Prehistoric*****

I'm a newbie reading this book, so I hope you readers will bear with me! Thanks! Let me tell everyone that this book is a prehistoric novel, but some settings have been modified by me! Similarly, some characters, settings, plots, etc. Will be different from what you have seen before. After all, everyone's mind is different! I hope everyone can look at this book from another perspective! In addition, I also know that my writing skills are not very good, and my writing may make some people dissatisfied. However, reading novels is everyone's freedom, and speech is also everyone's freedom. Although I have no right to interfere, if there are particularly excessive remarks, I will delete them, or delete them after reporting them! If you don't like it, I hope we can get together and part ways! Don't do something that's not so good! Thank you all! I would also like to thank those friends who support my book here. Thank you and wish you good health, all the best, all your wishes come true, and a smooth journey! [Smile][smile][smile]

I feel like the author writes very carefully, and it's like Hei Yuanshi every time. It's the first time I've seen something like this. I'm very happy and support you.

This book is very good. I don't know why some people say that becoming a saint of heaven is very poisonous. The key is that the protagonist does not have a golden finger, and there is a reason for the protagonist to become a saint of heaven. After all, Pangu is not dead yet, but he is injured and recuperating. If you want to get better quickly, what better reason can you do than swallowing the three pure things? Those who say that becoming a saint of heaven has no golden finger or system if you travel through the prehistoric times. If you can cultivate into a golden immortal, you will be happy. After all, you can live forever. Jiushi, if you have bad luck and bad feet, it would be good enough if you can cultivate and become an immortal. Moreover, why is the author's rating of this book so low? Only 16 of the more than 50 people who participated in the rating posted comments. Counting me, there were only 17, and the rest Is this a negative review? There is nothing bad about this book, and the protagonist is dedicated to cultivating Taoism. Isn't it much better than those books that accept Hou Tu Nuwa and other goddesses? The three Qing Dynasties are not separated and seem to be very harmonious. There is also brotherly love.

The writing is very much like an autobiography from the beginning of time. It does not have the sense of autonomy like a time-travel novel. The plot is very smooth and has little ups and downs, which is relatively dull. The protagonist is also on a very steady path. Majoring in the Avenue of Destiny is a slight change. There is a sense of conspiracy that Hongjun and Sanqing jointly guard against Pangu's resurrection. It may be Hongjun's trick to split the Sanqing to prevent Pangu, or it may be that I am Pangu's back-up man. After all, Linglong Tower and Yiqihua Sanqing cannot explain clearly. In the Yuanshi of the Great Desolate Current, I still hope that there will be more changes and more opinions of my own. We should not always practice in seclusion with the Sanqing Dynasty. For example, the ranking of the Twelve Golden Immortals of Chanjiao can be changed, or simply not accepted. After all, among them, Yuding Taiyi Yunneutron is still okay. Forget the others, bullshit moral immortals, and apostates. Looking forward to the follow-up

Come on ＾0＾~, it's been a long time since I've come across this kind of ancient writing method. The system sign-in ones are also good-looking, but there are too many white texts that are mindless. Hope it stays that way. Another thing is that I hope you have a clear idea of ​​the plot of Fengshen before taking action. Many Honghuangliu novels failed to write Fengshen and then failed. Too many "Apotheses" are stories between disciples and disciples, which require third and fourth persons to write. It is easy for the protagonist to disappear. So I read a lot of books that were very good at the beginning, but abandoned them as soon as I got to The Gods.

Better than most prehistoric novels, it is a very orthodox prehistoric novel. It is not the funny type, and it handles human relations and sophistication well. It just depends on how it develops later. I have a suggestion for the author. If you want to write about a female protagonist, you must not be in a hurry. Write the plot and atmosphere slowly, and do not give too many scenes to the female protagonist to drag out the plot. Too many novels fail because of the female protagonist. Good writing is rare.

