written, and overall it is very good. The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too few, please keep up the good work!

He has characteristics, a distinct personality, is not a stallion, and has his own set of opinions on the things in the book. The plot foreshadowing should be strengthened, and the characters' inner monologues should be more prominent. The inner monologue of the character who speaks a thousand words on the road from ordinary people to extraordinary people should be more obvious.

Give me five stars for encouragement. There are some problems. For example, the character development of Lu Wushuang at the beginning is a bit deliberate. But the impact is not big, and the back is still pretty good-looking. Also, the author is updating it soon, and the more I read, the more interested I am.

This is a quite interesting novel.

It's a wonderful book, and the protagonist's pursuit is also very pure and polite, neither a harem nor a stud. Like this book very much.

It's so good. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time.

Not bad ~ a very good book of martial arts ~ I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs ~

This book is good and worth reading. Although it has slight flaws, they are not outweighed by the flaws. No one is perfect, let alone a book. As long as you are happy when reading the book, that is enough! What do you think? ✌︎( ᐛ )✌︎

It deserves five stars. The protagonist has the demeanor of a strong man, is refreshing and not embarrassing, and is a bit indifferent in the handling of emotions. It is human nature for beauties to love heroes, so there is no need to be too taboo. You can have a few female protagonists, as long as you don't have any brains.

Very good, very good. I hope the author will add more chapters. I am looking forward to it. I feel a little wet. I just grabbed the sword and it's over. Where did this nonsense come from? I feel like I'm trying to make up for it. ("Passenger" traveling through a certain world)

Come on! The writing is quite good, don't be a eunuch [like][like]

Lear tore off the oil paper and handed a few pastries to Zeng Jing. This famous female killer, inspired by the eminent monk, has lost all her anger and is about to start a new life. The first two people she came into contact with after retiring were the enthusiastic Aunt Cai and the gentle Mr. Li in front of her. Looking at the young master in front of her, Zeng Jing couldn't help but smile, nodded, gently picked up a piece of pastry and put it into her mouth. "This pastry is soft in the mouth and fragrant. Mr. Li has great taste." "My name is Lear. I live next door. If Miss Jing needs help, you might as well come and find me." Lear smiled and turned to leave the yard. When he crosses the heavens and strives for supremacy, he may be able to reverse time and space and come back to fetch Zeng Jing again. In the distance, where the sea and the sky meet, there is a brilliant glow. A simple and heavy stone door opened, exuding the atmosphere of timeless vicissitudes. This door seems to have existed for a hundred thousand years, or millions, or tens of millions of years. There was a suction force coming from the stone door, and Lear's body flew up uncontrollably and threw himself towards the stone door. Zeng Jing had tears on her cheeks. She smiled and waved to Lear, "Mr., I can't be with you, you must take care of yourself, you know? You must take care of yourself. It's cold, so you have to put on more clothes..." Lear's figure fell into the stone gate, the glow disappeared, and the sky became calm again!

This book is not bad, it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the protagonist's character is relatively peaceful most of the time. He is not aggressive or mindless in causing trouble. The dialogue between the protagonist and Song Que does have the tone of a master. I have my own ideas, although sometimes they are a little contradictory, but it doesn't hurt. Some of the plot has changed, while others haven't changed much. It's basically a semi-invincible novel. Overall it's pretty good. The shortcomings are also quite obvious. The biggest criticism of this article is that it targets women. You could call it a harem novel. The protagonist doesn't just fall in love with each one and keep them all. You could say it's a pure love story with a single heroine. There are three of them. This is not very good, because harem stories naturally have fan groups who like to watch harems, and fans of single-female protagonists also have fan groups of single-female protagonists. If you waver like this, you may dissuade those who like to watch harems and those who like to watch single-female protagonists. This will not be lovable. But, for someone like me who doesn't care, it doesn't matter. However, giving Little Dragon Girl Zeng Jing a sword is really a poisonous point, so everyone rationally skipped it [laughing and crying]. Furthermore, in this novel, I can't actually take on the role of the protagonist, but it all depends on preference. To sum up, this book has some poisonous points, but not that much. It is not a pure novel, but it does not have too many frustrating plots. It is like telling a person's life. You and I watch the protagonist grow up from the perspective of spectators.