I have an idea. Aren't the backbones of Mahayana Buddhism like Ran Deng all on the protagonist's side? If we find an opportunity later, we can tell them that there is a way to get them one step closer to becoming the first person under the saints, and there is also the truth that Buddha is originally within the Tao. We can fool them into establishing Buddhism. This can better differentiate their Western teaching fortunes, and the relationship will not become tense. Under the law of heaven, the general trend cannot be changed, but the small trend can be changed. This does not count as changing the general trend. Buddhism has come out the same way, and people are the same people. They just have a good relationship with the protagonists [laughter]

I finally finished reading this book. It's really exciting. I read too many system texts before, but now I suddenly stop reading them. It still feels very fresh. I've read so many ancient novels, and it's the first time I read Yuanshi. It's even more refreshing. Plus, the author's writing is also good. You really want to read it. Author, if you want to update twice a day, I have to consider whether to save up for a few weeks. It's really unreasonable to update once a day. Forget about other reasons, you have opened a new book, which leads to one update a day. I don't understand. You open a new book. This book is also updated twice a day, or several times a day. It doesn't matter. The two updates a day were originally less, but now it is updated once a day. Just start it?

This book is one of the few that is not negative about Yuanshi It's very interesting, but the update is a bit slow. I don't want to see a list of gods. If there is, then it will be a list of Western religions.

This is good, it must be five stars Chengtian Dao Sage retired, a bit poisonous

It is a very good prehistoric novel. It does not deliberately smear the Second Saint of the West. Although the Second Saint of the West is not shameless, it is really good for the western land and all living beings in the west. It can be said that before becoming a saint, he has been running for the western land. The protagonist is also well portrayed and the three pure beings are well written. Overall, this is a very good prehistoric novel that I have seen so far.

To be honest, I usually read Honghuangliu novels, and I don't care whether they are bad or bad about Yuanshi, but I'm really annoyed by those who brag about Tongtian and Jie Jiao. This book is not bad. It directly points out the character issues that Jie Jiao needs to pay attention to, without making nonsense of the so-called "there is no distinction between education"

Come on, author, the writing is very good. The protagonist does not have a big plot, nor does he have a harem. Moreover, the protagonist's cultivation level increases little by little, unlike other prehistoric novels where he becomes a quasi-sage or a hunyuan all of a sudden. I also have a good relationship with Taiqing and Shangqing, I like them very much.ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧Come on [Please update]

The setting of the author's book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air. It does not criticize Hongjun or the Two Saints of the West. Instead, it looks at the relationship between Sanqing and Pangu from another angle. The concept is unique and the writing is good. It deserves five stars.

The writing is quite good, but for those who have read and know Honghuang very well, it is still a little tiring to read. I have written the reasons in the comment area, but this book is indeed good, as long as there are no problems in the later stage. How should I put it? This book feels more like a true retelling of the ancient times rather than fan fiction.

I hope the author will stick to it [smile]

Overall, I'm quite satisfied with this book, but the ending is a bit hasty, and there are some holes that haven't been filled in. But compared to other invincible system sign-in flows, this book is much better.

It's very good, not too hung-up, steady, and I can see that my cultivation is achieved step by step, which gives me a sense of accomplishment. It's not like other novels that look awesome in the early stages, but then turn around in the world of martial arts in the later stages.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an ancient prehistoric novel. This is one of the best prehistoric novels I've seen so far. The logic is very clear and well-founded. This state of mind is very well written.

This book must be five stars

I'll take care of it first. The author can write quickly. Great! !

Unsystematic prehistoric writing is just beautiful.

The author writes well, keep up the good work and work hard! The more I read, the more interesting it becomes. The author should update it soon! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Very good, keep up the good work

I hope there will be more episodes every day, instead of just one or two episodes a day like other novels.

It's very well written, I like this very much. I hope the author will continue to update.

Very well written, thank you to the author.

It's so exciting, I love this type of traditional prehistoric literature the most!

Now it's very good, very good. Other books are all about Yuanshi, but Yuanshi is the protagonist in this book.

Well written, super exciting!