@ Pig, "Peacock Feathers", "Qin Shi Mingyue", "The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty", "Wind and Cloud Dominate the World" Tathagata the Great Sun, Half God, Bu Bai Suzhen, the Immortal God, "Legend of the Son of Heaven", "Mysterious Soldiers", "Three Swords Romance", "Thunderbolt Puppet Show", "Water Moon Cave Sky",

Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty and Fengyun are my favorite martial arts. I hope the author will write a good result. "Devil Sword: Life and Death" is well written. When I watched the TV series, I liked Yam Qianxing better, but Yan Zangfeng was more average. It was too holy. Ren Qianxing behaves like a hegemon, has the ambition to dominate the world, and has the power to end troubled times. It's okay, but I really like One Sword to Separate Worlds and Four Symbols of Heaven's Will. Why is it that the more I read Jian Yu, the more I feel [face covering] that I don't know how to write details, so I shouldn't write them. Just grab the opportunity or just go all the way based on your ideals. What does Dou Po write about? Apart from anything else, wouldn't Xiao Yan from Douban Hou pass your soul to check the coordinates of the earth? That list equivalent to Hedao can't find you? Inexplicably, after Sword Rain, many people jumped to watch it! Either a stallion, a Weiyi, or the way of heaven is too ruthless! Where is the male protagonist Jian Yu's wife?

I'll give it five stars. There are some things worth complaining about in the middle, but Tomato's other cool articles have more places to complain about. It's hard to find such a book that looks cool. It's just that we don't receive enough beauties. The protagonist himself is not a saint and a gentleman. What he wants to do after he has the strength is up to his personal preference. There is no need to explain any big principles. The cool article only needs to focus on one point: I am strong. Who do I want to help, who do I want to give, and who do I want to beat and kill? It all depends on my mood. Otherwise, why should I work hard to improve my strength? It's not just for my own comfort, I can do whatever I want

Thirteen year old bookworm! Readable, not bad, a bit short! There's so much to read!

There are very few time-travel martial arts novels like this. Come on, author! Why is it getting worse and worse! It's not as good as when I first watched it. The writing becomes more and more sensational later on. Why, it's time to change it to a romantic drama.

Ah, I read this novel really well, it's not a mindless harem novel. Although there are many confidantes. It's not a systematic novel either. The protagonist's strength also rises step by step, and there's no such thing as an abusive master. The protagonist can be considered a little master every time he goes to a world. Although it cannot be said that he is invincible in that world, he is more than enough to protect himself. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. To be honest, there are very few novels I can finish reading on Tomato. This novel really took me a while and I read it in one sitting. I hope the author will update it well. I will keep it and look at it when there are more updates. Of course, everyone should see for themselves. As the saying goes, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. When I say it looks great, it only represents my personal opinion. But I have also been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I think this book is still good.

It is a good book, both the early and middle stages are very good. It was the later stages that almost made me watch it, and the ending was so unsatisfactory. Overall, the storyline is smooth, clear and concise. I like this. Also, there isn't much harem drama, but it doesn't lack the emotional side. Good. There are no so-called slaps in the face, which is good. The most dissatisfying part is that you are clearly a time traveler but you don't know the plot. Don't know at all. I can't understand the author's big brain. Looking forward to the author's next good book.

Zhutianliu, write about Yang Xiangxiang, Shopkeeper Zhou, Lanbaishe, Jiang Wuxian, Gu Shaoshang, Li Zhushen, Gulongfu, Huang Wangu, Ye Zhetian, Chen Taishang, Wang Yuanshi, Li Tongtian. These popular characters! It will probably be very exciting.

The writing style of this book is quite good, but the emotional debt needs to be repaid. In the future, the protagonist will travel through more worlds and have more feelings together. I hope that in the future, the protagonist will repay all the love debts and reunite with the heroines.

The Rain of Swords episode is quite good and has a bit of a poignant feel. It feels like the main character's story has ended here. The heroine is courting her but cannot get it. It reminds me of Yan Ruyu in The Fox Demon.

If you count 50 words in one minute, that's 3,000 words in one hour! 24 Hours a day! Give you two hours to eat, sleep and play beans! That's 66,000 words in one day! So if you're not dead, please update as soon as possible! Don't let big brother rush you!

The writing is mellow, the plot caters to the needs, and it is appropriate. You can watch it and follow it. The ratings are finally up. A book like this shouldn't be buried, but the author is too short [laughing]

It's super good. Zhutian should not follow the plot. There are more than a dozen novels put together to follow the plot. I have found so many Tomato novels and this is the only Zhutian I can read. I can't read the others. There are many Zhutianliu novels that are quite interesting, but I can't read Tomato.

Yes, there are clear levels of time and space from low to high. The only pity is that there is a saint level written above Da Luo. You should also add a Xuanhuang time and space, because Xuanhuang Qi is also a high-level energy, comparable to the existence of Hongmeng Purple Qi! This is the path that does not require the Hongmeng Purple Qi to ascend to the Holy Throne in order to reach the path of enlightenment and thereby stretch the path of sword climbing. . .

The protagonist is growing up, but the changes are indeed great, and there is still a familiar feeling. I hope the author will not stop updating and will not enter the palace. I still want to support the author here [Like] [Please update]

It's beautiful and exciting. It's rare to see a book like this. I hope the author won't stop updating. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is very good, and the author is also talented, but should the number of words be a little less? I hope the author will update it quickly!